FF: WRETCHED KNOT THREAD 10 Last Part 60 - Pg135

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Shruti Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

can you give reasons which justify khush's action..??

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ramya1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

i badly need hints...but suspence too would be good...😉

im confused whether i need hints or no...😉

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Asma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

This is amazing..
Loved it a lot...
A very emotional update..
Guess She will not sign.
Hints i dont thik agar aur confuse kar diya tho...

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..ashiya..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Is Khushi really gonna sign it? Waiting for the nxt part eagerly now just to knw whether Khushi signs it or not..

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..ashiya..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Hints plzz I just cant take this suspense anymore.. This suspense is really making me mad.

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Kurup

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: daljeet
madhu di,i liekd the update.the confession n talk bwn arnav n kushi,i liked it very much.i loved it.

n not at all happy with the precap.i liked only one ine in it-"i knw u r not wrong kushi.but u arent right too"!i liked tht.tht is the situation.

im still unhappy tht the plot was now weaved out in such a way tht half of the readers fins kushi adamant n egoistic.in LS wen ppl said tht i cud understand tht n i did agree to it.but here im unhappy.as a reader,i can express my like n dislike right.thts this.i knw u wil lrespect it.if not i wudnt hv dared to right it so openly here.

but i respect wat u said-"i wrote wat felt right to me".i truly respect it.im dissapointed with kushi's char evolution r mayb culmination,bz she was the most righteous char of ur till now n also the strong kushi,till now too.so im sad tht she too was shown as an egoistic undeciding girl.but i respect ur words from my heart.so though im not happy with kushi's char development here,i dont hold anything against the story r u n i do love "Wretched Knot".sincerely

Even I truly agree with Daljeet...Wat has arnav gone through after all this..Just coz he said sorry and just coz he shared some intimate moments, of course Khushi was the first one to take the first step, what has Arnav been through...nothing...May be after his official first night two years back he might have cut relations with Aliya but is that justified...A girl who has gone through a biggest shock of her life on the very first night of her marriage has to accept the relation wholeheartedly...Y is it that u changed Khushi, which was the boldest and the positive character of ur FF so far to such a weak one. The standard that u set initiallly I am not finding tat the ending is that apt. I am not supporting a divorce here, all that I want is Arnav has to suffer..He has to know what pain is..He tried to make Khushi understand that he does not have anythng towards Aliya and that he loves Khushi but he is still unsuccessful in removing the worst memories of Khushi's life. He has to first make that happen. I am not so very satisified with the ending...I have no offence to this FF at all and am always been a die hard fan of all ur scripts so far and have been following them regularly, and I was very happpy that u finally made a bold Khushi in ur FF but as it came to the end, I find her to be the one repenting instead of Arnav..Think something Madhu...U just cant let a woman to go through turmoil for past two years and then suddenly her husband come and say sorry for his deeds and she wholeheartedly accept it...THink something and make a sequel to this atleats since u said that u r ending this chapter...

My intention was not to hurt anyone through this but was expressing my views which i think as a reader I can do it and as an author for u take both negative and postiive comments and criticisms and work on it accordingly...

My only suggestion is let Khushi's character be justified completley...Women are not that weak...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

loved d update
thanx for pm😊😊😊😊
looking fwd for more
pls khushi dont sign d papers

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676719

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

NOTE: For Readers who think Khushi is right

For Readers who think Khsuhi is right .. Though you guys are not supporting the Divorce to happen - Yet feel Khushi cannot accept Arnav so easily even now just by seeing he is love with her. Those who feel Just one Sorry and some tears wont mend the 2 years that she spent without him with that flashes of one horrible first night..

Answer this -

1) What do you guys expect Khsuhi to do now? Divorce / Not Divorce?? If Divorce then what after that?

2) ASR repentence in what way would make you all realise that "Fine... This is enough.. Now Khsuhi can accept him.."???

I expect some comments on this Note too Guys.. Firstly YES I am ending this FF.. But I am not able to Draft the End.. Why??? My Mind if floating between Right and Wrong.. So..But I will figure it out..

The Next Part is Drafted where decision has been taken by Khushi. But I need some clarifications what some readers expect from this FF at this point of time?? When there was Romance during the entire wedding preps... No one said its too early.. Because that time everyone thought 2 years these 2 have stayed seperate and now they need to think of building their relationship again.. When there was Re marriage.. Everyone wanted.. That time No one said Khushi should not re marry Arnav.. Because everyone wanted to see them live happily and with each other..

But now when some insecurities are hurting Khsuhi .. SOme of us thinks its completely agreeable and even he should clear it off her .. BUT BY DOING WHAT?? Can someone explain..

Someone also pointed why Khushi's character is been changed all of a sudden? I dont think so.. Khushi was been shown a Positive and Strong character from the beginning and she is still .. She is still adamant on some of her decisions till the end.. She has already shown that Girls are not weak anymore and they can take their decisions based on what they feel like and not what others wants.. There is no question of she being weak at the end.. She is still strong and hence she is here before the Lawyer to sign the papers.. ONly because she is shedding tears getting a bit confused on her decision wont make her weak guys.. She is still strong.. Any girl would have felt the same.. A BIG DILEMMA to listen what the heart says or the Mind and she is also going through the same..

Well Think on the above and I need comments.. PLEASE.. ITS A REQUEST.. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT I AM MISSING HERE..

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verisimilitude

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

This truly is a wretched knot for you Madhu..

Now what are the expectations :

Khushi's character justification:

She is termed "Weak " for shedding tears, for fidgeting between heart and mind, for thinking abt her husband or posessiveness, unable to decide on the critical situation? Oh come on! not everyone can handle the situation as Khushi does? I agree she is wrong on her insecurities but she is not so weak as she had lived her life alone in LOndon without her family and her husband even was ready to stay there alone! Only one visit made the difference. If she had not visited India she would have continued to live her life. She didnt feel insecured at that time ,why???? After she sees him with Aaliya again she feels insecured? Thats not true. Its just a dilemma, or the over posessiveness which is eclipsed by the damn EGO. THis word is of prime importance in life. If she breaks that layer she can come out of all the doubts and live with him happily which I believe would surely happen. She believed in her own self even when her family and her inlaws ditched her. If that belief sustain in her now why cant she proceed with the divorce? The decision is in her own hands. She has to sit think and sort out for herself what she does is right or wrong. SHe needs time which doesnt have!

Arnav's repentance :

If this is the case and the maximum repentance one can expect from him is giving up his life which would set her free as well satisfy everyone's wish. What else he CAN or he HAS to do?

Sorry this is just my POV.

Edited by harhem - 12 years ago