#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18 - Page 11

Originally posted by: yogini64

Congoz a ton khushi darls 🥳 thank you so much yogi di 🤗
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aww that's cute! thanksss!
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superb update . . . . . Loved it 😃 glad to know!!
the plan was really tactfull . . . . . It was'nt lame 👍🏼 aww yayy! I feel happy now :P
swayam & vish gave such an awesome support to remove her nervousness... YUP! xD
us looser ke sath to aise hi cheat karna chahiye 😈 I thought he deserves much worsr 😆
sharon acted as extra sweet . . . . . . Trapped him in her innocent plan 😆
& vish managed to get the treasured letter . . . . Wat a scene 😎 I could imagine 😛
iss shivam ne to swayam ko bhi hinsak bana diya . . . . . . Zaban se hi sahi 🤣 ROFL!!!
aur sharon ka to pakka hath hi dard ho gya hoga . . . . . . Swayam ko bol thoda massage kar de ☺️ . . . . Aakhir ek slap to usko hurt karne ka bhi tha 😉 tum bhi kya kya ideas deti ho 🤣
I just hope . . . . The contents of letter are untouched . . . . . . But i'm damn sure she have'nt mentioned any truth in dat . . . . . Aur rey ko kuch khas pata nhi chalega 😭 You'll see :D
kriya ko bhi jaldi vapas la . . . . . . Don't tell me that u'll wait till 10th thread 🤣ROFL nai nai. Mai utni bhi zalim nai hu -🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: GayatriJethani

Firstly congo for new thread... 🥳 Thank you so much!!

secondly sorry for not liking nd commenting on previous update... aww that's kay. I can understand...
Busy with my ipcc exams ... Hope u understand.. Nd dnt stop sending me pm thanks for letting me know =)

coming back to update...
Awesome nd amazing updates...
Sharon helping them to find out kriya's letter for rey... So sweet of her glad you like that!

I really love the way vishaka stood by sharon nd encourage her.. me too :P
Serial me toh aisa dekhne milta hi nhi h...seriel mai toh kuch bhi nai dikhate =(

Shocking part of this update was sharon's avatar..
Nd she care for swayam.. Truely from heart but she never show it.. yes... i wanted to show that it was always there. she never brought it up or realized it..
But now after slapping shivam bcoz he had hurted swayam, clears that she truely care for him

Really loving the way u r taking this story..thank you!!
Eagerly waiting to see what kriya had written for rey..

Update soon
thnx for pm

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Amazing update
loved sharon here..
shivam deserves this
eagerly waiting for the next part...

Originally posted by: shaani2209

Firstly congrats for the new thread...may you have many more coming ahead...Thank you so much! 🤗

coming to the update...

it was wonderfully penned update... Shukriya 😛

the part where swayam whispers to sharon caught me...i really loved that part...

then the vishaka making sharon feel better with her words, part, was nicely penned too... Thank you :)

now the dhamakedaar part...sharon slap's shivam😲😆 then i was like did khushi really make her say that😲😲😲 "this one for hurting swayam" 😲😃 Haha! I wanted her to say that 😳

but brilliantly handled n written part i must say...

do update soon...thanks for the pm... Thanks!! I will soon.

PS: m a bit inactive, festival time you see...so dont mind if i skip any update of yours...i'll try my level best to be regular... That's understandable. I'll always be looking forward to your views whenever you get the time to post 🤗

PPS: well done no color goof up👏😆 YES!!! Finally 🤣 but i get confused with shivam n vishaka's colors Yea, I kinda saw that... When I had picked their colors, I hadn't thought they'd be seen together in one update.. oh well.. 😳

Originally posted by: sreya19roy

What is this khushi 😲 this update was way too smaller than what u usually give 🤔 Sachi? I thought it was longer... Usual one's for Guzarish are 3 pages while this was almost 5 😕

pehle hi u have stopped giving regular updates aur ab chote updates...NOT FAIR aise chote updates nahi chalenge Aww! I'm sorry 😳 I first had to stop due to shifting house and then lack of people reading... I hoep to make up for it through the updates 😳

Ohk now coming to the update...I really loved the way swayam tried to give sharon confidence by saying what he said n what I loved even more was what vishaka did n said 😊 whatever she said to sharon to boost up her confidence was really nice n unexpected 😊 n also that small gesture of hers when she had kept her hands around Sharon to comfort her, when swayam was jharoing that creep, was really very sweet 😊 I like vishaka even more now 😊 😛 Ahaha! I'm glad to know that! I always wanted Vish to have this kind of role in the show... And thus.. here it goes :D

Bt hands down those slaps were the highlight of this whole update n whatever she said while slapping him was FREAKING AWESOMEEE 😃 n after that 3rd slap when she said, "This is for hurting Swayam" I was like, oh my gosh she slapped him for hurting swayam yappiieee Haha, yes. I knew you guys will like it. Again, I wanted Sharon to do something like this. It is after this that she starts realizing her love and so this is the beginning.

All in all this was an absolutely amazing update as always 😊 bt as I said earlier, this was an unexpectedly short update 😔 bt anyways I'm really excited to read kriya's letter now n I'm definitely very eagerly waiting to read ur next update so make it fast n MAKE IT LONG 😃 I'm sorry for the length once again 😳 Letter will be there and I'm hoping the chapter turns out as long as I have it imagined... Need to type it yet.

N advance mein Happy Diwali Khushi 😊 Thank you and the same to you and your family 🤗

Originally posted by: sreya19roy

Oh I forgot congratulate u...many many congrats for ur new thread khushi, may u have many many many more such awesomeee threads n I hope u keep rocking with ur updates unlike the show 😊

N yeah I really like the banner too 😊