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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shass



every word echoed truth here.. KP have to admit..dat was too gud buddy! 👏👏👏..u hv captured da essence of da whole tale perfectly in just afew words !!⭐️..
Missed u too dear..dats why me not going ne where any time soon.. i missed dis place n its craziness!😊

@LEAFS--WOW !! U TOO???😲😲😲...man! but i really dont find my comments too small-sized..wonder why??.. but yeah..u guys need to throw DHRASHTI A party !!😆😆😆..MISSED U TOO..🤗

@Farwa-- HUGS..HUGS..HUGS...😆😆😆..There's atleast sum1 who doesnt struggle with da comments..😆..n thank u all for da warm welcome.. n missed u too farwa.. da deal is,i dnt knw precise writing..n Babi wont give me classes.. EVIL BABI *squinting*... so i hv to write long..ALAS!!


😆 no classes for you dear Shass cause I want to read long comments from you. My preci writing is because I cannot write long posts. 😉. but you can and so give me the pleasure of reading and understanding the tale a little more than my little brain does😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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@shass where were u??? hhhmmm??? we missed u so much... and ur comment too...
Edited by khusiarnav - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hoopoe

Rabba ve fellow comrades...
Rabba vey HP...😊😊😊
Woohoo..i see dat a discussion is already in progress..so i wont start with mine yet...
OH MY, HP !!😲😲😲..i'm biting nails n shuddering inside coz dis is one topic am very sensitive about,atleast.. n for my own sake i hope it doesn't take dis route..but thn i also know dat u r seldom wrong about nethg.. n i do doubt if lin will handle something as explosive as this..but if she does then i DO TRUST HER dat she'll do it in the most nicest way..
honestly,HP i had not looked at things this way..so am quite confused right now n shudnt comment as its bound to affect my judgement..besides,u know that symbolism is not my forte..i cant decode it..so that makes me more unfit..but i'll still say afew things here dat i have understood..may b what i saw was part of what u saw..
He paused a moment to think it through, the consequences of sleeping in a hut alone with her in it.

Not only was her life in danger but even his own wild desires might not be easily controlled in the darkness of their tempting solitude.

I went for a re-reading of the previous chapters and guess what, I found the romantic grape eating chapter to be very dark,foreshadowing the impending storm which Aquiline mentioned... Its just my point of view ... Kindly read the following excerpt from Ch 110- TANGLES and share your views my dear friends...
They are some brilliant pointers dear,throughout the post.. n i love the way u chose to narrate your point of view.. n very well be right..👏👏👏
for the above ,i feel he was considering her safety,coz he knows that his curse returns in the night n she'll be in the close proximity.. yet he did choose to go with her..i feel if he thought he may harm her ,he wud have easily avoided it.. he still doesn't know that she can control his hunger..
since the beginning i have seen lordy as both a man n beast.. the man is trust worthy i believe..he has a very strong control over everything regarding him..n i think just because the author showed that he lost himself doesn't mean,he wud have NOT stopped himself.. for me i feel whenever he has lost himself into her..it has been a strong serene n blissful feeling for him..like a war in him settles for a moment or something..tho we cant deny their strong physical attraction for eachother..but thats the man in him that feels it..a man i think,very much in control..we esp. saw this in the forest chpt.. when he was not even that protective about her but still he chose not to harm her..that somehow his cursed hunger cud b controlled... its the beast in him that he doesnot trust..that his sister doesnot trust... my question is..will the beast feel something of a physical attraction for her??? may b... but i think, his hunger wud b of a very different kind!!

And to make matters worse, he was hungry.
His hunger, that he had been suppressing all this while, ravaged his mind again and he cast a glance on her face.

"I'm hungry too," he said in a low voice and resumed picking on the grapes upon her body with his mouth.

"You're the Master of an Empire," she tried to reason with him to try to stop this sweet torment which she could take no more, "You are not used to eating forest fruits without having them washed well."

"Hunger in a Man does not make him pause to think of cultural norms."

again i thought he felt challenged there by her non stop bickering n he only was being mischievous.. but by the time he had wanted to stop,it was too late n his attraction got better of him.. n he may have said it in the light of his curse...God knows what he has been devouring on

she groaned, "Please stop. If you're hungry, I will try and pluck whatever fruits I can find as soon as we get out of this hole."

