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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
sorry guys aaj epilouge nahi milega...mere kuch readers jo comment nahi kiya ...unki waiting...
last part hai yaar ...i want total comments for this
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
awesome
just loved it
congrats 4 new thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
its really beautiful Deethu
I loved it
Finally KriYaansh ek ho gaye
OMG Rey to isme bhi naughty hai hhehehehee
Ahahhahannn!!!!! Chalo Rey ko ye to pata chal Ki Kriya knows dance
thodi aur tarifff kar leta to kya chahta
Aise mat bol yaar mujhe ye SS bahut pasand hai
May God bless you with so many ideas either to continue it ya to start a new one
Jaldi update karna
will be waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Hawww.. Ye kya??? Ye toh khtm ho gya????
M really gonna miss it 😭 😭 😭

Umm..
Cmn bk to d update.. Deetha.. I jus loved it.. It was Perfect..
Aftr readin d last part I too was wonderin y Reyaansh signed those papers n here I got my answer..
I loved when he said he dun want any divorce..It was jus a way to meet kriya.. He surely has got brains !!

N thn whn he askd kriya tht does she really is uncomfortbl wid his touch b thn when kriya explained evrythn to him.. I loved it all.. Yippeee.. Kriyaansh r alas togthr!

Haha.. Reyaansh ko kriya ja dance ka b pta chl gya.. Poor reyaansh.. He ws all confused shockd hurt n wht nt.. N kriya..she too realised tht somewhr she has hurted him bt I really lovd how they sorted it out..
Thr love showed its strength!
Kriya made realise tht she was hurt when she gotta know tht he dont evn bothr to listen abt hr at d time of thr marriage..
It was picture perfect.. Loved it to d core n unka romance.. As I always say ur d best at it.. U agn prooved it right..

Umm.. M actly nt abl to describe wht m feelin aftr readin it..
M all anazed mesmerised n wht nt..
Lvd it lvd it lvd it :p
Great job..!!

Bt still m sad.. Its endin :(
Nw u'v start a new one :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Amazing update di..finaly evrything is sorted out..update the epilouge soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Awsome!!!!!!!!!! loved it alot
hayee kya baat hero ka plan mast tha bohat
n aww love dere kiss NOW hehe

finally pta chal gaya dat she is dancer...
hehehe late latif

n heroin epilouge post kr jaldi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Deetha epilogue de de plz. Mera net kharab ho gaya hai. So mob se ol hu. And i cant come to fb from mobile
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Sry for late comment...
First of all congras for new thread

awesome part... Loved it
pls deetha update epilogue soon...
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
okies pehle mujhe jhoota maarna band karo tab jaake mai bahar aake update de sakti hun...

without bakwas here goes epilouge...warna log kacha chaba denge

my dear readers kal jiska bhi exam ho plzz meri update mat padna...and i warn paani bagal mei ho and khane khake padiyo... agar tum log behosh hogaye toh i dnt take any responsibility!!!!!😳



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two days passed... kriya was always busy with her "sasuma" ... this irked rey a lot...

"kriya.!!!!! "he shouted checking a file on lappy...

no reply...

"kriya!!!!! behri ho kya???'" he shouted irritatedly...

and in a min she came there...

"kya hua rey??"she asked tensed...

"jar khali kyun hai??? maine tumse bola na hamesha fill karke rakhne keliye??"he said and shouted on her...

"sorry... "she said and left out with jar for filling it...

************

"rey tu aise bahu pe chilla kyun raha tha???"preeti asked at the dining table...

"oh toh aapse complain ki isne???"rey said looking irritatedly at kriya she looked away...

"teri maa behri nahi hai...rey tu toh uss din bada keh raha tha ki ab sab theek hoga... toh tum bahu se aise behave kyun rahe ho???"she asked...

"mom plzz mujhe chain se khane dijiye..."rey snapped...

"rey .."preeti tried...

