~MeLiOrAtIng ThE bRoKeN tRuSt~ ch 11 updtd Pg 84... 20.8.15 - Page 6

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Chapter 2

"mei rey sei shadi nahi nahi kar sakti"

"but dii hua kya hai tell me.. Are you nervous because of this marriage.. Dii don't be aapko pata hai Rey aap ko kitna pyaar karte hai aur aap bhi too Rey sei pyaar kartei ho.. So there's no need to be afraid" taani started to explain kriya..

"I know.. I .. Wo . Mujse . Pyaar. But.." kriya was unable to stop her tears from falling.. " dii don't cry okk.. calm down.. aap panni pio.. Have some water.. And then tell me ki kya hua??" taani said and gave her a glass of water.

Kriya after drinking water was much more calmed then before.. She then spoke " Taani do you remember mene who Dance Academy , New York mei apply kiya tha to pursue furthur in dance.." on seeing Taani nodding her head. she continued " abhi unka phone aaya tha and the accepted me on their scholarship program.. Unhone kha ki they'll provide me all the facilities.."

"wow di.. Yeh too bahut aachi baat hai.. Now you can fullfill your dreams.. Par fir aap ro kyu rahe the??"

" Taani they gonna provide me with scholarship only if i.. i.. Would accept their terms and conditions and.. They want me to fly to New York today itself.. Unhone meri tickets book karva di hai.. I don't know what to do??" fresh tears started coming into her eyes again..

"Taani.. Yeh yeh.. Mere mom aur dad ki last wish thi.. Ki.. Ki.. Mei.. Ek best dancer banoo.. And muje yeh moka Mila but aisi situation mei.." she said between her sobs..

"dii rone sei kuch nahi hoga.. Plzz dii don't give up.. Aap Rey sei kyu baat nahi karti.. I really think ki vo samaj jaayenge.."

"Taani' mei kya baat karu Rey sei ki mei apni selfish need ki vaja se i. can't marry him.. I don't think ki mei usse face bhi kar paaungi.."

"but dii.."

"Taani please help me.. Muje nahi samaj aa raha ki mei kya karoo.. Pllease Taani help me.."

"dii.. Please calm down.. Bhai ha.. Bhai aapki help kar saktei hai.. Mei abi un ko bulakar laati hu.." but kriya stopped her. " agar humne sawaym ko bata diya too vo Rey ko bata dega.. And I am reall not ready too face Rey.." sudddenly Kriya's phone started ringing.. Kriya with shaky hands attends the call.. " ha thik hai.. But aapne too.. Lekin.. Please try to understand.. Mei itni jaldi.. Hello.. Helloo.." the cell phone slips from Kriya's hand onto the floor..

"dii.. Kya hua".. On getting no respond from Kriya she starts shaking her.. " di kya hua"..

"Taani.. Wo log.. Wo log khe rahe hai. Ki meri flight is in an hour.. And agar muje New York Academy mei join karna hai. Then I have too leave now.. Aab mei kya karu' Taani I can't I can't let this oppurtunity slip from my hand.. Muje fir sei vaha addmission milna mushkil ho jaayenga if I left it now'"

"di I think aap ko apne dil ki sunni chaiye.. aap ka dil jo kheta hai aap vo karoo.. Just close your eyes and feel what you see.."

Kriya closes her eyes and then find herself dancing on a big stage and everyone applauding her,' praising her' she then sees her parents smiling at her.. This bring a sweet smile on her face.. "Taani I have decided.."

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AT THE BACKSIDE OF THE BUILDING..

"dii.. aap sahi mei kisi ko kuch nahi batana chahati.. " Taani asked her sister sincerely..

"nahi taani I can't.. I mean mei aapna decision kisi ko nahi bata paaungi.. I am strong enough to face them all Taani.. actually I myself don't know ki whether I am doing right or not.. too mei un saab ko kaise samjao?? Muje too baas itna pata hai ki If I doesn'I accept that scholarship program too mei apne aap ko kabhi face nahi kar paaungi.." Kriya said with tears in her eyes..

"di it's okk.. I can understand.. lekin I really think ki aap ko ek baar saab sei baat kar leni chaiye.." taani pleads her. " Taani why aren't you understanding.. mei nahi face kar paaungi un saabko.. mei nahi dekh paaungi Rey ki aankho mei aapne liye nafrat.. and I won't be able to accept the fact ki vo saab muje selfish samje.. please taani.."

"it's okk dii.. mei saan handle karne ka try kaarungi.."

"thank you so much Taani.. Thank you so much.."Kriya said and hugged her tightly.. " vo shaadi ka joda Rey ko vapas kar dena.. and saabsei meri taraf sei maafi mang lena.. I know yeh kaafi nahi hai but.. I hope ki ek din saab muje maaf kar dei.. aur Rey kaash vo samaj jaaye mene yeh kyu kiya hai.."

