Ariya ff : HUM-TUM(PART 49 PG 153 OCT 5) PM LATER - Page 60

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Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago
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PART 31
Door bell rings & Anjali open door.
The girl abt 9 to 10 yrs old , come in house & seat on Sofa like any aged tired woman.
" Oh... Mumma , plz jara Shrbat to lana , aur ha Ice ghar ka ho to hi dalna , & ha pani bhi jyada mat dalna , varna flavour ka taste nahi aayega... and ha make it fast ha... "
" Suchi ki bacchi... first go to Washroom , then change ur cloth & then i"ll give u Shrbat & all "
" Anjali yells on her with loud voice & Suchi runngily goes inside..
Ariya..
Riya lay on her bed & talking to somone.
" Bolo na.." she says sweetly..
" Mai kyu?" tum bhi bol sakti ho na?" he ask her ..
" Hmmm , nhi , baby plz na..." she requests him.
" Hey , im nt baby ok??? My parents gave me nyc name , Arjun" He says irritately.
" Ofo , Arjun time waste mat karo , varna Bhai aa jaayenge mujhe bulane.. " she inform him..
" Aur nahi to kya? Riya grow up , its 10 now & tum abhi bhi bed mai ho?" Arjun ask her in anger.
" O... plz ab tum Bhai ki tarah daatna mat, vaise tum kaha ho?"
" Of course Ofc mai " he answer her.
" Eee , kya Arju ... kabhi to kuch alag kaho na.." she says.
" Oho , aur vo kya?" Arjun ask her ..
" Yahi ki tumhari window ke saamne hue , tum ghar ke pass hue , kuch to romantic bolo na... " she says.
Arjun smile at that.. " Riya kya tum kabhi bhi badi hogi? ya phir aise hi rehogi?"
" Ummm , nhi , mai aise hi cute hue.. acha shonu ab jaldi jaldi bolo na..."
" Ok. I... " Arjun says.
" Ha , I .. " Riya starts..
" Dumbo , mujhe bolne to de.." Arjun complaints her , & Riya bite her lip..
" I... I have to go..." Arjun says in one breath & starts to smile loudly..
Riya groned angrily...
" You... chaeter... uuu ... u promise me ki har roj mujhe " I Luv You "
bolnge... I Hate U..." Riya angrily yells
" But i luv u my baby " Arjun says & kiss his phone..
" Arju.." she says lovngily.
" hmm "
" Ring meri pasand ki hogi , aur ha Ring ki purchasing ke liye mai & tum dono jaaynge , uske baad dineer , uske baad ice- cram &... " she about to complete , when Rathod barges in room & yells one her..
" Riya , ab kuch dino mai tumhari shadi ho jaayegi , ab to kuch seekho.." Rathod yells on her while opening curtains..
" Seekho kuch apne Bhai se " Arjun yells on her from phone..
" Bhai.." Riya calls him sweetly & flutters her eyelashes..
" ye sab Arjun ke saamne karna , mere saamne nhi , tera drama bahut ache se janta hue ... " Rathod says while pointing his finger towards her..
" Ummm" Riya says & tip-tip toe on her foot & hug Rathod..
" Bhai .. im hungry.." she complaints him..
" Aaa. mera baccha... " Rathod says & kiss her forehead..
Riya stands & goes to bathroom for brush with her phone.. Rathod goes behind her & snatched phone from her,
" Hello , Arjun? Ha tere se baad mai karegi , aur ha vo kal ki case file read kar... abhi meeting hai.." Rathod says & cut call..
" Riya starts her brush , Rathod about to go from there But he stop when he hears..
" Ummm , uuummm"
Rathod turns & sees Riya call him , her eyes are big , her mouth fill with toothpaste & she catch her tooth brush between her teeth while brushing..
" Kya?" Rathod ask her..
" Ammm" Riya spreads her hands ..
Rathod smile & give her hug , Riya immeadtly give kiss on his cheeck & then wave her hand to him..
" Cheee Riyu , pure gaaal pe toothpaste laga di.." Rathod irritately says..
" Riya starts to smile.. Suddenly she starts to cough ( jor si hasi to toothpaste ka zaak throat se andar chala gaya)
Rathod immeadtly patts her back & Hold her hair..
Riya rinses her mouth quickly & hug Rathod..
" Are kya hua? are dar gaya mera shona ?" Rathod ask her while patted her back..
Riya feels so different when toothpaste goes andar her throat , she feels something gng to happen her..
Rathod smile at himself..
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Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago
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Sper awesome update loveit plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally... aftr months u updated this one...
ARiya is so cute... loved her antics... continue soon
P.S : wat happened to your other stories update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update :) loved it
love the way suchi was ordering anjali :)
loved ariya's conversation on phone <3
I love you part was so cute :)
riya is such a cutie pie :)
love riya and rathore's bonding :)
can't wait to read more
continue soon
Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb,...!!!
ariya's convo was lovely...
aur riya ke antics were too cutee...!!1 <3
suchi aur anjali scenes were amazing...!!! love the way she was ordering her...!!!😆
hahah sameeer sab jaanta hai...!!! ki she was talking to arjun...!!!
the way he snatches phone and orders arjun was funny...!!!
awww loved sameer and riya's bonding...!!! this bro sis moments are shoo shweett...!!
continue soon...!!
