GOING DOWN THE LANES OF DEHRADUN ! updt Pg12!11/5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guyz i m back wid anoder OS wid 2 parts..i noe bahut saare updates dene hai mujhe..all are in progress..fr nw njoy dis 1 !

GOING DOWN THE LANES OF DEHRADUN



reyy!!! uthooo
sumbody shaked rey who ws sleeping on d oder side of d bed beside d wall of pillows!

Re: arre shona pls na ! 5 min aur ! fir mein pakka uth jaunga ! he said in his sleepy voice!

: pichle 15 mins se mein yahi sun rhi hu mein ! agar aap abhi nhi uthe to mein aapse baat bhi nhi karungi aur hamari
deal bhi cancel

Re: ye cheating hai ! he agn said in his sweet drowsy voice !

: my dear everything is fair in luv and war ! she said sitting beside him..

Re: acha to miss.kria ghai luvs me? he asked looking at her in his charming way !

Kr: umm..she made a cute face as if thinking...really..??

Re: haaww aisa kya face bana rahi ho?? u dont luv me?? he asked making a cute puppy dog face !

Kr: she went close 2 his face..near his ear...making him skip a heartbeat..and she spoke in a husky tone...

I..her hot breath hitting his neck...making him go mad...
I..he repeated in a questioning way..
I..saying dis she moved a little back to hav a view of his face...hate u she said...and rey made a confused face...as he dint get wht he had expected ! and he ws already in a different world 2 realise wht she had said..but den realisation struck him and he made 'O' face listening 2 her statement ! and she burst out laughing !

and d next moment he started hitting her wid a pillow..and she ws no less in grabbing 1 and hitting him wid d same force...dis continued fr sumtym till bth became tried of fighting and had a stomach ache due to laughing hard..

bth sat der laughing beside each oder..wen kria suddenly shouted !

Kr: oh shit !
Re: kya hua? he asked wid a tensed face..
Kr: reyy !! go get ready hum already late ho rahe hai ! mein tab tak breakfast banati hu!

she in a rush gets up frm d bed but he catches her hand making her 2 luk at him wid a Question mark on her face..and he had an intense luk on his face wch made her shiver..

he grinned wide seeing dis reaction..thinking it ws his turn nw 2 haffun !

he gt up and went near her...wrapping his hands around her...and takin her in his embrace...

Re: meri GM kiss he said kissing her on d shoulder..

Kr: she blushed a little..rey! she said in a shy tone...

Re: hmm..was his reply..

Kr: rey late ho rahe hai..jaane dijiye na pls !

Re: late to tum kar rhi ho maine to kuch nhi kiya !

Kr: she had no ways 2 escape nw...she had 2 agree to his wish...she turned oder side...

Kr: lekin aapko aankhe band karni padegi..

Re: kya?? ye kaisa rule hai??

Kr: ab plss rey !

Re: ok ! and he closes his eyes and she quitely escapes !

after 5 mins he opened his eyes ! and realised tht she fooled him...and smiled...such things made him fall more in luv wid her !

and he gt ready and went down..wer she ws sitting at d dining table..grinning wide...

Re: mein apne badla zarur lunga..he said bending 2wards her side..on his chair..

Kr: i will b waiting she replied !

bth hav der breakfast..teasing each oder...having sum lovey dovey talks...

Re: so miss kria ghai aaj aap mujhe kahan kahan leke jayengi??

Kr: umm...dehradun mein na mera poora bachpan beeta hai to mein in short aapko mera bachpan dikhaungi !

Re: ok ! and goes to open his car !

Kr: rey car nhi !

Re: to phir hum kaise jayenge??

Kr: walking walking

Re: walking walking??!

Kr: offo aap chaliye to ! and she drags him wid her !

Re: baatcutter hum vehicle bhi to le sakte hai na??

Kr: arre baba..zyada door nhi hai..dekhiye..hum meri skool pahunch bhi gye !

Re: tumhari schl??

Kr: haan..meri favourite plc !

Re: fav kyun??

Kr: kyunki...bahut saare reasons !

ek to kyunki mere friends yaha rehte the...fir u noe mujhe padhna bhi acha lagta tha...apne teachers ki favourite thi mein!
and iss schl ki most wanted thi mein...jaane aaj tak kitnon ka dil toda maine

Re: acha ji?

Kr: ji haan..aur fir sabse main reason...dance ! aapko to pata haina rey ki mom dance ke khilaaf thi and den ghar mein to mein dance nhi kar paati thi lekin skool mein luckily dance bhi ek activity thi...

Re: hmm...so chale andar??

Kr: haan...

and dey go and tour her schl...she shows him her classes..d plc wer she used 2 sit..canteen...dey met her teachers...she ws very happy..jumping like a kid..and d most happiest ws rey..seeing her like dat..and he came to noe her evn more..d teachers wer praising her..and rey felt proud

her mouth dint evn stop evn fr 1 second..she ws jus gng on and on and rey walking behind her listening 2 her..wid hands in his pockets and a smile on his face...kria in her own world dint pay attention tht she ws on d steps and ws abt 2 fall wen oua super hero cums ans catches her,..

Re: dekhkar chalna chahiye na kria..
Kr: sorry !!

and den dey go to a park..

Kr: pata hai rey ye park na mujhe bahut pasand hai..yaha aake itna fresh lagta hai..yaha na maine bahut saare friends bhi banaye the aur har sunday maa ke saath aa jati thi khelne..

Re: hmm..

Kr: reyy !!

Re: kya hua??

Kr: wo dekhiye na swing..chaliye na waha chalte hai...and she drags him der..

Re : arre to dheere se bolna chahiye na..

Kr: aap chaliye na..

and den dey go to d swing..kria happily moving to and fro while rey pushes d swing...

ok guyz ending d 1st part here...hope u ppl like it..pls do comment..it is jus a random thought...i hope u guyz like it..fingers crossed !







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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
res
unres

yay
yay
wooohhooo
yippiiiee

firstly lemme jump

*jumping* *jumping*
now enough of jumping
coming to the update

aweiiiee
it was chhhooo cute...

really yaar super cute update...

loved it
i was awing through the whole update

shoo cute

awesome blossom..

update soon
Edited by heavenly_angel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res..
unres...

yeyyy chalo atlst m 2nd...
preetz to lagta h race lga k ayi..😆

ok now coming to the OS..
it was super duper cute..awwiieee...
i loved it...

starting was really good..
nd after that kriya showing her city n school
to rey...
awsm..

update the next part soon...
thnx 4 the pm...
Edited by anjee_007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start the r very cute update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
it was so veery cute...

just loved it...

shhhooo chhhwweeettt
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res...
unres...
it was awesome n cute..
thnx for pm...
Edited by alisha.a.s - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res...
Unres...
Awesome start... 👏
Wating for the next part...
Update soon...
N thankz for the pm... 😊
Edited by 0-Sata_rupa-0 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
Awesome os

Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
shhooo cute nd sweet update...
loved it
update soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
its awesome loved it
very sweet update 2 part soon

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