"dii.. don't worry.. Rey aapsei bahut pyaar karte hai.. vo samaj jaayenge.." she closed her eyes fearing stopping the unshead tears from shedding..

" I hope so.. aur saab ka dhayan rakhna and khudka bi.. time par khana khana.. humesha ki tarah nahi ki khane ko chod pata nahi ka khoi hui rheti hai.. aur.."

"bas bas dii.. agar aap aise hi muje hug karte karte mere faults ginti rahi too aapki flight miss ho jaayengi.. come on now.. aapke dreams aap ka wait kar rahe hai.." Taani cuts her in between and breaks the hug..

"ok then it's a good bye.."

"ya it's a goodbye.. take care di.. would miss you.. and pahuch kar call karna.. and don't worry I'll try to handle everything.."

"bye.." saying so kriya left from the backdoor..

"hey krishnaji.. dii ki help karna.."

Sawaym who came at the backside was hell shocked and aghast to see Kriya going in the taxi from the backdoor.. and Taani waving at her with tears in her eyes..

"Taani.." he goes near her "what the hell.. vo kriya kha ja rahi hai.." he runs towards the taxi shouting her name.."kriya.. kriya.." but the taxi vanishes from his sight so he again goes inside..

"Taani come on say something.. was that kriya.. vo kha gayi hai.. abi usski shaadi hai and she.." he shakes her shoulder badly..

"bhai.. di is gone." And she narrates the whole story from the moment of the phone call uptill she left with tears in her eyes..

"Taani how can you.. agar kriya nai nahi too tum.. tumhei too muje saab batana chaiye the na.. aab hum saabko kya kahenge.. everyone is waiting there.. how can you.. tumhei samaj mei nahi aaya kit um dono k ek faislei ki vajah sei dono family ki reputation stake par aa jayengi.." he moved his hands in his hair..

"I am.. sorry bahi.. I.. I really didn't know kip rob.. problem itni itni badi ho jaayengi.. muje.. muje laga ki ki I can handle but.." Taani started crying uncontrollably..

"shh' Taani shh.. don't cry.. don't.. Taani.." he hugged her.. "tumhei pata hai I can't withstand any of you shedding tears.. and you too.. isliye shayad tumnei Kriya ki help ki.. But aab plzz chup ho jaao.."

He then cleaned her face.. "we'll think of something.. we'll think.. but humei kisi ko kuch nahi batana hai.. not even Rey.. ok.." on seeing her nodding he continued.. "Hum Rey ko nahi baatayenge ki humnei Kriya ko yaha sei bhaga diya hai.. I don't know how.. but we'll think of something.." Taani knew his bhai was saying more to himself then her since he need assurance'

"yes bhai we'll think of something.." they both stared in the direction where Kriya left wishing her success.. their trance was broken by the noise of breaking of glass.. They both turned their heads and were horrified on seeing Rey there with a broken glass near his feat.. The trios were staring each other..

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ A LITTLE MOMENT AGO

Sharon with a glass of water was rushing towards the backside of the building. When Rey stopped her..

"so Mrs Shekhawat aap itni jaldi mei kha ja rahi hai?"

"Mei vo.. Sawaym ko.. paani" showing him the glass of water' "vo he was feeling thirsty.. isliye.."

"really.. thirsty.. I mean use paani hi chaiye than a.."

"ha kyu??"

"nahi vo backside mei.. vaha too bahut dark hoga abi and vaha.." Rey teased her..

"oh! Shut up Rey.. Ek kaam karoo tum de kar aa jao use paani.." saying so she gave him the glass and ran away from there..

"Arre.. Sharon' so Mr Sawaym Shekhawat.. mei aa raha hoo tumhari pyaas bujane.." smiling himself he left from there to go to the backside..

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"Rey.." whispered Sawaym.. He started to move forward but Rey stopped him.. "nahi.. just tell me.. is.." closing his eyes.. "is this true.."
"Rey meri baat too sun.."

"sirf haa ya nahi.."

Taani was about to speak when Sawaym cuts her.."Ha.." sawaym closed his eyes in fearing of seeing his friend eyes filled with agony, anger but more from pain and distrust towards him..

"kyu.. why.. why me.. mere saath hi kyu.. bachpan sei hi mere saath.. but jab tum log muje mile.. I .. I felt ki baas aab nahi.. but.." unable to stand on his feet Rey fell down on the ground with tears falling from his eyes constantly..

"Rey meri baat sun.." Sawaym who feared of something like this to happen move towards him to help him..

"Don't.. don't Sawaym.. aaj fir sei.. aaj fir sei mere trust ko.. mere best friend nei itni aasani sei todd diya.."

Unable to see both his love ones in this state Taani spoke in between.." bhai nei kuch.."

