Kriyansh SS: Some one behind you (Discontinued) - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
intersting and scary update ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
@lovely7010: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Awesome updte maneet..!!..
just loved it..!1...
just wish ki that girl in rey's drm kriya na ho..!!..
ek advice hai kriya ko mat marna warna log tujhe maar denge..😆 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Hello...uh we know we're super late and sorry for that. Here's the next chappy. Enjoy.


CHAPTER 2:


After some time Swayam, Neha, Vicky, Rey and Taani left for the college. Neha felt a little weird. The air in the city and the air around her house were a little different. She couldn't understand. The air around her house contained a lot of emotions. It contained a mixture of hurt, anger, love. She could actually feel those emotions. Neha was so much disturbed that she couldn't even concentrate on the classes. It had just been a single day she shifted there and for heavens sake she's really frightened to go back there. But then she was determined to find out more about that house.

Vicky, all this while was concerned about her. Though they weren't in a relationship any longer but he still carved for her, cared for her and most importantly, loved her. Rey nudged vicky on seeing him lost somewhere. They were in the canteen.
"What wrong dude???" rey asked him
"uh nothing...its just neha"
"Neha?? whats wrong with her??"
"I myself don't know...but right from this morning she's behaving different and weird. Even in her house, though she pretended to be fine...She's not...I'm very sure something has happened with her,"
"Agar kuch huya hota toh voh hume batati..."
"I know dude but still I don't want her to live in that house"
"I agree...even I find that house creepy"
"Yeah but neha ko kaun samjhaye...vo bahut stubborn hai"
"Yeah I guess so"

They completed their remaining classes and every one dispersed for their home. Neha was standing in the parking lot. Vicky saw and approached her.
"Hey...mein tumhe ghar drop kardu?" Vicky asked.
She was a bit hesistant at first bit then replied "ok". Both of them went towards vicky's car but found that one tyre was punctured.
"Ab kya kare??" Asked neha.
Vicky was thinking the same and then his eyes spotted rey near his car. Vicky called out to him loudly asking him to stop.
"Kya huya dude??"
"Arrey vo mein neha ko drop karne wala tha, but meri car ka tyre puncture ho gaya hai...toh kya tu mujhe aur neha ko drop kar sakta hai??"
"Yeah guys...hop in"

The trio left. Rey first dropped vicky at his house since ot was on the way. Then he dropped neha to her new house. He bid bye to her and left. Neha was feeling a little scared. It was evening and she was alone there. Gathering courage, she slowly started walking towards the door. She tried unlocking it but it wouldn't get opened. She tried to push it but still it didn't get opened. She thought of using the back door. As she was about to leave, the door suddenly opened with a bang, making a loud noise, scaring neha. As she neared the entrance, speedy win started blowing from the house, almost pushing neha outside. Her hairs were flying and the air was dirty. She couldn't see anything. Neha was coughing badly. Her bag dropped on to the floor. With a lot of difficulty she entered the house. As soon as she entered the wind stopped blowing. The whole house was covered in dirt, like it was before she bought it.

She thought of cleaning the house. She started from her room. All this while she could feel some one's presence. She could feel some one standing right behind her. Her room was very quite. After she entered the room the door got locked. She was very scared. She banged it, pushed it, tried everything to open it but nothing worked. Even the windows shut tight, not letting the air to pass. She was suffocating in there. Tears were flowing down her cheeks. She leaned against the wall. All of a sudden two hands covered with blood came out of the wall encirlcing her neck. She shouted so loud hoping they would disappear. Those hands started pressing her neck. She was coughing but still with all her efforts she pushed those hands away. Her hands were covered in blood. She was shocked. The dooe got opened and she ran downstairs. With those blood covered hands she started searching for her phone. The first person who came to her mind was vicky. She immediately dialed his number but it was switched off. She was confused whom to call. She then thought of calling rey hoping he would be in the half way. Rey was confused why did neha call. It had been only half an hour he'd dropped her. Putting aside his thoughts he picked up.
"Hello neha...everything fine"
"Rey plz help..plzz" her voice was choking. Before he could speak further he heard neha shout and the call got disconnected.

He was damn worried for her. He reversed his car and zoomed off to her place. She was like his sister. On the other hand neha was very much afraid. Saying that she was only scared would be an understatement. She had shouted because it was blood raining inside the house. From one corner of the ceiling in the house blood drops were falling. This made her shout on the phone and automatically the phone got cut. She was sitting on the floor. She leaned on the couch and dug her head between her knees and weeped. Rey quickly reached there. He saw the door was opened. He was shocked to see the house in messy state. His eyes popped out when he saw blood on the floor.
"N...neha" he called out but got no response. He searched for her and finally found her behind the couch. He put his hand on her shoulder. On realizing his hand neha jerked up to see who it was. She calmed down on seeing rey. But rey was shocked on seeing her in this condition. Her eyes were red, her kajal was spread and there was blood on her hands.
"Neha yeh sab??"
She then narrated everything. He hugged her and patted her head like an elder brother would do. Both of them jerked on hearing growling sounds. Even rey was scared. The sounds were becoming very loud with each passing second. Both of them covered their ears with their hand unable to bear the sound. They closed their eyes too.

After a while those sounds stopped. They opened their eyes and were astonished to see the wall in front.
"YOU WILL HAVE TO PAY FOR IT SOON" was written in blood on it. Suddenly an image of 2 girls came infront of their eyes. They were covered in black. The didn't know who they were but could feel that they were some one close to them. One of the girls was standing there lifelessly and then a car came and hit them. The image vanished. Both of them hell scared.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
amazng
lovd it...
yeah scary tha...
ab raat ko ek baar aur padngi taki sone mai help hogi..
🤣 🤣
yeh hai kn...???
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
btw 2 girls hai...
kn hngi..??
aur ek yeh kar kaun raha hai..??
kriya toh nai hogi...
i thnk... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Awesm update..bt muje dar lga dkha update bi dar gya mujse 😆 N 2 grls shayad ek kriya jisko inmei se kisi ne car se thok diya hoga bt dusri kaun..update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
res plz Done
nyc😆😆 update
Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
amazing!!
rain of blood dhar toh lagge ga na
the two girls must be kriya & vish
update soon and do pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Amazing update...
I think d girls must be Kriya n Vishaka

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