~MeLiOrAtIng ThE bRoKeN tRuSt~ ch 11 updtd Pg 84... 20.8.15 - Page 8

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Hellooo..

I am back with a chota sa update..

sorry to disappoint all of you.. But I was unable to complete this part.. so I'll update it in parts.. would PM you all later..😊

It's just a little update from my side.. Do comment and press the like tab..

And again thank you so much for your lovely comments and liking my ff so far...

Thanks a lot.. ur comments surely encourage me to write more..

So keep all your bashing ready for this little Ridiculous part from my side..

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Chapter 3 (A)...

Outside the Room..

Taani was standing on the roofstaring at the moon and thinking of the moments she had shared with her dii.., the tears which were constantly flowing from her sister's eyes and the smile which at once had lit her face when she imagine herself to be the best dancer..

Lost in those moments she started talking to herself. "I think mene sahi kiya hai.. Di ko yaha sei jaane diya... Ab Di apni wish puri.."

"oh!.. u really think tumne sahi kiya hai.. Kriya ko shaadi k madap sei bhejkar.. humari family reputation ko stake par laakar.. u really think ki this is all right.." taani was hell shocked and scared at the same time on hearing the voice full of anger , hurt and pain.. she turned to face him.. the moment she dreaded the most.. the moment when she have to face him answering all his questions.. but was hoping not too.. now she knew she can't run without answering him even if she want too..

"mei.. vo.. aap.. " taani was shuttering and was unable to even speak in front of him properly.. she lowered her eyes.. not being able too see the hate he was showing towards her..

"what.. can't speak?? Too yeh saab karne ki himmat kha sei aayi.. oh how can I forget. Tumhara bhai' vo bhi too than a tumhare sath.. usii "

"naahi. I mean bhai nei kuch nahi kiya.." taani at once spoke cutting him in between..

"oh.. so now you are defending him.. defend karogi bhi kyu nahi.. both of you have succeded in making my life miserable.. both of you have ruined me and my family's reputation.. both of u'"

"nahi.. aisa kucha nahi hai.. hum."

Rey again spoke while cutting her and taking steps towards her.. In fear Taani started moving backwards towards the wall..

"really aisa kuch nahi hai.. too fir kaise hai Taani.. how can you not see ki tumahare aur tumhare bhai ki vaja sei kya hua hai.. " taani stopped at once which causes rey to stop too.. but a bit more closer to her.. their nose was almost touching..

" mei aapko kitni baar kaho.. bhai nei kuch nahi kiya hai.. infact bhai too vaha tab pahuche jab.. jab kriya dii ja chuki thi.."

"enough Taani.. enough" shouting.. he holds her tightly by her shoulders.." stop defending him.. "

"aap meri baat suniye Rey.. bhai nei.." taani tried to speak.. tears were again started forming into her eyes due to the pain due to his tight hold on her..

"I don't wanna listen to anything.. muje baas itna pata hai.. I aaj tum dono k karan meri life ruin ho gayi hai.. and now just because of u and him I'll nt be able to.." he left her and turned towards the other side.. "I won't be able to face my dad.. vo ek baar fir sei muje worthless samjenge.." saying so he hid his face with hi hands..

Taani moves infront of him " koi aapko worthless nahi samjega Rey.. you are important for everyone in your life.. aur koi solution too hoga iss problem ka.. and I am sure bhai.."

"tumhare bhai ki vaja sei hi yeh problem hui hai.. just leave Taani I don't want to talk to you or anybody.."

"par Rey.."

"I said leave.." Rey shouted.. their face was again inches apart.. "plzz.. taani leave.."whispered Rey.. unable to talk.. he felt himself drained from energy.. unable to stand and endure anything more he himself went away from there..

Mr Singhania who had witnessed all the interaction between them both was feeling a light bulb glowing in his head.. he went inside to inform all about his final decision..

Inside Room..

The room was filled with too much silence that the noise of the wind was heard very clearly' All were thinking very hard to find a solution to overcome this problem.. but were unable too..

"muje lagata hai aab humei aur der nahi karni chaiye.. saare guests sei maafi maang kar humei unhe aab bhej dena chaiye.." dadi said broking the silence..

"aab uski koi jarurat nahi padhegi maa.."

"matlab.. "

He turns towards Smiriti and said "Smiritiji muje lagta hai humei yeh shaadi cancel nahi karni chaiye.."

"aap yeh kya khe rahe hai.. muje kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai.." smiriti said with confusion creepting on her face..

"par beta bina Kriya kei bina.." dadi started speaking

"nahi maa Kriya nahi.." he turned towards Smiriti.. " Smiriti ji muje laagta hai.. humei Rey ki shaadi Taani sei karva deni chaiye.."

All were shocked to hear him..

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So guys here's the lil update..
do comment. and press the like tab..
would try to update the next part soon..
P.S.: Ignore the grammatical errors...😃
Edited by Freakin_girl - 12 years ago

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