"My hunger cannot wait," he stated simply, and his mouth was around a rich round grape near her waist.

"Do you want me to stop?"

"Yes, please!" she cried into the air, feeling his mouth near her shoulder.

And then fire exploded.

One last grape had remained in the crook of her neck, the only exposed part of her skin where the grapes were to be found. He had thought of stopping the torment with that one last fill but the moment his wet mouth had pressed on neck, his hunger found new delight.

Kushi froze the moment she had felt his hot breath on her neck, and then when his burning mouth had pressed on her tender skin, she lost all sense of where and who she was. All she knew was she wanted him to find more grapes on her skin even though they would not be there.

She closed her eyes as he bit the grape, a drop of the violet juice falling on her fair skin. After having devoured the grape, he licked the drop on her neck with his burning tongue and she moaned.

Lord Arnav was lying along her length, when he had come to take the grape from her neck.

He looked at her when he had licked the drop of grape juice off her neck. Her cheeks were red and her lips trembling, while her eyes remained closed, taking in the torture he was meting out to her.

Her moan had undone him and he had leaned down to taste her neck again, to hear that moan again, when the parrot squawked overhead from a tree branch.

honestly i thought at this dat he didn't expect her to reciprocate his feelings..but she did n perhaps thats why he looked at her ,may b surprised..may b trying to reassure if it was what he thought it was..only then did he continue.. i think he lyked that... but then i was thinking,it cudnt b gud for khushi coz now he knows what effect he has on her!

The spell broke and he moved away from her and she stared at him, her gaze dazed under the heated moment's aftermath but shocked too as realization seeped into her consciousness.

Suddenly Kushi cried, "Oh, my dress!! It's ruined!"

dat was my favourite pointer of all...⭐️⭐️⭐️

tho ur theory is plausible.. i was thinking, its still the medieval..she's staying a night out with a man..in the Forest..shudnt that cause her trouble somehow,if ppl got to know??? may b thats what was pointed out.

Lord Arnav looked at her and saw her turning about, trying to look over her shoulder to the rear of her gown, and he saw that the grapes under her had crushed with her fall and the back of her gown was drenched entirely in the violet gluey juice.

He shook his head, "You invite hazards, don't you? One after the other!"

She stopped looking at her gown over her shoulder and shot him a look, "Well, good you mentioned it because you seem to be a recurring hazard in my life. Over and over again, popping up everywhere to wreck my life."

interestingly,i had searched some ''grape symbolism'' n they have been associated wth good luck..but grape juice is symbolic to ''blood''.. dnt know how to fit that here..just remembered n mentioned it.. but my above point cud explain this one too..*shrugs*
So some damage done... and to rectify it...
Then he leaned forward and stretched out an arm towards her.

She stood staring at the hand for a moment, not wanting to touch it, but she found her dusty hand slid into his dirtied one. The warmth in his hand assured her and he closed his fingers around her hand, securing her for the hoisting.


Then he lifted her up and they were out of the lurid hole at last.

ok..so this is how i had read it.. again pointing at the fact that she stayed away with him in the forest.. cud produce problems for her... n only he will b able to help her may be??? but @ the hands ..i was also thinking..HP ,isnt his hands already dirtied with staining her dignity long time ago?? with the problems he caused her,when she wasn't at fault?? but now time has changed n his feelings for her r also not the same.. the past few chpts have emphasized on dat, dat now there's more assurance for her in everything he does...once he let her fall from his window, now he lifts her up..from the hole..in his arms.. do u think a loop may have closed here?? cud we take it in that sense too???

