OS - Love In Inferno

Originally posted by: shay1990

Disha

You have honestly out done yourself. I have so much praise for you right now.

Firstly, i am so so glad you have done an OS from the point of view of Anjali. In the show, we had those couple of episodes when she burnt all of Shyams clothes... And then that was it! baat Khatam!

So with this OS, you have managed to realistically portray the realisation and anguish Anjali must have been feeling at the time! Beautifully done.
I love how you've made her such a strong character... How she doesn't want to be seen as weak; how she's trying to be strong for everyone - especially Arnav and Khushi.

And then the letter... This bit was unexpected, but i love the turn you've put on Anjali and Shyams relationship. I love how you put that essence of love between them. It was touching i must admit - it was nice to know there was at least something between them (at least in this OS😆) because Anjali always seems to end up being made a fool of in the show... Here you've given her some substance and dignity. Hats off Disha 👏

Lastly, i loved this last line:

What no one saw was the little tear glistening on her cheek or the silent "I forgive you" which was carried away by the wind into the horizon.

There's no complaints, there's no blame being made to Arnav or anything... It's just a simple forgiveness without any baggage. And plus i just love the way you've worded it... It's like a silent goodbye being washed in to her past as she leaves it behind for good.

Absolutely brilliant

Shay X

Originally posted by: Madafterarhi

I really don't know hat to say. I'd be lying if I say I don't thirst for your comment on anything I write. You always comment so generously and I feel like maybe I'm good at this😛

Yeah, there was this much needed track to Anjali...she wouldn't have just been okay all of a sudden, right? And Shyam...spurned lover over hateful maniac?

Thank you so so much🤗

Love ya,

Disha❤️