Roots Of Rhythm--OS| Teri Bindiya Re Pg18

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claireDD

@claireDD

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

im glad that you guys decided to remain active even if the show went off air..
great idea rae and sona..looking forward to the journey...

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curiousbookworm

@curiousbookworm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Beyond amazing! Please do continue! And tell me Arnav did something meaningful during that one year!

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claireDD

@claireDD

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

woah..what an os to start with..
simply stupendous..i won't mind having a continuation dol..
its perfect !!!!!

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Shreya

@-MKB-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

hey sona and rae...

ok let me start...

first of all i loved this concept of yours...

roots of rhythm ...

yes there are songs sometimes which take you back to memories..some happy while some sad

and for writers they are the best inspiration to write...

so good job you girls..

rae honestly i have not read any of your work before..but now i will start..while i have read sona's work and you still have to update CW...:P

i loved her work..and i loved this work as well...

it was just beautiful..some how you are able to write about their feelings beautifully...

and sona do you have obsessions with army men or what? :P

even in this update arnav is a cadet...though him being an army person automatically adds more to her hotness...;)..so i dont mind arnav being a cadet or even a gangster...:P

yeah and the miranda college...my rival college...😆

but i just loved reading this work...

please write more you girls...

waiting to read rae's work now...

and i have sent you a buddy request...on your new account...kindly accept that thank you..

update soon...thanks for the PM..:)

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

dat was amazing..
thanxx for d pm.

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Sona and Rae thanks for brightening up our dreary days ... Looking forward to your writings ... love you both ...

That was so beautifully written Sona ...

Felt so nostalgic reading it ...

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Keenara

@Keenara

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Wow ..beautifully written 👏

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shai95

@shai95

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

goodness !!!
That was really beautiful !!!
Sona u are an amazing writerr !!!
I have heard a lot about u , but never got a chance to read ur work though . And today when i finally read ur OS , i was left enchanted . Now i know why people praise u so much .
And plz don't laugh when i say this , but i really had google in my side tab as i was reading the story , gosh !!! Your vocab , u use such heavy words , which i haven't heard in my lifetime . It gets really heavy for me and i had to read it thrice to take it in completely .
Are u a literature student ?
Anyways , about the story . Don't mind , but when i started reading the story , i developed an instant dislike for Arnav , as he was constantly staring (that too with , may be lust ) at the girls walking in the street . And i really detest these type of men , and i start hating a man if he belongs to this class ,even if he is the hero , may be u can can call me a feminist (to an extent) . Correct me if i misinterpreted . Even through the course of the entire story i didn't like him as i thought whatever they had was just physical attraction , atleast from Arnav's side .
It was at last that i realised that the attraction had developed into love , long time back .
I really thought for a moment , that may be , both of them had moved on , but thats where u created ur magic and showed the true love they had , which made them wait for each other and restricted them to be with anyone else .
Loved the story !!!
Keep writing !!!

Edited by shai95 - 12 years ago