ArHi FF: A Dark Love Story...UPD P.127+LINK P.136

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sejal

@sweet_butterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

arnie is in love that too deeply... loved it

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sessy

@sessy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#672

wow what an amazing update

we can clearly feel the pain of both

she wants to be free which he cannot give

he wants her love which she cannot give

bravo

thx for the pm

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annab

@annab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#673

It was a Beautiful update and very emotional...sorry ,cldnt comment for the last one...Thank u for writing frm both arnav and khushi's POV...arnav is a very tormented soul and looks like he had a very sad past ...Only khushi can help him to get out from this hell..but for tht they need to understand each other..arnav is maddly in love with khushi and she thinks he hates her...The pain both r going through is unbelievable...

Brilliant writing again Hun .👏👏 pls continue soon...thanx...

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radhika

@radhika.winx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#674

nice update...

Arnav loves khushi very much bt need to realise it ...and then may be he would leave all his

gangster business...

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angel

@FairyAngel12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#675

thanks for Arnav's beautiful pov. Amazing update.

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rush007

@rush007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#676

Superb update, as arnav realizes that kushi is in so much pain but can't allow her the freedom whether he agrees it to her or not he is madly in love with that girl. Its high kushi should try to get behind his ruthlessness mask and find the true arnav care for him and love him.

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bea_rom

@bea_rom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#677

your story is getting more and more intense

can't wait for monday

why so late?

Glad that ASR is not sleeping with the maids

precap soon?

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#678

loved it

awesome

is she his salvation

the peace he hdn't find all his life

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Mariam Khan

@Mxk3444

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#679

I love this story so much it's amazing!!! The way you write out their emotions especially Arnav's is wonderful cant wait till Monday.

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#680

Gwosh... That was intense!!

So 'HATE' is in the air eh! ;D

She was hurt, missing her mum, crying like hell... And the only place she found comfort is in his arms.
'WHAT SHALL I NAME THIS ?"

He's afraid of her? That she'll ruin him? I dont think so. And She's too weak to do so and he have already destroyed her enough.
May be she strikes back... Nari Shakti B-)
Well I can smell some other reason for him to put her in his captivity. Hmm... Not sure what...A bad Guess huh ? ... I guess ;D

So he left her after wearing his pants.. Thanks for informing me that he was naked under the blanket lol. My besharam mind is always ON.. Catching small things carefully.

Okay me is bhaitings for the next updatewa. Thanks for the pm n accepting my buddy req.

Love,
'J'

PS : I am a BIG FAN OF HR! He's so Yummy lol. And he's one amongst the 3 imaginery hubbies of mine.