"mom please...bhook lagi mujhe ..."he siad and looked narrowly at kria who looked at him with sad face...

after rey left kriya continued her work...preeti sighed and left...

rey went out to meet his frinds for an hour or two...

when he returned it was almost 3... it was the tym everyone will be busy taking a nap...along with their servants...so he jogged up silently to their room when he heard his fav song start...

he went upwards and what he saw made a sudden rush and pang of want all over his body... she in her normal attire for practise ( imagine the same as in dil se...yaad nahi aaya toh upar edit mei dekhlena)

she was dancing hard fully drenched in sweat making the cloth stick to her ... rey breathed hard as the anticipation was reaching its peak...he slowly walked


pehle to some ppl...i hate them... it was meant to be a surprise...par sab ne poochliya ki dil se pe dance sequence... uaannn...maine surprise denekeliye socha...mere saare sapnon pe paani pher diya tum logon ne... maine kuch dinon pehle kisiko bheja tha ab mai khud gaa rahi hun... "dil ki armaan aansuon mei behgaye...


ps: @paagal... dnt dare u laugh at me now...


he slowly walked towards the door as the song came to end...she went aside wiped her face and body with towel as his eyes followed her hands...literally he was kissing her with his eyes... she took the bottle drank a bit and poured on her face...he gulped hard as his eyes followed the water flowing from her face to throat and from there silently dissepearing into those deep valleys... how he wished he could stop them as she totally belonged to him ..and none had the ri8 to touch her that too at those sensitive places where even thinking of touching made him shiver...he leaned more onto the door as the water entered into her dress...and closed his fists tight...she replayed the song and stood in middle tapping her feet to the beats...the music itself made him tap automatically as heat rised from his body... there she started dancing ...she was perfect...with those perfect bold sharp moves... strtching her body making her top raise a bit from her waist making him more restless...she was taking continuous pyramids lost in her world when he looked at her from her toe to her hand finger and in between stopping at certain places of her curves ...he drack each cell of hers as the adrenaline rush increased ... and the song is not helping much...always when he danced he thought abt his life partner who would dance along with him completing his each step...

she made a semi circle with her upper body bending it back and as she stood up right she gave a jerk .. *dhak dhak jaise step hoti haina... heart beating wal* making him loose all his senses...he immediately pulled off his tee as usual he did before his routine and entered the hall...she swinged her head and turned and banged into him...she didnt expect him to be there...she with that sudden appearance flinched back making a distance between them... as soon as her eyes met his her breathing increased as his eyes were piercing into hers...her face flushed even before she can blink and stood there shocked...and to add more colour to her cheeks he was SHIRTLESS!!!!

he is such a sinner ...she wanted to kill him badly at the moment...

but how??? arrghhh!!! i wanna dug my nails into his chest kiss him and bite him till he dies... WHAT????/ kriya kya soch rahi hai... hey universe ji bachao mujhe... mujhe jaana chahiye...

she said to herself and tried to move but single cell of her body refused to move... her breath began uneven as his eyes trailed down cutting her skin with his gaze...

she started taking steps back as he follwed her his eyes never leaving hers...


okay guys now watch this video from 3:18. and do remember here he is not blindfolded and he was looking straight into his eyes and was chasing her ...and when she drooled on him he smirks... okay...now plzz watch and only then read further plzz...


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NcoJGhwTvvM[/YOUTUBE]



