** MY BEST FRIEND** last prt updated..pg-4

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Trupti Sawant

@Trupti09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

awww loved swayam and aks bond.sharon is so cute.loved swaron confession.loved last lines about friendship.pls dont stop writing.we all r waited for ur ffs update.pls update soon.

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

That was a really emotional ending !! Though Swayam got Sharon in the end, I can understand the pain of losing your best friend !! Very well written !!

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TANHA_H

@TANHA_H

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

AWOSM HIMANI gREAT WORKWAITING UR OTHER FF UPDATES

UPDATE SOON PLZZZ

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

DOSTI KARNA ASAAN..

NIBHANA BOHAT MUSHKIL...

DOST KHONA ASAAN..

DOSTI BHUL JAANA BOHAT MUSHKIL

true himi...

beautifully penned...thanks for the pm...

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Karen Johnson "Maria"

@Karen_sharon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Luvd the update dear...perfect ending to a perfect od...and yaar kabhi kabar Swaron in village pe daya karke use upd8 kar de 😆

Karen (Maria)

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

As deepika said its requires a lot of skill to make a new character amidst a set of fixed characters and make people care for her. And it becomes even more hard if its an OS. But kudos to you successfully not only introduced a character but make your reader attached to it. Wonderfully done. Awesome update and worthy conclusion for this OS. Swayam and Akansha first conversation was nicely done and then the way you presented her feeling was something really engaging as a reader. And then the way you summed up the OS with SwaRon convo was just perfect. Enjoyed this beautiful piece of writing.