Arshi FF: A Crazy Tale #soon to be continued# - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Drishuluv

luved it. was nice update.i was laughing while reading description of tht creature, sorry i mean tht HUMAN BEING😆 by d way what is cooking up in ur mind??? u landed Arnav in NY & nw u r ready to send Khushi to India, so r u planing thr first meeting in NY itself or u r planning to become more cruel & not going to let thm meet soon??? anyway luvd it & waiting to read more... & thnx for d pm😊



keep ur faith on my mind, it is cooking something very delicious... have patience & keep commenting 😉... i'll try my level best & i wont let u down... 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Waiting to know all thats cooking in ur mind cutiee... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lolerblade





what was unexpected??? i didnt actually got it... 😕 & thankeau for commenting even if u dint knew what to say... 😉



oh dear u shared d d link to my frst SS..!!
IT ws ds whch ws unexpected..!!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
just read chapter 2 and 3 and let me say that you wrote wondefully and fluenly, just liked the way you write all the chapters till now 👍🏼 👍🏼
Chapter two was amazing, so Khushi is little pagal, wha she is the reason why the girls in her quartier is till single as Garima said she made all run away a couse her pranks 😆
Loved Rishit's dialogues:
"You can stare at him later too.. Invite him in first" 😆
"Its not a mansion Arjun you can call it a zoo. The Gupta Zoo🤣
I thinks this part is reffered to Khushi 😃
loved Arjun's introduction, I think Aashi should take Khushi's advice and go to check him, maybe be she will like him 😉
So thanks to Rishit all the family is going to India, and Arnav is just landed in NY, so their first meeting is on the way.
I think they will meet first in NY and the second meet will be in India, maybe the reason will be Rishit and his business.
Thanks for the pm and for this lovely update.
Loved the story too too much 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Hey anku.. will u update today?? 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: dewdropsoflove



oh dear u shared d d link to my frst SS..!!
IT ws ds whch ws unexpected..!!😆




oh thats alryt i just copied the link to ur ss & pasted it at the end of my post... 😃 it also helped me to increase my typing skills... 😉 nd your story deserved it, must say really amazing concept
... 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: HK90

just read chapter 2 and 3 and let me say that you wrote wondefully and fluenly, just liked the way you write all the chapters till now 👍🏼 👍🏼

Chapter two was amazing, so Khushi is little pagal, wha she is the reason why the girls in her quartier is till single as Garima said she made all run away a couse her pranks 😆
Loved Rishit's dialogues:
"You can stare at him later too.. Invite him in first" 😆
"Its not a mansion Arjun you can call it a zoo. The Gupta Zoo🤣
I thinks this part is reffered to Khushi 😃
loved Arjun's introduction, I think Aashi should take Khushi's advice and go to check him, maybe be she will like him 😉
So thanks to Rishit all the family is going to India, and Arnav is just landed in NY, so their first meeting is on the way.
I think they will meet first in NY and the second meet will be in India, maybe the reason will be Rishit and his business.
Thanks for the pm and for this lovely update.
Loved the story too too much 🤗 🤗 🤗




i am glad you liked it, hope i wont disappoint u even in the future... & thanx for your comment it makes me feel tooo good... 😃 🤗 as for your guessing i cant say anything else than i wont give any hints as i love the outcome expressions after surprises... 😛 and i am an evil writer, i will may turn the story anywhere (u must have noticed it after the cliff hanger of chap 2) 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: lilakumariacnw

Hey anku.. will u update today?? 😉



i may wont be able to update frequently for a month because of my upcoming xams... 😭 and i need to study urgently... but dont worry i'll try to manage updating atleast once a week till then & after the xams i will be catching up by updating daily... 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Dont worryy my dear... Ofcourse exams r more impt... 😊
Study well.. all d best for ur exam 👍🏼 ...
No need to update... Even if its for a month... We will wait...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arnav heard a screech behind their car. The curiosity in his head to forced him to turn around and look at the source of the sound. He saw a Toyota Prius just beside the back of their car, halfly on the middle of the road, standing in a silent mode. After some time he noted that the people on the front seat of the car were visible to him and were trying to resemble a statue of funny cartoons. He raised his eyebrows and was about to say 'What the' but then choose to ignore that part along with the scene and drifted his attention back to the blackberry.

i guess that u guys must have guessed who it is in that Toyota Prius... 😉


hey friends i am sorry for the delay... I wanted to tell you guys that i want some comments in return and this precap is dedicated to thoose who don't comment.. 😈 As for thoose who comment chapter 4 is on the way... 😉
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