ArHi FF: Finding Solace# 2 *Completed* - Page 51

How can u write?? HOPE U LIKE IT?? Like it?? Absolutely loved it.. Poor Arnav...!!!
N what about the creepwa?? Woh haath dhoke kyu piche pada hai?

I found this story only a couple chapters ago, and I'm starting commenting this chapter onwards, pakka I'll regularly comment now because you are so so sooo good. This last chapter was fantastic, absolutely fantastic. The whole scene where khushi is thinking to herself how she wants arnav to understand her action and then sensibly react to it in her favour, that was marvellous.

please do pm me if possible

love
sonia

Originally posted by: vgedin

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Saiyu, I hope you are feeling better now. But I will tell you this, all that sneezing did not hamper the quality of your writing in any way :)

Khushi, she is like her Devi Maiyya - she tests her devotees before she grants them their wish. If they choose to cross they line, she will allow them that choice but they will later face the wrath of a disappointed Devi Maiyya.

But then Arnav is not just another devotee, is he ? In spite of all the ASR-ness, you have sketched such a wonderful man! He never fails, never disappoints, and is perceptive enough to see the invisible lines drawn by Khushi. But Khushi, you wicked girl, you could've had at least some mercy on him and worn a bra !

While she makes mithai-s at home, what will happen to our diebetic hero ? Haye bechaara.

Shyam is playing a big game, I see that and it is very intriguing. But I don't know if that spells trouble for the Raizadas ?

I want to watch what happens when she goes to see him in his room. Even Devi Maiyya is scared of ASR-ness on full throttle !

Can I just say, your comments are 'FANTASTIC', you have a way with words. Ever considered writing?

Comment updated in Pg 57.

came across this story just today and read all parts in one go...must say pretty interesting...love the khushi and arnav equation...shyam and anjali, what to see what's in hold for them...so keep it coming!

oh ,wow!! b still my poor ❤️!!! da arnav/khushi bathrobe scene was too HOT!!☺️

Badhiya tha bahot..bedroom scene.. :D
Par shyam jee ka kya scene h?mystery man!
Wow,arnav jee gussa ho gaye,maza aega! :D

Originally posted by: Naach_Basanti

Can I just say, your comments are 'FANTASTIC', you have a way with words. Ever considered writing?