IPKKND:Closing The Loops * Thread 2 Pg 144 * - Page 47

AMAZING STORIES...JST LOVE THEM ALL...ALL OF THEM R LIKE I HAD THOUGHT OF THEM TO BE:::::HOPE U'LL UPDATE MORE OF THEM ;)

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Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS

Hum aa gaye!

LOL, now that was a loop I really hadn't thought of!

I liked how you made Arnav do all these things to her, fits right in with the challenges that always simmered in the air between them!

Calling her endearments and disrupting her sleep to um...talk, sexy stuff there!

I could just imagine Khushi's face as it turned 50 shades of red, and his smirk as he saw the effect he was having on her.

And the family catches on too, hilarious!

I loved that note at the end, where she finds out what's really been going on.

This was a fun read, Ridz, and I can't believe how effortlessly you manage to do that while tying up all kinds of loops as well!

P.S: I can't remember anything else from Khushi's list, I think you've got them all.

Haha. I stumped you? So many people had requested it though! I am surprised by how many people said they didn't see it as a loop! But glad you enjoyed the...ahem, sexy talk and stuff. LOL!

Arnav could be quite naughty when he wants to be, re Pre Payash wedding. Wanted to give you all a respite from the heavy sadness that the last update brought.

Back to sadness now though, what I am better at. LOL!

Thanks J! You are too kind to me! 🤗

Originally posted by: Chipmunks.

LOL, this was something really unexpected.
Oh boy, Arnav really did all that? I could imagine Khushi being all red. Way to go ASR. It was truely fun reading this one.

Thanks :) Unexpected, but good unexpected, right? ;)

Originally posted by: aarrsshhii

Haha...really liked that one...it was totally a fun read... really really enjoyed the playful side of arnav... way to go BM!!

Thanks! :) Glad you like it!

Originally posted by: crazy-ash

Hahaha!! This was fantastic!
And was amusing and funny and lovely!! 😆

i would like to suggest a loop closure...
Arnav in the show never really the brought the truth of their marriage in front of the whole family...he just told it to his di and nani...so i just wished if u would write out a perfect apology and make arnav accept his mistake in front of khushi's and his family, so that every one stop blaming khushi for everything!!

I hope u will think abt it...

Thanx for the happy reading moment!

Thanks for the comment!

That loop is in the list! Will definitely write that one! :)

Originally posted by: rulama

Loved the unexpected loop closure.

Never even thought that could be construed as one left open.

It was a fabulous one. Thanks for an extremely pleasant reading material.

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

Didn't recognize you as you changed dp! Was looking for your comment, lol!

Originally posted by: shree10

Liked it! Totally LG's way to get back!

Haha. Thanks :)

Originally posted by: arshina223

Lol .That was hillarious.
Arnav applied khushi's tricks on her. She was so pissed off.
She should suffocate him with the damn pillow. Lol.

It was ok till arnav used sweetheart and baby but Honey ! man i laughed so loud that my sister asked me what i was laughing at.

That was such a refreshing loop. Never thought of this.

wonderfully written dear as always.

Honey made you laugh? I was going to go with some other not so sweet nicknames, but was afraid she really would murder him, lol.

Thanks!

Originally posted by: anumadduri

Ridz that was such fun reading this loop :) And the dream she had in the beginning with Salman Khan dancing shirtless and Arnav feeding her jalebis was just priceless and classic Khushi :) Looks like its one of her fantasies :)

Arnav had the perfect revenge hain na !!! Wonderful !!!

LOL! I was LMAOing writing the dream!

Thank you! :)