ArHi FF: Finding Solace# 2 *Completed*

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Loved it ...superb update ...keep it up

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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Oh this story is now really growing on me, becoming one of my favorites on the Forum. Firstly, theres the fact that I always appreciate well sketched ASR-s - with equal amounts of Arnav and ASR incorporated in them - and you've managed to do that. His possessiveness, impulsiveness, the whole "don't walk away when I'm talking to you", and of course the arm-twisting - is all vintage ASR. But the sensitivity with which he analyses Khushi's predicament, and the honesty with which he speaks to her are all so Arnav! - comforting, soothing and oozing warmth.

This man had understood her pain, had voiced it perfectly and soothed her telling that she was important to him...

That debate you struck about the difference between morality and traditionalism was very intersting. Theres a fine line - traditions you follow for others more than yourself, morals have more to do with a personal choice between right and wrong. The fact that you've distinguished Khushi's problem as a moral dilemma only adds more color to her character. It makes her interesting as well as admirable. Arnav has comforted her enough for her to make a choice and fully embrace it. Wonderful!

Aman, bechara. And Anjali - wicked!

And why would I ever complain about long updates ? They are more like pleasant surprises! Great work, and thanks for the PM :)

Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago

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roshaan

@roshaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

wonderful update loved the way he understood her pain was too gud poor aman he dont know where he was walking lol last line sound interesting cont soon dear

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Shayad meri shaadi ka khayal blah blah,isiliye mummy ne meri tmhe chai par bulaya hai.. 😆 aman ji bechare ka pack up ho gaya ussay pehle 😆
well written arnav and khushi s part..and where did u stop! :| excited for the next one.hehe. ;)

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priya

@silvia1999

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

AWSUM UPDATE...ARNAV TRANSFERRED AMAM,HA HA HA.LOVED THE WAY HE COMFORTED HER...

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sur91

@sur91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

I don't mind long updates infact I love them. I hope aman's matter is settled now coz the way khushi looked at him, it doesn't seem like a simple affection from aman's side.
Why do I feel that ArHi will again be interuppted? I hope they are not!

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tanurocks

@tanurocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

nice one...

arnav's talk to khushi was really needed.arnav is a person with few words.but still he talked about his feeling towards khushi...

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preethi28

@preethi28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

whats wrong with you?upset with long update? you wish!!!!!! i m literally doing a mental dance due to your long update !!!!!finally misunderstanding is cleared between arnav and khushi. but it was not fair of you to leave us in a cliffhanger 😳 what with khushi being so naughty!!!! thanks for the pm.

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#239

Tats an awesum update. . . . . I loved it loved it loved. . . Arnav very wel tried to soothe her pain n removed her feeling of insecurity . . Thanks fo d pm..i enjoyd readg ths part

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laksh65

@laksh65

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Posted: 12 years ago

#240

beautiful update, aman's intentions became so open today that he has plans to get her in his life, omg asr is so possessive that he tranferred him to US, anji also played her cards very well knowing that he is standing on the stairs she spoke all those things to aman.

Arnav and khushi convo was very matured, the way he made her feel comfortable and important was very touching. Waiting for the next chapter.