"shut up.. just shut up.." Rey shouted on her.. Taani's eyes went wide in fear and hurt.. and they automatically filled with tears..

"Rey.. calm down.. vo meri bhen hai.. I mean I know hum sei galti hui hai.. but how could you talk to her like that.."

Rey stood up from the ground and just shrug his shoulders and turns away.. "aur jo tune kiya vo' I thought tu mera bestest buddy hai.. but you too are same.. tub hi un saab ki jaise hai.. I hate you all.. I just hae you all.."

Saying this he started moving away from there.. away from his bestest buddy.. away.. where he himself doesn't know.. He was unable to think whom to talk.. where to go.. fresh tears started forming in his eyes again.. he doen't know why everyone leaves him.. why everyone betrays him.. Is he was that unlovable' his trust, faith , love , affection.. all was broken once again.. were shattered in millions of small pieces .. and this time he really think that no one can mend these pieces..

He numbly walked inside.. all were shocked to see him like this.. Sharon , Vicky, Neha , Amar all were asking him calling his names.. but all seems to be fading away' all the noise doesn't reaches his ears.. He once again was officially all alone..

Sawaym and Taani hurriedly came after him.. and told their family to come into the room upstairs.. dadi was holding Rey's hand and took him upstairs with all others.. Sawaym then told everyone the truth excluding the unnecessary details.. Dadi consoled Rey.. and made him feel better than before..

"Rey.. tu thik too hai na." Vicky sat near him on the couch.. while Amar , Neha were standing with Sawaym and others..
"ha.. I am fine.. " Sawaym noticed that he was much more calmed so he goes near him and started talking to him..
"dekh Rey i know.. ki jo kuch hua usse you are very hurt.. but meri baat ek baar too sunn.."
rey cutts him in between and stands from the couch .. "kya pata hai tuje.. ha kya.. teri love story too complete ho gayi hai na.. aur na hi tuje tere best friend sei dhoka mila hai.. then what do you know.."
vicky also stands up.." dekh rey humei pata hai ki tuu bahut gussa hai.. par ek bar Sawaym ki baat too sun leii.. .Just listen to him once.."
"kyu sunno.. muje kisi ki koi baat nahi sunni hai.. I really don't trust anybody.."
"Rey.."
"I said muje kuch nahi sunna.. Just shut up all of you.." he atlast shouted on all of them..
on hearing the commotion Mr and Mrs Singhania , Dadi and Smiriti all goes towards them..
"Keep Quiet all of you.. Is this the time for fighting .. Don't you all think we all had a bigger problem ahead.. I want all of you to just keep quiet and sit on the couch" mr singhania said with anger and pointed to the couch at the end of the room..

All of them went and sat quietly on the couch'

Rey was having the look of betrayl , anger and tears in his eyes.. His great and bestest friend whom he thought he could relay on and the love of his life both had given him a huge shock.. He was a man with Broken Heart and a Broken Soul.. He still was unable to believe that it was all real.. But unfortunately it was..

Sawaym and Taani of remorse and regreat.. Sawaym knew how much Rey loved Kriya.. How can he not know when he himself had helped him to propose her.. He knew how hard Rey had tried and how long he had waited for this day to come' He knew how important this day was to him.. From childhood uptill now he hadn't received the love he should have.. so now when the wait was finally over destiny took all of it away from him once again..

Taani doesn't know what she should do now so as to take out everyone out of the mess she had unknowingly created.. She just wished that everything would sort sooner.. And this shouldn't affect the bond they share.. The bond that was between the most importantpeople in her life.. The bond between REY-SAWAYM-KRIYA-Sharon'

Sharon was totally confused and was having a hard time deciding whom to support and whom to give assurance .. She doesn't know whether she should assure her husband or her bestest friend because she knew both needs her equally..

Vicky, amar and neha were equally feeling bad for both of their bestfriends and were hoping that their frienship can handle this tough time and overcome these hurdles..

On one side of the room the youngsters facing hard time in experiencing the new lessons of their life while on the other side the oldies were having difficulty to find a proper solution in the current situation they were now..

"Bhaishab , muje maaf kar dijiye.. Meri aur family ki ek galti kei karan aap logo ko itni bejatti jhelni padhegi.." smiriti said while folding her hands In front of Rey's parents with tears in her eyes..

"nahi.. Issmei aap ki kya galti hai .. Aur vaise bhi is time par humei yeh sochna chaiye ki aage kya kare" Rey's dadi said while holding her folded hands..
"ha. Humei kuch too karna hi padhega.. Humari family ki reputation is at sake.." mrs singhania said..

All were having the same question in their minds irrespective of their age 'what to do next??'

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P.S:- sorry for grammatical errors..
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Edited by Freakin_girl - 12 years ago
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loved your writing.
story is too good.

can't wait more..
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Hey awesome story
good work pls cont soon

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