And they lived happily ever after...
😆😆😆...i loved this one!!..if only things were as simple.😆
What do u guys think? I know my mind is in overthinking mode after i read Aquiline's disclaimer... but do share ur point of views.
end of discussion-- i dont know..am horrible at symbolism.. vl pm soul..may b she'll help u more...😆😆😆😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hoopoe

You exactly mirrored my thoughts dear music... well written...
And about your line in bold... 👏



OH MY GOD !!! r u guys seriously considering a transformation in the next update???😲😲😲...
WOW!! i ddnt see it coming... i have entered the discussion hp started on the thread but i wish i hadnt..i ddnt know u both were already in discussion..n i was reading comments from da last pages..backwards.. i thought hp was pointing at something else..lyk him harming her in sum other way n NOT a transformation..a total sleepy head n crackpot i am..🤢
music this is BRILLIANT..AWESOME..FANTASTIC buddy !! 👏👏👏👏👏👏
u gave a new dimension to imagination..am now so excited.. how will i sleep tonight??
AWESOME GIRLS !!👏👏



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shass

Woohoo..i see dat a discussion is already in progress..so i wont start with mine yet...
OH MY, HP !!😲😲😲..i'm biting nails n shuddering inside coz dis is one topic am very sensitive about,atleast.. n for my own sake i hope it doesn't take dis route..but thn i also know dat u r seldom wrong about nethg.. n i do doubt if lin will handle something as explosive as this..but if she does then i DO TRUST HER dat she'll do it in the most nicest way..
honestly,HP i had not looked at things this way..so am quite confused right now n shudnt comment as its bound to affect my judgement..besides,u know that symbolism is not my forte..i cant decode it..so that makes me more unfit..but i'll still say afew things here dat i have understood..may b what i saw was part of what u saw..

since the beginning i have seen lordy as both a man n beast.. the man is trust worthy i believe..he has a very strong control over everything regarding him..n i think just because the author showed that he lost himself doesn't mean,he wud have NOT stopped himself.. for me i feel whenever he has lost himself into her..it has been a strong serene n blissful feeling for him..like a war in him settles for a moment or something..tho we cant deny their strong physical attraction for eachother..but thats the man in him that feels it..a man i think,very much in control..we esp. saw this in the forest chpt.. when he was not even that protective about her but still he chose not to harm her..that somehow his cursed hunger cud b controlled... its the beast in him that he doesnot trust..that his sister doesnot trust... my question is..will the beast feel something of a physical attraction for her??? may b... but i think, his hunger wud b of a very different kind!!

interestingly,i had searched some ''grape symbolism'' n they have been associated wth good luck..but grape juice is symbolic to ''blood''.. dnt know how to fit that here..just remembered n mentioned it.. but my above point cud explain this one too..*shrugs*

ok..so this is how i had read it.. again pointing at the fact that she stayed away with him in the forest.. cud produce problems for her... n only he will b able to help her may be??? but @ the hands ..i was also thinking..HP ,isnt his hands already dirtied with staining her dignity long time ago?? with the problems he caused her,when she wasn't at fault?? but now time has changed n his feelings for her r also not the same.. the past few chpts have emphasized on dat, dat now there's more assurance for her in everything he does...once he let her fall from his window, now he lifts her up..from the hole..in his arms.. do u think a loop may have closed here?? cud we take it in that sense too???

And they lived happily ever after...
😆😆😆...i loved this one!!..if only things were as simple.😆

Dear shass, im not at fault here in making such wild guesses. Its all because of Aquiline's disclaimer. Its making me to see things from a different perspective... Im just bracing myself to face the worst possibilty... if the story doesnt take this route, i'll be the happiest.
Infact the chapter gave me a good positive vibe... First, the sacred hermit - who has the ability to foresee things - stresses on them staying back in the forest for that night... if he had sensed any danger for the poor girl, he might not have proposed such sleeping arrangements. Second, Lord Arnav drank the soup prepared by the sacred hermit that appeased his hunger... i think it should have some suppressing effect over his beastly hunger. Third, Khushi is there to calm down him even if his beastly instincts surface up in the middle of the night. Fourth, Khushi's words about hermit's information regarding Fortune spending the night in forest trees... to me it seems that the hermit intentionally made them stay together in the hut for that night... and im sure his intentions were in the best interest of Lord Arnav and Khushi... He referred them as Lion and lamb, yet let them stay together in the same hut...
I suppose some big revelations and realisations are about to happen in the middle of the night moving their unacknowledged physical attraction and emotional bonding to the next higher level...
I completely agree with ur words about him feeling serene and blissful whenever he gets lost in her... i guess the entire scenario is to make him realise that khushi is the chosen one to provide tranquility for the beast in him.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hoopoe

Dear shass, im not at fault here in making such wild guesses. Its all because of Aquiline's disclaimer. Its making me to see things from a different perspective... Im just bracing myself to face the worst possibilty... if the story doesnt take this route, i'll be the happiest.

