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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Wow that was a wonderful and mind blowing way too close a loop, written beautifully.

The update was absolutely amazing and fantastic, from start to finish a brilliant read.

Wow, just wow. I loved Arnav's confession it was so amazing, intense, strong, powerful and definitely done in ASR mode.

Also I loved the fact he confessed just before she was going leave, perfect timing.

Awww khushi's response to the confession was so cute, I love you dammit.

Loved the update, eager to read more.

So can we expect the next loop to be closed "finally having there suhaagraat!!!

Continue soon please and thanks for the PM xx

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

oh that was a brilliant alternate, sometimes I wondered too, how he could never confess at the right time, the confession that cake on the makeshift pheras was too sudden, and too abrupt.

I like this version of his confession. good job

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

That was awesome! Loved it!

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: opsyellow
I like it very much dammit 😉.

It was beautiful confession! It was very much ASR style and Khushi style.

Haha. Thanks :) Yeah, his hate was always apparent, but not the reasons, same with the love.

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS
For me, this was a closure of a loop in one sense.
That six month marriage thing was handled so poorly in the show, thank you for setting things straight!

I absolutely loved the timing of this confession.
It felt natural, and their conversation made so much sense.

That hate speech was faraking genius!
I love how you went back to the beginning and listed everything he ever hated about her...nafrat-waala love forever!

And then she answers with her Hum bhi aapse...beautiful!

I think this was your best loop OS to date.

Which brings me to my next kostin, what's the next one going to be?
Can't wait to find out!

Awww, thanks Juhi. I didn't think of this one as a six-month loop closure, but you are right, even I like my version much much better than what happened ;)

The timing, and the situation, weren't what's right with the confession, you are right. I never analyzed it, just knew that I didn't like it much :)

The next one? Well, it's a toss between the one you suggested and the one Lovegood did. Let's see what my brain comes up with :)

<3

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: Semanti
Res (again)

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OHMYGOD RIDZ! I LAU YOU AND HATE YOU FOR BRINGING BACK THE IPK WALEIN PHEELZ AND THE 10 THINGS WALA CONFESSION!

What can I say? This was SUCH an important scene and the CV's made me so MAD with Arnav's high handedness AGAIN. JEEZUZ. And the SR business was more comical than intense (although ILYD and HBAILYD have entered my vocab permanently now). All I could do was crack jokes about Arnav's sexual frustration.
Thank you for taking away that and giving us a more meaningful confession and not a I-need-to-get-laid-NOW-wala confession.

Khushi's hurt was overlooked ALL the time and I'm so glad that Arnav recognized that fact. Not to mention, this was so much more realistic with the stock prices of AR in trouble and Arnav dealing with an angsty Di AND trying to woo Khushi.

Off to catch up with Loops 1 and 2!

(You have created Frankenstein's monster with the gifs)

Hahaha! Even Lovegood said the same thing...would you believe me if I said I never watched that movie? :S

LOL! His sexual tension, I know right! So freaking funny!

Thanks for thinking this is a good alternative, and about Khushi's hurt, that's something very important to me when I write. I thought maybe she said it back a little too quickly here too, but it's a OS, I have to make do.

LOL! Gif-away! I am loving it!

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: laksh65
nice os

Thank you :)

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sumond

@sumond

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

You did one thing much better then that the makers of the show handled so poorly. Thanks for your awesome writing. Thanks for the pm

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hakim218

@hakim218

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Thank you so much! Even months after the shows finished we all needed these closures. Such a shame they were not dealt with adequately on the show.
I particularly enjoyed reading the letters and his confession.
Your writing clearly reflects the characters that we all loved.

How about closing the loop on poor Shashi. He deserved justice more so than Anjali and personally I would of loved to have seen him get better and expose Shyam and dish out a few slaps!!

Please do continue to write.