he trapped her and smirked at her as she looked with a tensed face at him...he kept on moving his head to the music and moving front slightly with each beat...as he went close to her she made a please -let -me-go face making him widen his smirk...she slightly started going down when he suddenly caught her shoulders pulling her up to position and crushed his lips over hers...she was sweating bad and was trying to free herself coz the heat from her and him realising were unbereable...she tried to push him when he crushed her between mirror and him kissing her wildly as if a hungry tiger having its prey...she closed her eyes tight and stayed quite as he was kissing her with such a force that she was not even able to respond and kiss him back...he crushed more making his way into her mouth exploring her mouth every bit...as his hands one back of her head pulling her face towards his and other on her arm clutching it tight ... as they were out of oxygen rey pulled back and kissed her neck hungrily...she was all the tym moaning making her wild animal having her more wild... finally he pulled back after biting her collar bone and looked at her...finally she opened her eyes totally lost in the world of pleasure and looked at him still feeling him kissing her...
he took two steps back and suddenly pulled her towards him making her bang into him...she looked at him with this sudden action as he slowly leaned in ...she blushed hard looking down and turned around when he clutched her waist and made her bang into him...as the song started again he clutched her waist more tight as she closed her eyes and leaned back onto his shoulder for support...he slowly dug his face in her neck and kissed her sensouosly...for which she reacted moaning..mmshe clutched his hair pulling him more into her neck...

suddenly he caught her wrists and pushed her front as she bent front with her ri8 leg bent back till her knees and looked in the mirror at him as he gave a evil smile to her...she looked down blushing and he again pulled her back and eft her hands letting her fall back ...she fell back opening her arms and her ri8 leg stretched up in the front as he balanced by catching her from back and throwed back making her stand...she stood looking down and breathing hard as he with ri8 hand turned her fiercely and she in result turned and she didnt expect him to be so close that her lips brushed his...he looked at her and pulled her forcely and took her lips into his...this tym he was soft but she cupped his face and kissed hard...and at a tym both pushed each other back...

and kriya balanced herself with the mirror as rey took help of the glass wall...he looked at her intensely as she looked away not able to meet his...after few secs she bent down to take her bottle...she drank the water and as her usual habit poured on her face when she froze...as soon as she started pouring water she felt his motuh on her throat drinking all the flowing water and sucking her throat she left the bottle and clutched his back of shirt as he went down sucking everydrop not letting even one drop to caress her...he kissed her in the deep cut of her dress making her maon his name...he looked up and stood straight looking at her...

" aaj dekh bhi leta hun...ki tum mujhse bach kaise paogi"he said looking at her as she blushed to core...

he caught her by waist lifted her straight and twirled and placed her in middle of the room...as soon as his hands touched her waist she closed her eyes...finally giving the 100 % control to him...he twirled her and when she was abt to fall he caught her by wrist (kisine dekha kaise arnav khushi ko temple ke paas pakad tha hai??) and pulled her up as she ended up with her tummy on his ri8 shoulder and he again flipped her back as if dusting a cloth and broght her close to him...he bit her cheeks...and kissed them...and again made her straight and caught her by waist and placed her on his thighs and he bent down carrying her weight ...she layed head hanging down back and was not in her senses...he caressed and senses her upper body with his ri8 palm and lifted her top a bit up and kissed her navel...she graoned in passion as he bit a flesh of her side of waist and clutched it squeezing it hard...she arched up a bit when he finally stood up making her body totally stick to his... and made her satnd on his feet and started swaying and dancing in a sexy was making both shudder as their muscles contracted when touched with each others...

he finally lifted her in arms as she layed her head hanging back still not able to stand what he was doing with her...he switched of the player and carried her to their room...as he was trying to open their room door she opened eyes and met him...

he looked at the nob and then at her as she follwed and whispered...

"fast"...she as if hypnotised quickly opened as he placed her on the bed and stood beside her quickly removing his belt after locking the door and flung upon her...but to his surprise she pushed him back and he fell on other side...

"what??"he as"ked irritated...

"mere hone se chain nahi milti??? mujhpe subah se chilla rahe ho... hamesha irritated..."she asked with a angry pout...

he suddenly pulled her towards him by waist and said...

"maine tumhe pasand karna bhi aise hi shuru kiya... so dnt expect me to not snap at u... i will only snap at u...got it??? "he said hoarsly with authority...

she sighed a hmm before he crushed her between him and bed...

"u wasted my 3 mins of tym...u gotta pay this"he said gripped her top tight at her valley and digging his face in the crook of her neck as she arched up cluthing the bedcovers as tight as she could and bitting her lip out of that sweet pleasure...