Infact the chapter gave me a good positive vibe... First, the sacred hermit - who has the ability to foresee things - stresses on them staying back in the forest for that night... if he had sensed any danger for the poor girl, he might not have proposed such sleeping arrangements. Second, Lord Arnav drank the soup prepared by the sacred hermit that appeased his hunger... i think it should have some suppressing effect over his beastly hunger. Third, Khushi is there to calm down him even if his beastly instincts surface up in the middle of the night. Fourth, Khushi's words about hermit's information regarding Fortune spending the night in forest trees... to me it seems that the hermit intentionally made them stay together in the hut for that night... and im sure his intentions were in the best interest of Lord Arnav and Khushi... He referred them as Lion and lamb, yet let them stay together in the same hut...
I suppose some big revelations and realisations are about to happen in the middle of the night moving their unacknowledged physical attraction and emotional bonding to the next higher level...
I completely agree with ur words about him feeling serene and blissful whenever he gets lost in her... i guess the entire scenario is to make him realise that khushi is the chosen one to provide tranquility for the beast in him.


Totally understandable dear HP ..n am glad i cud discuss it with u..coz u have a very valid point here dat i didnt consider earlier.. but coz of all da four points u mentioned, i too dont feel scared of da up cumming chapter.. esp. dat khushi's there... now dat u n music have been considering a beastly transformation, i still dont feel scared..coz its bound to happen,sumday it had to cum in da open.. n tho we dont know exactly how things will play out.. i too believe it'll b for da good. well,lets wait n see.. but it was a very nice discussion..i loved it..
PS; there's a strong symbolism in ''lamb n lion'' part..i mean from historical point of view... have been doing a li'l research of my own.. but am not posting it coz i dnt want ppl to doze off..😆



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Posted: 13 years ago
Diaclaimer is warning of severe storm ahead but me follows sanaya irani rule"I take things/life as it comes"😃
me already brainless so dont have a clue as if hermit , his soups & his hut will play some crucial rule in calming the curse of lord arnav😕.
So we will face the storm when it will hit with full force but why fear now😃
why not drift away in our own arshi dreamland for the time being😃
just imagine this song with arshi
HUM TUM EK HUT MAIN BUND HOON
AUR HERMIT CHALA JAA AY
LORDY KAY NAINOON KEY BHOOL BHULAYAN MAIN
KHUSHI KHO JAA AY
😆😆😆😆😆
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tBJj-3sgcd0[/YOUTUBE]
@ Aquiline:
just bring it on!!!!!!!
your readers are tough cookies, we will embrace
EDITED:
i was watching the song & at 3:39mins the hero is wearing the same clothes as arnav & ME FAINT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just imagine arshi in the whole song & me FAINT AGAIN!!!!!!!!
Edited by kushipugly - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
@shass & hoopoe: 😲😲😲👏👏👏👏
superb, just superb reviews.
aura with her creative picture makes the update so much more visual & you girls digging deep into the text make it so much easy for the other readers to understand what hints actually to look for into the text👏
loved loved loved it👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shass



every word echoed truth here.. KP have to admit..dat was too gud buddy! 👏👏👏..u hv captured da essence of da whole tale perfectly in just afew words !!⭐️..
Missed u too dear..dats why me not going ne where any time soon.. i missed dis place n its craziness!😊

@LEAFS--WOW !! U TOO???😲😲😲...man! but i really dont find my comments too small-sized..wonder why??.. but yeah..u guys need to throw DHRASHTI A party !!😆😆😆..MISSED U TOO..🤗

@Farwa-- HUGS..HUGS..HUGS...😆😆😆..There's atleast sum1 who doesnt struggle with da comments..😆..n thank u all for da warm welcome.. n missed u too farwa.. da deal is,i dnt knw precise writing..n Babi wont give me classes.. EVIL BABI *squinting*... so i hv to write long..ALAS!!





Sorry shaas...it is the age and not the fault of your font size! Its just very convenient to put all the blame on your fonts😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
KP - I followed the instructions on 'how to upload videos' and this is what I get...what am I doing wrong?




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