Ariya: tera ehsaas hua season-2 (ch15 pg75)23 - Page 33

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shilpa09

awesome update dear:)👏

i love this ff alot:)😊
i m reading it from first chapter again... do write more soon:)😃
thanks 4 pm dear:):):)🤗



OMG !!!
i send pm to u ???
lol i never send pm to other readers
bcoz i send ariya work to ariya readers sry 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
its a awsumm story bahut maza aa rha he very interesting n arjun ki jalousy toh clearly nazar aa rhi he..
cant wait fr next chptr...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!
Riya must be looking dhansu in red dress!
Ariya hug? Sach mein? sapna toh nhi dekh rahi na? 😃
Continue soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Renumehra

its a awsumm story bahut maza aa rha he very interesting n arjun ki jalousy toh clearly nazar aa rhi he..
cant wait fr next chptr...

thank you so much dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MriduB

Awesome update!
Riya must be looking dhansu in red dress!
Ariya hug? Sach mein? sapna toh nhi dekh rahi na? 😃
Continue soon!

thanks dear😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys i'm back with ch 13 of teh2 . may all will like it !!!

CHAPTER 13a

After clebrating christmas and wishing to everyone ...

abhi : guys wishes to ho gayi now we should get ready to go merlion park . but usse pehle i think itni thand mein ek cup coffe ho jaye ???

shree : haan sir best idea ..

riya : sure ... aap sab hall mein chalein mein bs abhi bana kar laati hoon

everyone went in hall while riya go to kitchen . arjun sit on sofa and hold the ring box . he get up and go to kitchen .

arjun : ermm...riya ...

riya : yes sir kuch chahiye aap ko ???

arjun : abb...haan wo...wo pani , pani chahiye tha

riya : lo itni si baat nahi bol paa ... rahe abhi lati hoon ek min

arjun immidiatly bring out the ring box and put near stove and stand on hsi place . riya bring water and give to him ( ye lein sir pani ) ...

arjun : ummm...pyaas nahi rahi ab mein...mein chalta hoon ( mera kaam to ho gaya he said to himself ) ...

riya : aap ne kuch kaha ??

arjun : na...nahi tum pani piyo ... ( he left ) ...

riya in shock : kaise aadmi hain yeh paani mang kar keh rahe hain pyaas nahi hai ... sab sach ho kehte hain ... aaj tak na hi super cop arjun rawte ... ko na hi koi samjh saka hai aur nahi hi koi samjh sakta hai ...

arjun go back and sit on his place while he saw

rathore was reading news paper ...

abhi was listening songs on ipod ...

while shree was scolding chottu on his mistake to play game wrongly ...

riya bring coffe and serve to everyone . after the coffee break ...

abhi : okay guys coffee to ho gayi i think now should get ready to go merlion tonight

rathore : right abhi we should take 5 min's break to get ready and come on move fast ...

Later

abhi , rathore , shree and chottu was already in hall ...

abhi : riya and arjun kahan hain ???

riya come down in short sxcy red dress like this

riya : i'm ready chalein ...

rathore : haan but rawte ... ( arjun also come in hall )

arjun : chalein ab rathore ...

Later in merlion park

everyone arrive merlion park and enter inside .

they saw a big n beautiful stutue which is half lion and half fish .

shree immidiatly take out his ipad and start capturing that beautiful view ...

chottu : haaa...( shockely)aaj tak to isse sirf net aur books mein hi dekha tha but aaj live apni aankhon ke saamne bhi dekh liya ...

riya : right chottu i really can't believe on my eyes

abhi was watching the captured pics of shree . and rathore was talking to chottu while arjun ... he was immersed in himself ...

After watching that view they went to nearest club ...

arjun , abhi and rathore sit to gether on side while shree chottu and riya sit a little far from them .

Scroll down to read chapter 14 😊

Edited by saba-ramisa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys i'm posting ch 14 with 13 bcoz u pplz need that slap scene . and i divide it in 2 chapter's bcoz the udate was long 😊
CHAPTER 13b
riya : guys mein aati hoon ( she left for wash room )

shree : chottu ... sun na

chottu : arre haan bol na

shree : dekh ri bhi nahi hai aur wo teeno sir bhi dur bethe hain aur moqa bhi hai to ...

chottu : shree saaf saaf bol na

shree : mein keh raha tha ke ...thori si wine ho jaye ???

chottu : OMG ! shree tu pagal ho gaya hai kya ???

agar rathore sir ne dekh liya na to humein iss club se nahi balke ETF se bahar utha phenke gein .

