OS - Love In Inferno

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toblerone

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow, that was really good.. 👍🏼

totally different view, i liked that!!

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

Yup even he is my favorite Darcy hot dashy rude but still perfect
Him and lizzie are my favorites of Jane Austen man pride and prejudice is the best
Well that sure was a weird way to go about showing his love
But that's no excuse for trying to get rid of the baby
Okay maybe she is always more worried of her brother then you should have told her right
Guess he was too far gone to realise what he was doing
That sure explains things right but this obsession to make her feel for him sure got out of hand dude
He did love her but his love got tainted by his madness
So she did forgive him and that was emotional
Wow girl that was fantastic
Cheers for pm

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fffan123

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was a totally different point of view. Loved it.

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mrign

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey i liked ur different take on Anjali-Shyams story.. maybe they cud have done something like this in the serial as well... I still feel that Shyams exit was not handled well the serial..

Thanks for the pm and keep the OSs coming :)

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Piyali

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was amazin...loved it...thnks 4d pm..

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

heart breakingly beautiful...very well written

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Shay

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Posted: 12 years ago

Disha

You have honestly out done yourself. I have so much praise for you right now.

Firstly, i am so so glad you have done an OS from the point of view of Anjali. In the show, we had those couple of episodes when she burnt all of Shyams clothes... And then that was it! baat Khatam!

So with this OS, you have managed to realistically portray the realisation and anguish Anjali must have been feeling at the time! Beautifully done.
I love how you've made her such a strong character... How she doesn't want to be seen as weak; how she's trying to be strong for everyone - especially Arnav and Khushi.

And then the letter... This bit was unexpected, but i love the turn you've put on Anjali and Shyams relationship. I love how you put that essence of love between them. It was touching i must admit - it was nice to know there was at least something between them (at least in this OS😆) because Anjali always seems to end up being made a fool of in the show... Here you've given her some substance and dignity. Hats off Disha 👏

Lastly, i loved this last line:

What no one saw was the little tear glistening on her cheek or the silent "I forgive you" which was carried away by the wind into the horizon.

There's no complaints, there's no blame being made to Arnav or anything... It's just a simple forgiveness without any baggage. And plus i just love the way you've worded it... It's like a silent goodbye being washed in to her past as she leaves it behind for good.

Absolutely brilliant

Shay X

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shay1990
Disha

You have honestly out done yourself. I have so much praise for you right now.

Firstly, i am so so glad you have done an OS from the point of view of Anjali. In the show, we had those couple of episodes when she burnt all of Shyams clothes... And then that was it! baat Khatam!

So with this OS, you have managed to realistically portray the realisation and anguish Anjali must have been feeling at the time! Beautifully done.
I love how you've made her such a strong character... How she doesn't want to be seen as weak; how she's trying to be strong for everyone - especially Arnav and Khushi.

And then the letter... This bit was unexpected, but i love the turn you've put on Anjali and Shyams relationship. I love how you put that essence of love between them. It was touching i must admit - it was nice to know there was at least something between them (at least in this OS😆) because Anjali always seems to end up being made a fool of in the show... Here you've given her some substance and dignity. Hats off Disha 👏

Lastly, i loved this last line:

What no one saw was the little tear glistening on her cheek or the silent "I forgive you" which was carried away by the wind into the horizon.

There's no complaints, there's no blame being made to Arnav or anything... It's just a simple forgiveness without any baggage. And plus i just love the way you've worded it... It's like a silent goodbye being washed in to her past as she leaves it behind for good.

Absolutely brilliant

Shay X

I really don't know hat to say. I'd be lying if I say I don't thirst for your comment on anything I write. You always comment so generously and I feel like maybe I'm good at this😛

Yeah, there was this much needed track to Anjali...she wouldn't have just been okay all of a sudden, right? And Shyam...spurned lover over hateful maniac?

Thank you so so much🤗

Love ya,

Disha❤️

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Shay

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Madafterarhi

I really don't know hat to say. I'd be lying if I say I don't thirst for your comment on anything I write. You always comment so generously and I feel like maybe I'm good at this😛

Yeah, there was this much needed track to Anjali...she wouldn't have just been okay all of a sudden, right? And Shyam...spurned lover over hateful maniac?

Thank you so so much🤗

Love ya,
Disha❤️