#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18

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Monal

@littleflaws

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#891

Hey Sista! Surprise.

I guess I can treat you with small comments often seeing that this is the only work you are continuing and the response rate is dropping too!

So, Happy Birthday! or Merry Winter, Seasons greetings or whatever you want to celebrate your stars are lucky tonight that I decided to drop more than a like. It wont be every time. So, don't get excited. It's short lived happiness.

Coming to the update. It was nice. I am liking the story much better than the original D3. You should have been the writer of the show.

And about the twist; um since you showed about Smriti and Kria interaction with dialogues this time lol and also Smriti wanted to have a talk. I am guessing it will be something on why she made that decision. A mother finally wants to clear things so may be she might come out open and this might reveal her drawback in dance and such... Not sure how right I am. Just a mere hunch.

Edited by Kasurbest - 12 years ago

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#892

awesomeee update👏

loved ittt😊

and d swaron part was amazing😃

waiting for kriya's entry

and waiting for d nxt part😳

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d3_rox

@d3_rox

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#893

Amazing update as usually...

Loved everything...

I loved the way Rey rememberes kriya...

I miss her sooo much...

N then the swaron scene was also amazing...

Al in all a fab..

Superb...

Mindblowing update...

Plzzz update soon!!!

-Tehmina!!!):)

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annu

@_sweetannu_

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#894

awesome update 😛 .

Edited by sweetcharu - 12 years ago

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annu

@_sweetannu_

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#895

loved it.

Comments... 😛

😛 😡

👏

Edited by sweetcharu - 12 years ago

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annu

@_sweetannu_

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#896

superb update.
Loved it.
Swaron was very nice 😛
Kriyaansh ...😭
Kriya return will be a big new gift 😛 .
Same time tanni entry surprize with twist. 😡
Lagta hai story become much more intersting n diff from real d3 ... kriya will back wow. 👏

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#897

"He loved her but knowing the lie that he considered the truth, he couldn't keep on defending her. His heart lost the battle with his mind."

mereko iss sentence ka matlab nhi samjh...

hatred as in?????

vaise loved the update...

par tu na jaldi se kria ki entry karva...

bahut kheech rhi hai...

update was sweet...

lekin yeh bata... vishaka has a transmitter or what???

jab dekho tab vahan se bahar nikalti jahan pe rey is reminiscing abt kria...😆

looking fwd to the update

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Aanchal singh

@Artistic_Stroke

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#898

awesome update

i wish kriya would have been there

thanks for pm

update soon

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#899

woahh... Nw that was definatly a hugee one... 7 pages... Samajh mei aata hai... Nywaz.. I was waiting for it to come... Loved it a lott... Rdx ki marriage mei swaron ka romance...upar se dat curtain wala part.. Bwahaha...dat ws just mind blowingg 😉 ... Kya sahi tym pe curtain gira Rey k haath se... 😆 ... Nw moving to dat smriti kria convo...dat ws also amazingg...the way kria showed her anger...and whn mentioned dat she's just a machine now...*sigh..i pity her... 😔 ... And in marriage Rey imagining kria...2 min k liye toh even i felt ki woh kha se aagyi..hehe... Aur phr swayam giving lift to sharon...saying dat. "i'm nt ur driver" ...bwahaha..loved that nok jhok... Andd u gonna bring kria back in New year... He bhagwann... Bht tym hai yar usmei toh... :/ ... Koini... Hum bhi wait krte hain... Spamming to ho he jayegi... 😉 ... Nw coming to ur imp note... So no commebts on dat... Just waitng for the twists n turns to come... 😊