shree : arre mein keh raha hoon kisi ko pata nahi chalega promise . chal mein le kar aata hoon

chottu : nahi shree tu nahi layega ... ( he get up and force chottu to come with him ) arre shree sun na shree ... chottu also get up and move after him . ye shree ka bacha na aaj surely zarur pitwaye ga chottu said to himself . shree order for wine .

chottu : nahi yaar mujh se nahi hoga mein jaaraha hoon

shree : ( he grab him from arm and stop him to go ) arre chup kar ke khare nahi ho sakte tum ???

suddenly riya come back while she saw they are not there she start searching them and get them on bar counter she go to them and say ( tum dono yahaan )

shree immidiatly hide the glass from riya ( na...nahi ri kuch...kuch bhi to nahi ) ...

riya : phir ye peeche kya chupa rahe ho tum shree ???

shree : ( he He brought his glass infront of riya ) arre ye ...ye to kuch nahi bs apple ka juice hai na ... humein pyaas lagi thi to socha apple ka juice ...

riya : ohh...acha to lao mein bhi pee loon mujhe bhi bohat pyaas lagi hai

shree : nahi ... tu tu ja dusri le-le ...

riya : kyun iss mein kya kharabi hai ??

acha behas mat karo aur mujhe peene do .

she take a sip and say ( yakhhh ye apple drink hai ya sharab ??? )

shree : tujhe bola tha na na pee

riya : nahi apple drink hi hai sach mein sharab to nahi hai na ... ( She drink )

shree : ( he was watching her shockely )saari pee li ...

chottu : haan shree saari pee li aur ab to hundred and one percent humein oi nahi bacha sakta

riya drunk go to dance floor while shree try to stop her . she was passing from the side where arjun , abhi and rathore was sitting .

arjun : riya ... ( she stop )

riya : hi arjun ... oOops sorry sir ...

she go near him and say ( you know you are very handsome , and laung )

arjun : riya ...tum ne sharab pee hai ???

riya : no ... no sir mene apple juice piya hai ... kasam se mene sharab ko haath bhi nahi lagaya ...

rathore and abhi was also shocked watching riya is drunk ...

she move to floor while arjun grab her arm .

arjun : ab ye mat kehna ke tum dance floor par ja rahi ho

riya : right arjun ... oOops again sorry arjun sir ...

arjun : nahi ... hum issi waqt ghar ja raha hain

abhi : ghar ???

par abhi to hum aaye hain . enjoy bhi nahi kiya aue chale jayein ???

arjun : tumhe enjoy karna hai to tum raho . tumhe isski halat nahi dikh rahi ??? waise bhi mein yahaan koi tamasha nahi chahta ...

suddenly a guy come to riya and say ( hi ... i'm tushar )
riya : hiii...i'm riya ( with smile )

will this beautiful lady like to dance with me ???he ask

riya watch to everyones face and give her hand ( sure )

riya : leave my hand sir mein ghar nahi jaun gi ... mujhe dance karna hai choriye mera haath please ...

arjun leave her hand and she go with him while arjun stand there angrily ...

everyone sit back on places and arjun was still standing and saring at riya more angrily

rathore : rawte beth jao . control you anger and your self

at floor :

he saw to riya : waise aap kiske saath hain ??

riya : arjun sir ke saath

arjun ??

riya : mere boss

arjun : kya ajeeb larki hai kisi ki nahi sunti

at floor he was trying to come more closer to her and was getting more angry bcoz his eyes was only on riya ...even all was watching her actions ...

he put his hand on her back ... abhi try to get up but rathore stop him

rathore : nahi abhi pehle hi riya bohat tamasha kar chuki hai ab aur nahi

rathore was talking to abhi while arjun get up and go to floor . arjun grab her hand and say her to come out from floor .

dud !!! tumhari problem kya hai haan ???

wo nahi jaana chahti to tum kyun usse force kar rahe ho huh ???

arjun : kisine baat karne ki tameez nahi sikhayi kya tumhe ???

chalo riya ...

riya : sir please leave my hand it's paining ...

arjun : mene kaha chalo riya and move a step forward while riya didn't move ( mein nahi jaungi sir mene bhi keh diya )

arjun was already much hot in anger and he get more angry . he immidiatly turn back and slap riya ...

everyone was in shock ...

Precap :

everyone come home while riya stay in merlion arjun search her and ariya hug ...

PS : sorry if there is any mistake bcoz after too long update i'm tired and haven't recheck the update so ignore the mistake ...😆
Edited by saba-ramisa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ahhh diii aaappp vapas ahi gi, door nahi raha!!
Sabse pehla post! Thank you diii for a great post! Aaap itni achi likthi ho!! Please do continue xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow dear loved it...
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update Rami...!!
Loved it..!
Arjun is so jealous and the RING BOX!!!
Continue soon

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