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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Note:

Whoever is asking me to send them PMs for this SS-PLEASE go and read the first note of this SS :) NO PMs are going to sent due to reasons stated in that note.Except that I hope everyone had a great Diwali and I'm sorry for the delay in updating.Will try to be more frequent now!Loved reading all your comments and overwhelmed by the great reaction to this SS :) Love you all truly,even if I might not be able to reply to all the comments.If you feel something is wrong then you are very free to criticise and question me.I certainly don't think I am perfect as a writer so there is always chance for improvement here.

Since someone requested me for an English translation I have added it too.Any more queries?Shoot away!

-Risha

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

You took me back to those "golden" days of the "silver" coins. That was a very sparking loving update. Enjoyed reading every bit of it. Thank you.

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Res!

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I'm on the first page! I'm on the first page! Air pump!

Haw! Such a sweet update! I loved it!

Thank you!

Edited by JerryTheMouse - 13 years ago

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raina

@Girlabouttown

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

this was sooo good...

Why the writers of this show are soo dumb???/// They let go of of so many opportunities.

Very well written dear. It transported me to last year's Diwali. those days

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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: rainaluvBS
this was sooo good...

Why the writers of this show are soo dumb???/// They let go of of so many opportunities.

Very well written dear. It transported me to last year's Diwali. those days

Thankyou so much :) I am glad you liked it and I could get those days back for those ten minutes.

@Bold and italics- This was my form of lamenting.Everything I am writing here is a wish,a wishful dream that I wanted to happen in the show.I had been waiting for diwali since a long time so that those moments would be replayed out again.Sadly,I realised we care more for the show than the makers ever will.*sigh*

sorry for ranting ,it just came out :P

Thankyou again :D

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

*falls down laughing*

This was hilarious. Hurry..err..Hari Prakash 🤣

And Arnav khushi are so cute *pulls cheeks* I love them! Their fights & their make up sessions are adorable.

The best part was when khushi caught Arnav. Cute! Loved the way Arnav tried to hide everything. Awww this was so damn cute!

The ending was perfect. Hayye! Why can't they show such things on screen? Why crappy Mrs.India tracks when the story has so much potential? Sigh..Sorry for ranting :/

Continue soon Rish! I am loving this :D