||Swaron FF: Destiny will unite them|DISCONTINUED - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wowww awesome cs dear:-):-):-) loved it:-):-) plz cont and pm me:-)...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Very new & refreshing concept..
Rey & Kriya *DeaD* :(
Do update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Karen_sharon

~~CHARACTER SKETCH~~

Sharon Ghai: Her parents died when she was 10.She was brought up by her elder sister Kriya.
Swayam Shekhawat:He has everything in his life...Money...respect and u say it and he has it...except one thing which every1 needs..."LUV". The only person who cared for him and luvd him was his brother Rey.
Rey: (Present) **DEAD**
(Flashback) Swayam's concerned brother...Kriya's luv and
Hubby.
Kriya: (Present) **DEAD**
(Flashback) Sharon's sister...Rey's love and his wify.
Tanvir: (His description in 1st part)


Lovely concept... update soon nxt pt...
Kriyansh phr se dead... dis s gonna to b fun... SwaRon new love journey...

is tanvir is Tanuj...??? dnt get it dea...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Loved the CS and intro !! Please PM me when you update !
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
nice concept...plz update it soon n thnx for the pm...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
I loved d CS and d start..do continue soon..n pm me d updates..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

INDEX

Chapter 1 (Cherishing memories)
PAGE 3
CHAPTER 2 (Is love possible)
PAGE 7
CHAPTER 3 (Can't stop my tears)
~~Yet to Come~~
Note:Name of the last chapter can be changed.
~~Thanx for reading~~
Edited by Karen_sharon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18

Chapter 1:Cherishing memories

A girl in a white saree sat at the window sill...her eyes closed...saline water dripping down her eyes...making way through her face to her lips and towards her neck...she remembered those happy moments...
~~Flashback~~
Girl:Kria di...I'm so excited...I never knew dis day wud be here so soon...Di I can't belive..ab mere pas bhi ek jiju and devar honge.
Kria: Oh god Sharon! Tu toh aise excite ho rahi hai...jaise teri shadi ho rahi ho..aur sun ley Rey sirf mere hai..fir jahe tu Swayam ke saath jo bhi Kare le.
Sharon:Di rahin bat Shadi ki toh usme bohot vakt hai...aur Rey jiju sirf apke nahin hai...mein unki sali hoon yani adhi ghar wali...aur uss chaparkanju Swayam ki toh bat hi mat karo aap...pagal hai woh ek number ka..kuch kaam nahin karta..sivayi pure din apne us kamre mein dance ke alava !
Kria:acha meri maa..
Unknown:Kria...Sharon...aao Barat aa gayi hai.
Sharon:Kya sach barat aa gayi hai!
(She runs away and disappears into the garden in a few seconds)
Kria:are Sharon..ruk (and slowly follows her)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
They enter the garden.The garden was masively decorated by the Singhania's...akhir kyun na hon Singhania's ke bete Reyansh ki shadi thi...this marriage was against the rules of Singhanias so Rey's parents were not going to come..only Rey and Swayam were going to come.
**Pe Pe Pe..Peeen..Pen**
The trumpets sounded as Rey and Swayam entered the garden hall...They came in a Skoda Laura car...One of Rey's 2 Priced possesions!
(1.Skoda Laura
2.Kria)
Rey and Swayam got down of the car..Rey looke handsome in a Golden sherwani and Swayam in another grand sherwani.
Both Kria & Sharon stared at Swayam and Rey...Even Reyam were doing the same..suddenly they were interuppted by the pandit.
Panditji:Shadi ka muhrat nikla ja raha hai..chale mandap ki aur
All 4:ji bilkool 😳
~~End Of Flashback~~
She still couldn't belive it...that everything was over...she broke down into a valley of tears...she kept her palms on her face and cried out all her pain and sorrow.
Suddenly she was disturbed by an angelic laughter...laughter of Tanmay
(Kriyansh's Son)
Tanymay was only 2..when that tragedy happened..he was left all alone..She had no other option other than...
(her thoughts were disturbed by the opening of her room door)
In came a man wearing a Black tee and grey jeans...it was Swayam...her friend but now he was her husband...she never regreted marrying him but still it was difficult to stay with a person who u hardly know...for ur whole life.
Swayam cam and sat at the couch neat the window...he gently caressed her cheeks and held her right hand...
Swayam:I'm sorry
Sharon:for wat?
Swayam:for wat I'm going to do...
(he moves closer to her...and crashes his lips on hers...at first she was stunned..he wanted her to join the kiss..he carried her and placed her on his lap...her legs on both sides..she slowly and steadily started responding to the kiss..he got up..still not breaking the kiss...and moved to the couch..made her lay on the couch and laid on her.)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres...

yehh mee first...😃
coming to d update ...
it was really gud...
flashback was really having sweet memories...
swayam did an unexpected thing...
loved this...
nice start!!!!!!👏
Edited by cool_star14 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Ola Ever1! So how was the upd8 gud...bad...or worse..aap hi log decide karo and let me know par ek bat he u like it or not U'll have to comment! 😆😆😆

Karen (Maria)

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