**************

"mom!!!!!!! not again!"rey cried rolling his eyes as his sexy wife and his mother hugged each other and cried...

theywere not ready to leave each other when ranvijay caught preeti and rey pulled kriya into boarding area...she looked away with a pout... they were in air...she hugged him when she got feared...he dug his face in her hair and was abt to kiss when she pushed him back as they were ito air already and looked away...he tried a lot to touch her but she showed off...

"paap lagega paap...maa beti ko aise alag karne keliye..."she fumed at him ...finally he was out of his patience level...he just bent forwards crushing his lips over hers she was too shocked she never expected him to do this in public...the air hostess who came to ask if they wanted something gulped hard and left...all the ppl around looked away ...finally he pulled back...

"jab lagega tab lagega ...abkeliye chup warna mai kya karoonga mujhe khudh nahi pata...ye bhi bhool jaunga ki hum flight mei hai"he said annoyed...

she looked at him feared...he can do anything...she feared but hit him and hugged him tight digging her face into the shirt with top two buttons opened her cheek resting on his bare chest ...she kissed him as he layed back on the seat moaning and sighing slightly of the pleasure...*none can hear him except his baatcutter*

**********

"argghhh tum fir se peeche padgayi"he groaned looking at her with that same juice glass back of him looking innocently at him..he finally drank and she left...but again he shouted...

"kria"he shouted...

after a min she came and asked…

"kya hua rey??"she asked slowly..

"kya hua??? Mera tie kaha hai?? "he asked angrily….

"sorry wo…..nikalna bhool gayi"she said slowly….

"mai tumse kitni baar kaun ki mujhe apni cheezein ready chahiye..??"he said irritated…

She sadly went and brought and gav him his tie…..

He was abt to leave when she came running…..

He was outside …

"kya hai??" he snapped…..

"aapki handkey"she said stammering…

He turned irritated and pulled her towards him by waist…..

"one step late…"he said looking at her…she looked confused at him….

"maine four steps leliya and u came now??? Aadat chooti gayi.practise karo…"he said looking at her intensely…

She looked down with a pout and said…"aapki toh bilkul nahi chooti na.hamesha mujhe dhaantna??"she pouted…

"coz we can only live that way with each other….."she looked up and smiled….he quickly took her lips into his….

She pushed him.. "rey bahar ..ye kya kar rahe ho??"she asked blushing…

"apni wife ko kiss kar raha hoon.not dnt disturb I should reach on tym"he said and kissed her like his life depended on it and finally pulled back kissing her forehead he left to the car….

"honey yaad haina parso hi humari honeymoon ki flight hai… packing shuru kardo….im gonna live it "he winked and drove of as she blushed hard….

Neelima who noticed all this from her house smiled

"finally ek ho hi gaye"she said smiling and carried her work…..

Kriya went into the house closed the door and stood leaning on the back blushing to core… remembering "im gonna live it"

There he was excitedly driving his hairs blowing and he tapping his feet to dil se and gng to office….

Here starts something beautiful of their lives……

Phew…..finally…

Ended…..

Hope u loved…

Like and comment plzz….

Love all

deetha😳

Edited by deetha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres

*gulp* ☺️
wht was dat ???
dam too hawt to handle yaar

arey dekh ph hath se gir gaya garam ho gaya h isliye 🤣

dam deethu dis was too hot
unka dance n dat to dil se rey n dat to too sexy n hot
hayeee ram kya bolu coz mai to sharam ke mare lal ho gyi hu ☺️ ☺️

loved it...loved it...loved it...loved it yaar
n ab koi b mere rey ko faltu bol kr dikhao 😡 huh!!!!!
hahahaha 🤣 🤣


yaayyy!!!!!! ye tha deetha style update 😉
n i loved it lyk hell
to hot
Edited by shaffy_arsha - 12 years ago

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