#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#691

Hi khushi. . . . . .
1st of all congrats 4 d 100 page completion. . .
The update was nice,
now we vl read rdx and nicoles mam marriage in the absence of kriya. .
I so wish kriya wud be thr. . . . .
I jst hope 4 d bst. . . .
Nxt part jaldi update ksna. . . . .
Waiting 4 it. . . .

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#692

Awesome update 😊

The gang is making efforts to make Rey happy

Looking forward for the twist

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 12 years ago

#693

nice and loved its... update res of the chapter soon...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#694

IT's osssoommm khushi...:) loved it...<3 vicky will be vicky...stupid...but cutee...asalways afraid of marriage...lolzzz...nd SORRY 4 not replying last 2 updates...hell busy dear...but both last part r jst fab... Swaron part jst lovd them...thanxx 4 pm... ND ALL D BEST 4 U'R TEST...

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#695

congo for century...

just readed chappy 16 & 17...
awesome parts...
loved it
beautifully written...
swayam topped ... 👏
excited for twists nd turns u will include in this ff...
update soon
thnx for pm

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pallavi.14

@pallavi.14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#696

loved it khushi..wowiiee...

You proved it...friends are der forever no matter what... dey always try to make you happy in ur worst moods also..

Rey's frnd crashing into his house early morning only to bring a smile on his face... awwiee.. Miss those days...

and vicky's fear of his band baja baraat if he will passed the exams...Hehe!! really that was hilarious.. everybody hitting him...

and then swayam the hero at sharon's rescue... i just love this swayam... you have turned me into a swaron fan also now..see i'm falling for him now...

RDX and nicole wedding...aur sabke reactions especially nilesh's...

everything which they haven't planned is coming around... may be good for their mission...

and finally kriya and vishakha chats... i really hope you will make her meet all of them soon...
but the way you gave hints in note i am guessing it won't be happening any time in next 3-4 updates...

still i'm keeping myself positive and hoping you would move ur magic wand and do something so dat our kriyaansh meet...

update soon...
thanx fr pm...

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

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Posted: 12 years ago

#697

Firstly sorry Khushi i couldn't comment on the earlier part, tests going on 🤔...

Part 16:
It was Great 😃...
Sharon and her feelings , she is running away from Swayam ...
Gang knows about Rey-Kria , that is good...
Gang and their one-track mind , always revolving around setting Rey with another Girl 😒...
But this time toh RDX ne bacha liya...
I wonder what is RDX's plan ...
Haye Swayam knows Sharon so well and would never do anything which will hurt her , he really is a true lover...

Part 17:
It was nice 😃...
Boys kabhi nai badal sakte , jab bhi koi problem ho Rey ke ghar pohanch jate hain ...
Vicky and his famous 'Dramatic scenes' 😆...
RDX and Nichole getting married and Nilesh plopping down from the chair , he really is a finny guy just like Vicky 🤣...
I really like reading the talks between Kria-Vishaka , it makes me think what would have happen if all of these scene would have been showed in the Serial 😊...

Loved both of them ❤️...
Alright as u said part 18 and 19 are gong to be the 'Major parts' of this FF . i will be waiting for them...
Conitnue soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.

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Shweta

@Shweta-kriyansh

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#698

love vicky here...always makes me smile...and even more loving kria a lot...wud want to see her united with louisans again...as for the twist...m waiting for it...guessing it has something to do with taani-rey-kria...wishing all turns out well...update soon...