ArHi FF: A Dark Love Story...UPD P.127+LINK P.136

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#741

I hope Khushi gets better, her emotional and physical well being is starting to frighten me

Arnav is trying though

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#742

What a dhamedaar update !!! hero ne aakar heroine ko kaminey se bacha liya... hope incident changes ARSHI equations... loved the update ... thanks for pm 😊

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#743

Hey!

I was sooo glued to the screen whilst reading that that I didn't realise after finishing, that I had a lump in my throat. I really felt for Khushi 😭

She's been through so much as it is and then that bas***d Richard comes and takes advantage of her. Such a d***! 😡😡😡😡😡 He had the audacity to say that Khush'll get the blame for what he was about to do, but then again ... him being the d*** he is and coming from a dark world of criminals shouldn't have been too much of a shock.

I really was bloody glad that Arnav came to Khushi when he did. Phew!

I thought he'd actually blame her to a certain extent. I hope he doesn't once she's woken up ...

Once again amazing!

I can't wait for the next part!

Edited by ASRandKKGSRFan - 12 years ago

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khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#744

loved the update...

how dare he hit her!!!!!😡 i hope asr gives him wat he deserves for his action...

awww he saved her!!!! maybe sumthg will change...

update soon...

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slgirl

@slgirl

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#745

Really liking this story and looking forward to the next part!

and did I say I love this feisty Khushi?

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#746

Felt sad for kushi.the loneliness she experience is terrible. Glad that arnav talked to her.but why didn't he noticed the tiredness and the sadness in kushi. Or was that his intention to make her suffer like this.
Is it just desire for both of them? Last part scared me.but finally arnav rescued her. Waiting for next part.

Edited by ramyarn - 12 years ago

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sh.

@.Dulcet

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#747

Originally posted by: DUGGUlicious

Shilpiii...how is you?😃😃

man, I love the quote that u have in your box 😳

i am fine di :) .. just surfin internet in col :D

ikr?! :D.. its really intense and awsoome

gosh, the update was AMAAAZIN di :D.. and this bas***d is such a bitch seriously :D

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

Moderator

+ 72

Posted: 12 years ago

#748

Originally posted by: sargamfriends
I am first!!!! yup😉

Arnav love is in the air ...lol i dnt knw why jealous Arnav is always a treat for me...well may be there isnt a hard core deep love there yet BUT there is a very strong attraction and feelings have started to play their part in this so called monsters heart Haye Haye, you're liking this jealous ASR..will do my best to give another scene with him in this shade them😉😆Thankuuu...

Khushi my heart goes out to her...every thing tht she remotly associated herself with has been taken away from her...she is left into this life of loneliness and self pity...i can understand why she will and i hope tht she does take time to fall for this man...he has taken away everything tht made her smile and given her everything tht makes her cry Khushi will take some time to realise what she feel for ASR..It's isn't easy for her to fall in love with the man who has kidnap her, segrated her in his home n force her to marry him BUT she'll fall in love pakka ji...

Richard never ever try and touch wht belongs to Arnav expecially whn it cmes to the woman of his desire and love ...he always guards her very carefuly ...and you dared to hurt her...slapped her and almist tried to **** wait till she gets back her strength for u she alone is enough u creep (note to herself sargam he is only fictional nt real ) hahaha...first of all, these monkey emo are the best thing ever😆can't stop laughing ji😆Richard will pay for it ji😉

he was her knight in shining armour this is the best emo😆it's like me after scene HR's film😳😆 evn whn she was in danger and evn in her hatred she knew tht he would nt spare anyone who would hurt her!!! BUT wht took him sooo long...tsk tsk ASR if u r bringing her amongst the leeches u better make sure tht she dsnt gt bitten hehehe...more from his POV soon ji

will Arnav feel guilty and blame himself for nt being able to protect her

will he feel angry at himself and distance himself from her or apologise to her your Q's will be answered in next chappy😉updating soon ji

tht was very well written just like a professional novel phew lucky u update every day monday to friday Thanks A LOT for such a funny n beautiful comment...thanks

ps i will make peace with all the Akash killing ideas hahahaha