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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thank a lot the next part will be up before 8pm(indian time)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part! 👏 !!!!!1 yipeeeeeeeeee now angad knows that prateek is is son!!!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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CHAPTER 6


Kripa and angad looked at each other shocked. Angad because he just found out prateek was his son and kripa because angad had found out.
Angad walked up to kripa and looked draught in her eyses and said


A=prateek kya humara beta hain

Kripa just looked away and angad had gotten his answer but he wanted to hear it from her mouth.

A=prateek kya humara beta hain. Damn it answer me

K= agar thume pata hi hain to kyon pooche rahe hoon.(still not looking at angad)

A= I wanna hear it from ur mouth

K= I can't hide the truth from u anymore it had to come infront of u one day and it did.

A= just answer me damn it.

K(now looking straight in his eyes)=ha hain tho

Angad gave one look at her and knelt to he was face to face with prateek and kripa turned her face around.
Angad raised his hand to toch prattek's cheek but before he coild do that prateek quicly his behing kripa. Shocked angad looked at angad who was looking at prattek equally shocked.

P(starting to cry)= nahin app booth gande hoon.

K= prateek(in a shoked way)

P= sur ke papa booth gande hain booth gande

Just imagine that when angad had scolded him he never wanted to be close to angad again.
And saying that he ran out. With a shocked A-K looking at him.

Now angad was standing at kripa was about to go out when angad started in melody drama.

A= how could u hide this from me how could u huh. Thumari himmat kaise huhi huh. Mera beta hain aur huge hi nahin pata . kripa thume ne baath kaise chuppaiye mere se. AUR TUM NE ISSKE DIMAKE MEIN BHI MERE LEYE NAFRAT BHAR DHI. AKKHIR TUM CHATTI KYA HOON.

K= yeh nafrat thumari galti ki vage se hain. Tum ne usse din usse danta aur tab se vo thume pasand nahin kart ha. Aur jaha tak pregnecy ka saval hain tho mughe bhi ye baath mussories aa kar pata chale.

A=to bata nahin sakte thi.

K= kaise baatha thi huh. Tum tho meri shakal kya meri awaz, name aur wajood se hi nafrat karte the

A= left speechless and left the room in a way it looked as if he were dragging himself.

While going toward the door nishant came and said

N= arre angad tum yaha kasie koi kam tha kya.

A= nahin asse koi baath nahin

Then a voice comes from the back

V=ase hi tho baath thi

It was kripa she was carrying the box of sweets and the card angad had brought.

K=yeh hhume appne shaadi ki khabar deme aye the

There was a sadness In her voice that only angad could sense.

N= accha tho bina batte ja rahe the.

A= tum the nahin isle yeh card aur sweets chor kar jar raha tha.
Aur abb koi kam aggya hain main thume backi ke details phone par de doon ga par abbhi mughe jana hain.

N= thek hain par partu due hain.

A= of course

Angad started towards the door and nishant left 4 his room. Before going out the door he looked back and saw kripa facing the other way wipe a tear.

On one side he thought she dessrved it and on the other happy that she still cared what he was doing in his life. But the toght bugged him still that why was he photo with kripa and why was she crying but all that was nothing compared to what he had founf out.

Prateek was his son

G2g BYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE




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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey roking ff yaar!!! i lubb it!!!i wonder wut kannan'z secretiz!!!! 😃 cont soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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srry guys i won't be able to continue but i think i'll ket half the secret out in the next part and end in the next couple.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey i'm continuing now
next part rite up
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Posted: 19 years ago
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CHAPTER 7

The wedding day came closer day by day. Angad had tried going closer to prateek but whenever he did he ran off. And when he angad tried to talk to kripa she was always with someone so she wouldn't have to face him. The week passed by with preparations. And angad and nishant had also talked and decided to marry at one alter. Kripa was totally against it but she couldn't say anything.

Today was the weeding day and was being held at the 5 star hotel Taj. No one still had seen kripa (angad's family). So everyone was at the hotel getting ready. Naina and Dilip had also come just 4 angad.

Angad was going to kanan's room when he heard 2 people talking.

N=kanan kaha thi tum. Tum asse kyon gaye . ha main manta hoon ki misunderstanding thi par inti bade ki tum chale gaye

Ka= to aur kya karti


Flashback

Nishnat and kanan loved each other a lot they were about to get married but there was some misunderstanding due to which kanan left. Nishant looked 4 kanan a lot but didn't find her.

*** kanan and nishant didn't meet each other before they heard the names but they thought it was a coincidence.***


Ka= jab pata chala to jhooth tha to aye thi vopis par tum gayab hogay. Phir angad se mille aur laga usse se pyar hogaya par agg patha chala vo illusion tha.

N= main bhi, Tanya ji se pyar kar ne laga aur ajj vo bhi lakta hain nahin hua tha.

Ka= par nishant hum ek dousre ko bhul jana hoga. Jin se hum shaadi har rahe hain unhou ne humara saath nahin churda tho hum bhi nahin chord sakte .

N= ha hume bhi qurbani dene padegi.

A=(who had heard all of their talk spoke up) kisse ko bhi qurbani nahin dene padegi.

Nishant and kanan shocked at ashamed that they were caught.

Ka= ann…gad tum kab aye

A= kanan kya tum mhuge par inta bhi bharrousa nahin karti ke yeh bata diti ki tum nishant se pyar karti hoon. Main kya thume force kata?

Ka= nahin to asse baath nahin hain mhuge bhi abbhi pata chala ki vo nishant hain jo kri…. Tanya se shaadi mera pyaar hain.

A= abb bata ditya na abb main humari shaadi nahin hone dunga. Pir tum donu shaddi kar sakte hoon

All of a sudden nihant spoke up.

N=Srry angad par yeh nahin hoon sakta

A= (shocked) kyon.

N= main Tanya ko dhooka nahin de sakta unoou ne sifr bua ji ke khusi ke liye ye shaadi ke liye ha kaha. Unnou ne mera saath nahin chorda tho main kaisse.

A= par nishant.

N= I'm srry angad and I'm very srry kanan.

Kanan was in tears but gave him a slight smile and said

Ka= jho bhi kare rahe hoo vo saye hain.

A= whatever par isske bad main aur kanan to nahin shaadi kar sakte . never .

Nishant was about to make him understand but he left.

Angad was really heated up. He was very mad at kripa he thought in his mind. Always because of kripa people lives were ruined. And today just because of her 2 more lives were going to be ruined.
He was going down to make the announcement that he wouldn't be getting married and as he was going down he bumped into someone.

He was about to apologize but when he say the persons face he became really flamed up at shouted.

A= tummmmmmmmmmm.
Yaha kya kar rahe hoon. Zindagi barbad kar di abb kya baaki hain.

Someone= angad meri baath suno please.

A= just get lost MISHTY get lost

Yes the person was no other than MISHTY.

Preview-----Secret out in next part


Edited by BABY-GIRL7 - 19 years ago

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