ArHi FF: A Dark Love Story...UPD P.127+LINK P.136

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the notebook

@the_notebook

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Loveeeddd the update yaar :-)

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

OMG! Will he marry her a s a punishment? :O :O

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tinsel

@tinsel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

I feel very sad for Khushi having to go through torment,hope it's not for too long..A Gripping update.

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deepa

@deeps_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

very well written...ur way of writing really amazes me...already in love with kushi's character...

such a fantastic characterization...still couldnt understand perfectly...may be his pov will clear my confusion...waiting for an update

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laksh65

@laksh65

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

nice story read all the parts in one go.

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

Moderator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Varshu_Karthik
OMG! Will he marry her a s a punishment? :O :O

Varshuuu, damn...Why the hell you know me so much well????😡😆😆😆😆That's not fair

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

awesome

brilliant

loved it

y is he so cruel to her

death is nt wht scares me but living in hell n waiting 4 death is most painful n scary.

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Awww Khushi is sprited man !

But Wats up wid Arnie ? Awesome update

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annab

@annab

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

simply Brilliant..i cant imagine how khushi is going through such truma?? And hw can someone be soo cruel to a girl??? khushi's character is very strong willed and i'm sure she can face wtever coming to her side...pls continue soon..and many thanx for the pm...

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

Moderator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: selcouth-names
I loved it . The kiss on the forehead, the tugging & pulling.
So beautifully written. My type of dark story.

Getting into the story's flow now. Thanks for updating regularly.

Cos the "feel" goes away when there is a long break between the chapters.

Keep up the good work 😊

Hey buddy,

thanks youuu soo much for liking it ..Im damn happy ji😳

I'm doing my best with this FF's upd and PM as well..trough I'm lazy by nature...

thanks for the cute comments⭐️