Ariya: tera ehsaas hua season-2 (ch15 pg75)23 - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
wah ...

kya dhamakedaar update thi love it 🤗

aww...arjun buy ring for riya so sweet

but he slap her why ???😲

eagerly waiting to know why plz cont soon 😊

can't wait 2 sec plz ...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aimennaseer

wah ...

kya dhamakedaar update thi love it 🤗

aww...arjun buy ring for riya so sweet

but he slap her why ???😲

eagerly waiting to know why plz cont soon 😊

can't wait 2 sec plz ...

thanks 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update :) loved it
arjun brought ring for riya :) how sweet
precap seems interesting.. arjun slapped her but why?😕
can't wait to read next part
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update! 😊
Bechara Arjun...he's so jealous of Abhi! 😛
Precap? Arjun slapped Riya? 😕
Waiting for the next part! 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Saba:



read the entire FF updated till now in one go. The story started off well with the ETF searching for a female officer and thus riya joins the team, but I think you could have put the scene of riya recovering arjun's precious ring in a less dramatic way ..i mean, seedha aag mein kud jaana thoda zyada nahi lagta 😕? that too when she doesn't know much of him as a person. Riya,chottu and shree's camaderie is of course good and jovial as we have seen in the show. But the commissioner's decision to send the team to Singapore looks entire lame and fishy to me, it makes no sense to shift an efficient police team to a entirely different country altogether just because their HQ got destroyed in fire..ETF could have been easily assigned a temporary office in the city! Once in Singapore, you have brought in officer Abhijeet, thus culminating two shows CID and Arjun together😊. However, I hope you will stick to a flirty abhijeet only and not bring in the rest of team CID in picture (at least here). And yes, I liked how the trio have gelled with abhijeet, coz I have seen CID for a long time too, and I know SI Abhijeet is a person who can gel with his juniors and even get casual with them without losing focus on his work and keeping his own dignity intact.😊


Update soon. The precap clearly indicates that arjun has lost his mind and I want to know what has triggered his action.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Puloma :

I know they can get any other place in india easily . but i just need an excuse to bring a new office in team on another place and i don't get any thing else then this . bcoz many pplz have enter new sketches directly ...

if i also do same then my fun come in story . and i wan't know that abhijeet is in cidin real . when i was thinking for a name i just got abhi . and he is not flirty as arjun thought about him . he is just a simple happy person and live his life in totally fun ...

well hope u can understand why etf go to singapore with a small short circuit . and an imp thing that i'm alone writer director and everything of my story i have no sis or bro or anything to give me idea that's why may their are some stupid scenes or mistakes but as a writer i always do my best 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
saba :


accha chal koi nahi, it's your story ..write it the way you want. and SI Abhijeet in CID actually flirts big time with their forensic expert Dr.Tareeka.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice
arjun bought ring 4 riya
wnt to know why arjun slapped riya
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
So nice ...:)
waiting for next update ...:)...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome plz con't soon want to know why arjun slap riya ???

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