Lost in Your Eyes(Arshi SS)parts 1 to 28 - Page 85

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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh its a fabulous peace of fiction, totally loved it. You brought forward the emotional turmoil upto chapter 19 with elan with no way out for either Khushi or Arnav. Loved the ending too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I LOVE THIS!!!
"Love Scene Number 421" 🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maverickmartin

<font size="6" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#336699">I LOVE THIS!!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#336699"><font size="2">"Love Scene Number 421"🤣</font>🤣🤣🤣</font>



LOL, glad you're enjoying my little daydream ...;)
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Posted: 11 years ago

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LOL, glad you're enjoying my little daydream ...;)


Oh, man! This was so much fun. So happy in parts and so sad too. I love how Arnav and Khushi manage to get together in "real" life... I love how you've twisted IPKKND into every fangirl's secret - or not so - dream. 😆 Loved it. Happy ever after!
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Posted: 11 years ago

This was a perfect (read by Bollywood standards) love story and for the following reasons:


1. There was a hero and heroine and the other woman because of which the hero and heroine couldn't get together.

2. The hero rebuffed the heroine's first confession😡

3. The hero realized his love for the heroine a fortnight before his marriage.

4. The vamp (I so love calling Sheetal by that name) was the one who broke the marriage.😎

5. The hero did not waste any time in getting married to the heroine.😳

6. The hero himself was a hero and so was the heroine, a heroine.

7. The heroine has a crush on a hero whom she gets to meet.⭐️


Reasons why I liked this story in particular:


1. For the way you cleverly modified IPKKND.👏

2. For giving the fan girls an end which they wanted (even if there are scores of them denying it).😉

3. For Love scene no. 421☺️

4. For providing a movie of the show Pyaar ka naam'. It truly is bigger and better than season 2.😃

5. I know I am repeating this again, but can't help it. For making me nostalgic (bringing out the latent fan girl in me), more than a year after the end of the show.😭


That says it all!

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Posted: 11 years ago
How did I miss this story of yours????
Anyway gonna start reading now :)))
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it
good post
read my story
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is one of the most romantic stories i hav ever read...

obviously my favs.. which I usually read at night to hav beautiful dreams..

so beautiful.. tender..emotional..lovable...
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Posted: 11 years ago
So beautifully written story jenny...
I loved the characterization of arnav and khushi...i pretty much imagined sanaya and barun in the same shoes...all the moments and songs you included from ipkknd...love scene 421 i still remember it...it all made it real...the glimpse of how harsh media can be...all well portrayed.
Superb story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Can understand your yearning... Just loved the story!!!...hate sheetal though!!!... Arnav helping khushi ...wow!!!...can't wait to c what happens next... Wonderful intense, gripping writing...

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