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Riya & Sameer comes to Breakfast , Sameer catch Apple & about to eat , his wife snatch Apple & signals him to seat..
" No way , im already late.." Sameer says loudly to inform him..
While Riya look at Roshni's plate & makes faces after seeing Break fast. Roshni give her same food & Riya says loudly ,
" Eee no... ye koi Break fast hai , i want... " but stop when Sameer & Suhani glares at her..
" Nahi , ye to Healthy hai , Rosh Di dekh kya rahi ho , khao na.." Riya says to Roshni who look at her with grin..
" Mujhe kya lagta hai Suhani , ki ab kal se Break- fast Riya ko banane do.. she lreant cook from u na... Sameer says
Roshni chokes her food & starts to smiling..
" Kyu has rahi ho? mai sab bana sakti hue " Riya complaint her..
" Nhi nahi... mai to bas vo din yaad kar rahi thi jab tum 10 saal ki thi & Bhai ke peeche padi thi ki tum Break -fast bana logi & Bhai ne pata nhi kya soch ke tumhe ha bol diya... kya Break - fast tha vo ,,, va va ... Chai mai namak , doodh ka pata nhi , aur bread vo to poore kaale .. aur vo kya tha vo... ammm ha ... kuch squre sa... ha paratha , vaise tha kij cheez ka?? usmai to kuch bhi nahi tha... " Roshni says while laughing..
Suhani also joins her & Sameer too.
But one look at Riya & Sameer stop.. Riya starts to cry silently..
" Rosh stop it... " Sameer says 7 pull Riya closer to him.. Riya hides her face in his shirt , after somtime she turn her face to Roshni & shows her toungue...
Roshni about to say somthing but Sameer slightly slap Riya on her cheeck & mouth..
" Riya what is this?? jitni bholi tum ho na , utni dikhti nahi ho? " Sameer says . he about to sy further but his cell ringing.. he pick call & left..
AT EVE
Ariya walking hand in hand on Beach..
Riya looking at chat wala , & others snacks corner , but no-one dares to come near them , because all knows The SuperCop..
Arjun who silently looking at waves , & feels happy when wave hit his feets..
" Arjun..." Riya slowely call him..
" Hmm"
" Bhookh lagi hai.." Riya informes him..
" Madam per yaha Hyginec kuch nahi hai.."
" par, bhookh lagi hai.." Riya says & pouting her face..
" Ok.."
They goes to Rest.. & Riya happily orders her fav dish .. after that Cold- drink..
" Arjun.."
" Ha.."
" Mujhe Circus dekhna hai.."
" What The???" Arjun says & spat his Tea..
" Chai achi nahi hai?" Riya ask him , while Arjun is look at her..
" Tum Sameer ko bata do na ..." he frees himself
" Ok.."
"Arjun" she agin calls him.
" Now what ?? Ri dekho ab mai..."
" Arjun mujhe job karni hai" Riya says & look at him ..
" What ??? why???? Baby u can't????? its not for u????? u ???" Arjun ask her so many q's & she just look at him confusdely..
" ammm , just inform Sameer about it.. "
" jaao mujhe tumse baat hi nhi karni.." Riya says & goes from there.
Arjun pays bill & follow her , she siletly stand near his Car.
AT HOME..
" kya hua?" Roshni ask her at door step.. ( she opes door for Ariya)
Riya hugs her & Roshni look at Arjun who shrugs his shoulder.. leaving them at door step he goes to Sameer who watching movie ..
" Su.. ye koi movie hai?? kuch acha stuff dekho yaar , like " Man Of Steel"
" Vo koi movie thi ?? aisa laga ki log sirf A./ C mai neend puri karne aate hai , aur ye movie dekho.. kitna pyar hai in dono mai , " she dramaily says..
" Eeeuck.." Sameer says & makes faces.
" Sammy "
On Scene one passinote scene is playing..
Suhani just look here & there , Arjun just start to fiddle with his cell & Sameer immeadtly whispers into Suhani's ears ,
" Ise to mai acha karta hue.."
Suhani ran to room , Sameer just smile at her back .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update... Roshini howdare she made fun of our doll... but the breakfast was really horrible lol...
Ariya scene was cute aww Riya want to watch circus baby u are in college na???? oh she wants to work but Arjun is not ready to send her... hmm protective streak... naughty Sam😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was such an amazing update :) loved it
awww sameer wants riya to make breakfast from now on :)
roshni made fun of riya :(
awww riya started crying
ariya scenes were super cute :)
awww riya wants to see circus
and arjun spit out his tea hearing that 😆
and now she wants to do job
but arjun doesn't want her too
last part was so cute
sameer is so naughty 😉
can't wait to read more
please continue soon

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