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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1081

superb updt

updt soon

happy new year

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1082

it seems forever waiting for your update. hope you are okay, please update soon xx

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1083

oops.. Anjali knew her brother wel.. hope AK reconcile..

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arshiiipkknd

@arshiiipkknd

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1084

Wow!

So, i just read all the parts so far in one go and i love it. The slow pace of this story i think makes us understand the characters even better. i love how you have shown Arnav's thoughts as well as Khushi's. This story has a lot of depth. I salute the writer with respect.

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arshiiipkknd

@arshiiipkknd

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1085

This is really nice. I like the way you showed Arnav's slight worry for khushi. I hope Khushi becomes brave and doesn't act all sati savitri. The tone in this part was the highlight😊

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arshiiipkknd

@arshiiipkknd

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1086

I just read part 27 and i am flabbergasted.

You didn't want to post these parts? You wanted to make them more perfect? Are you crazzzy?

How perfect can perfect get. This part was amazing. kHUSHI FINNALY took her own stance,(something i wanted her to do in the show) and Arnav actually apoligized. I loved his apology. You didn't make it seem fake at all, you totally kept the character in mind instead of just making him a lovesick puppy, which he clearly is not. I think this part has just set a whole new level of intensity in this story.

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arshiiipkknd

@arshiiipkknd

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1087

Ha Ha. Read part 28

The end even though it was probably meant for something else and not humor. I couldn't control myself. I find it so funny that Arnav's last resort is Aman. Maybe in your story Aman will be more than just a robotic phone caller

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arshiiipkknd

@arshiiipkknd

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1088

Ok, since i just started reading this today, I guess i;m not entitled to say UPDATE I'VE BEEN WAITING FOREVER but to tell the truth, ever since i started reading this, i feel like every second is a whole year. I can't wait for the nxt part and rlly interesting article. I hope Arnav doesn't bark at Khushi for this. It would be interesting for Arnav to give Khushi some advice on her dressing sense though. Congratzz on you new thread and keep writng cause you r amazing at it.yOU CAN PLUS ONE TO YOUR DIEHARD FAN LIST NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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jen_x

@jen_x

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#1089

omg that article is going to make things worst

thanks u

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Melony Jane Tryphosa Saripalli

@Mel-JTsaripalli

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1090

hey krani long time!!
i kept checking out if you uploaded in ur writing paradise blog but u didnt 😕
neways i love your work
plzzz pmm me when you update😉
thank you for being an amazing writer