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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice,great.bichari taani ka kitchen.
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW!! It was awesome update DIPU LUVED it ! Itna cute that seriously this SS is damn cute! Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum:):):) waiting 4 reyam 2 see in a kitchen.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wowww lov it. Reyam ne kitchen ki Kya halat banai hogi. Tani ka kitchen to Gaya aaj. Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asmamember

Very nice,great.bichari taani ka kitchen.



thanks dear...taani ke kitchen ko ab koi nahi bacha sakta ... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sara_Taarey22

WOW!! It was awesome update DIPU LUVED it ! Itna cute that seriously this SS is damn cute! Update soon



awww...thank u so much sara... 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
you all did a great job dears
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
So here is the last part...

(by me)

Taani:hey krishnaji mere kitchen ko bacha lena...

Sh:taani relax...kuch nahi hoga ...

In the kitchen:


Reyam look at each other...and then on the floor...

Rey:are yar ab kya kare...pura kitxhen kharab ho gaya...

Sw:aur hamare kapde bhi...

Rey:taani ye dekhegi to me to gaya...

Sw:me bhi yar...hamare ghr pe bhi tumhari shadi se pehle agar me thoda sa bhi kitchen kharab karta tha to taani to mera band baja deti thi...pata nahi tera kya hoga...

Rey:dara mat yar...wo aur naraz ho gayi to me kya karuga...wese bhi subah se naraz he...chal first of all hum kitchen saf karte hai...

Both clean the floor ...

Then sw:esa karte he pehle sabji banate hai...

Rey:ha ha chal esa hi karte hai...

Sw:rey zara ye pyaz kat dega plz...

Rey:ya sure...

After some time rey has tears in his eyes...
Sw:are rey tu ro kyu raha hai???

Rey:me ro nahi raha hu dude...ye pyaz(onion) ki vajah se...

Sw:ok ok...

Rey:ye le ho gaya...ab me veggies cut karta hu tab tak tu onion fry kar le...phir usme hum veggies add kar denge...

Swayam di as rey said...then he start talking with rey...

Rey is cutting veggies...they are talking and talking...

Rey:are yar kuch jalne ki bu nahi aa rahi tujhe????

Sw:ha yar par kaha se...oh shit...onion...

And swayam sees it...sab jal gaya ...

Sw:oh god ab kya karu...

Rey is still cutting veggies...are pen ko niche utar le...

Sw:ha ha...

Swayam hold the pen with his hands and his fingers burn...

And at the same time rey's finger cut...

Reyam:aaahhh...

In the room:

Shani heard the scream...

Shani:oh god...

Taani:ye log chhillaye kyu????

Sharon:chalo dekhte hai...

They goes in the kitchen...

Shani:kya hua????

Reyam:kuch nahi...(hiding their hands)

Shani:to tum log chillaye kyu...

Reyam:vo...vo...ha chuha tha isi liye...

Taani:rey hamare ghar me chuhe nahi he...sach boliye...

Taani saw the kitchen...

Taani:rey itna ganda kitchen kar diya...aap log khana bana rahe the ki kitchen me lad rahe the...sab kuch idhar udhar kar diya...

Shani notice that reyam are hidung something...

Shani:aap log kya chupa rahe ho...???

Reyam:kuch nahi...

Sh:(goes near swayam)swayam tum kya chupa rahe ho???

Taani:rey...aap bhi kuch chupa rahe ho...

Reyam:are kuch nahi hai...

Shani forcefully takes their hands...

Sh:swayam...ye to ...tun ma...dhayan se khana nahi bana sakte the????

Taani:rey...kitna khoon nikal raha hai...AAp na kuch bhi dhyan nahi rakhte...

Shani are scolding reyam...

Taani:bhabhi me first aid box leke aati hu...

Sh:ha jaldi...

Sh:rey swayam tum log bhi na...kya jarurat thi ye sab karne ki...chot lag gayi na...pehle hi bola tha...

Reyam are looking at each other...

Then taani come...

Taani:bhabhi kitchen to bahot fanda ho gaya hai...ye lo aap bandages and cotton or cream le lo aur bhai ko room me le jao...and bandaging kar do...

Sh:ha...chalo swayam. ...

Swaron goes to the room...

Here taani take rey in their room...

Taani:rey kya jarurat thi aap ko ye sab karne ki...

She is cleaning his wound and rey staring at her...so intensly...he is remembering the mora piya sequence...vohi pyar vohi dard use taani ke face pe aaj dikh raha tha...

Rey:taani its ok...jyada chot nahi lagi hai...look at me taani...

But taani doesnt look at him...

Here swaron:

Sharon is applying cream on swayam's finger...

Sh:swayam tum bhi na ...dhyan se kam nahi kar sakte the...jala liya na apna hath...

Sw:sorry sharon...

Sh:ab sorry bolne ki koi jarurat nahi hai...

Sw:nahi sharin jarurat hai and he take her face in his hands and he sees tear in her eyes...

Sw:sharon why r u crying????

Sh:swayam tumhe chot lagegi to kya mujhe dard nahi hoga????

Swayam gentely rub her tears and said:i know sharon...plz forgive me...aage se esa nahi higa...

Sh:promice????

Sw:pakka promise...he cup her face and kiss her forehead...

As swayam kiss her forhead sharin hug him tightly...and said...plz swayam aage se apna dhyan rakhna...me tumhe taklif ne nahi dekh sakti...i love u swayam...nahi dekh sakti me tumhe taklif me...

Swayam hug her back and said i love u too sharon...

Taarey:

Taani doesnt look at rey so rey made her to look at him and what he saw...he saw taani 's eyes are teary ...

Rey:taani why are u crying????plz stop crying???its hurting me...

Taani:(scolding)achha...me roti hu to aap ko hurt hota hai...tab nahi socha jab bina dekhe kam kar rahe the aur aoni ungli kat li...tab nahi socha aapne...aap ko mujhe rora dekh kar taklif hiti hai to kya mujhe aap ko dekh kar nahi ho rahi kya????

Rey:taani i m so sorry...plz mujhe maaf kardo...i know ki humne challenge to le liya tha par pura nahi kar paaye...

Taani:koi baat nahi rey wese bhi khana banana aap logo ka kam nahi he...again she start first aid...and when its done one drop of tear fall on rey's hand...

Rey see at taani...she is crying...

Rey took her face in his hand...

Rey:taani plz stop crying...

Taani put her hand on his hand...rey coming closer ...taani close her eyes...and rey kiss taani's tears...

Taani couldnt take it more and hugs rey tightly...and till she is crying...


Rey also hug her back...

Rey:bas taani...ab chup ho jao...

Taani stop crying and said ab chaliye hall me chalte hai...bhai bhabhi bhi aa gaye hoge...

Rey:ha chalo...

They reach in the hall but swaron was not there...

Taani said :rey aap yaha betho me kitchen saf kar ke aati hu...

Taani is going but rey grab her and made her to sit beside him...

Rey:taani betho na...kitchen bad me bhi saf ho sakta hai...

Till than swaron come...

Sw:ha taani baad me bhi ho sakta hai...

Taani:ok bhai...

All sit there ...

Rey:are chalo hum hotel me lunch ke liye chalte hai...

Sw:ha great idea...taani sharon tum log kya kehte ho...

Shani:ha chalo...

And they all goes ...because reyam want to give their wives a holiday from the house work...



THE END

Hope u all like it...
Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnk u...it was really cute... 😉 atleast sum1 updated...weekends r difficult 2 pas widout taarey n den r weekends widout taarey start early wid fridays 😭

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