IPKKND:Closing The Loops * Thread 2 Pg 144 * - Page 19

Originally posted by: Raila1014

Well I can still hear Rabba Vey after reading this. True confession, ASR style making the I Love You Dammit a perfect conclusion to that speech. Unlike the show where it felt like a horny Arnav who has been desperately trying to get in her pants would say this just because it will do the trick. This was from the heart and bas I love it dammit.

😆 IKR!?

The whole time, I was like, way to make a girl feel wanted, ass!

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: rulama

That was indeed a good one.

Liked it. Actually the story could have moved in a better way as you have written it!

Thanks :) Glad you think so.

Originally posted by: Krani

I just read the proposal and loved it!

I'll read the entire thread later and comment later, but it reminds me of the Drabble Central I had done a few months ago when IPKKND was annoying me *mentally glares at 4Lions*

But absolutely loved the Proposal, shall read through this later and comment! :D

~K

Hi K!

Thanks for the comment :) Glad you loved it! And yes, I don't know if I should thank 4Lions for turning me into a writer or be mad at them for the way they went about it ;)

Originally posted by: preethi28

I absolutely loved your confession. More than the fact that Arnav's I love you came during the suhaag raat argument, I hated it that the "so called redemption track" didn't even include a single reference of all that Khushi had to suffer.It wasn't even a redemption track to begin with! Arnav was just manipulating her to get her back to shantivan.
I loved it that Khushi stood upto Arnav once again.I am tired of all the times she voluntarily became a sacrificial lamb, hiding her hurt and pain to not cause pain to Arnav.
Your Khushi lashed out when things became too much to bear and reminded Arnav of all the hurtful words he had hurled at her.And for once he told her what he felt without holding anything back,not only during the contract marriage but ever since he met her.
You've done a brilliant job Ridz, again.
😊

Oh lordy! I know right? Such an ass! I wanted to make sure that he referred to the things he did even before the wedding when he really didn't have any reason to hate her so.

Khushi was, at times, way too submissive, yes. Even if her intentions were pure.

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: arshi21

Wow.

I really liked this confession..I always wanted him to state the reasons why he hated her so much..that he loved her..but he never said that on the show...and Khushi just understood his unspoken words.

Very sweet :)

Thanks :) But of course, Nafrat paas aane na de, mohobbat door jaane na de is the tagline.

Originally posted by: reshkn

beautiful confession...

he told her of all the moments he hated her ...how can some one hate him for this..!!!

even though not a closure..this definitely would have been a better replacement to the confession we got on screen...

Haha. We can all hate wala love him for this ;)

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: shree10

Ridz,
I would still call this a loop something which was not even started in the show!

I would have loved to see this on the show and thanks for writing it down. Maybe You should rename this series as closing the loop in Alternate Universe or sth like that!

So I suggest - Closing loopholes and fulfilling the wishlist what we would have loved to see!!

Haha. Fulfilling the wishlist. I love that! Thanks :)

Yeah, Juhi mentioned it that this would be a good six-month loop closure, I take back my AN! 😆

Originally posted by: emistry

This was a nice one! At Least she did not do any bahana to try the leave the house, she told his straight up! I didn't like that in the show either!

Yeah, it was her right to leave at the end of six-months, it was him who had to make up a bahana to make her stay.

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: Samyxx

Awesome confessing...

I love the way you wrote it.

Thank you :)

I m hoping for an update today...
Its weeekkkeeennnddd...😃