ArHi FF:3:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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Lily

@NallyLilyLove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#621

Thanks so much for the update. I am a greedy one I'm afraid as I crave Arshi scenes! 😆😳 But the chapter before will suffice as I'm still trying to recover from that scintillating grape scene! They are truly affected by eachother and I cannot wait for the realisation but I fear Shyam will bring out the nastiness in Lord Arnav as I suspect he will do what he is famous for...ie misunderstanding our ddear Khushi!

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#622

nice update..good luck for your exams..😊

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kushipugly

@kushipugly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#623

rabbavey aquiline & comrades

have to go out, so a short comment😊

what a lovely update aquiline showing guptas as mature, concernced & strongly bonded with each other.👏

all the relationships within guptas house are so superbly portrayed👏.

a sisterinlaw not approving garima happily to talk about their daughter affairs without her👏

garima as a suppotive understanding wife knows what is in the mind of her hubby.

& the best part of update is shasi gupta is fully aware of payal's connection to akash & both are comforatble in discussing the concerns involved in these types of relationships.

All the family members are concerned for khushi's future with shyam & trying their best not to leave any stone unturned👏

Just superb, loved it.

Dear Aquiline, we can definately wait for 2 weeks for an update.

Our best wishes & prayers are with you always that you achieve full success in your result & in your life.

May Allah bless you with his bounties always (amen)

Edited by kushipugly - 13 years ago

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kushipugly

@kushipugly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#624

Rabbavey again😃

i forgot to mention the most important point in my previous comment😃

even though it was not an arshi update but a mere a mention of arshi trudging in the forest made my heart go all the way to rabba vey

Rabbavey.

got to go😊

And Aquiline 🤗

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bablio09

@bablio09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#625

Rabba Ve dear Sweeties.

off read the update. will join you later

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khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#626

rabba ve guys!!
Oh i am so late.. aint i?? sorry dearies... overnight shift took toll on me... just slept for 2 hours and m back in school... havent got chance to read the update yet...
will read and come back later...

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Ok now thats what we call a family... And the bonds we share with each member!!!

Shasi and Garima's understanding and the support for eachother was outstanding... beautifully written.. it shows the depth of relationship they have... husband n wife... marriage is not easy, people have to have to grow everyday supporting,trusting and understanding each other and the growth makes the bond unbreakable!!! U showed that Trust and Understanding factor so well!! 👏 👏 well done...

I liked the fact that Madhumati didnt go against shasi's judgement for General but i cannot totally disagree with her as well becoz she is right from her stand... being a father so protective towards his daughters he can be misjudging Jha or seeing things which are really not there... which seems to true if we think from Madhumati;s view point!!

Shasi is a great father.. i liked him so much!!! the way he talked to Payal and her letters exchange thingy with Second lord earned so much respect from me!! Everyone wud love to have a father like him... being open about such matter and considering the feelings his daughter have made me emotional... and also they are planning to ask Khusi as well if she has feelings for Jha... thats just GREAT!!

Lin, u asked if u are "correcting" the mistakes... then let me answer you... Yes u are... This update is the solid proof of it!! the family discussion, husband-wife talk, brother-sister talk, father-daughter talk, asking payal abt her feelings, considering to ask Khusi abt her feelings for Jha are best examples!! Thats wat should happen and thats exactly happened in our FF so GREAT JOB!!! 👏 👏👍🏼👍🏼

I am looking forward to next update now!! 😃 That reminds me... GRAPES... OH that Sinfully Provocative Grapes eating... "groan" 😳 😳 haiiyyy kya kya huwa hoga? better horahoga...

Lin darling update soon... ❤️

Edited by khusiarnav - 13 years ago

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medharees

@medharees

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#627

Something feels not right

Shyam isn't worth of khushi as a bride

He seems to have secrets to hide

But Babuji has kept open an eye

When it comes to his daughters he is quite wild

Never thinking with his mind

His heart bears the entire plight...

Till death he will fight

Anyone who would meddle with his daughter's life.

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bablio09

@bablio09

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#628

Thanks for the pigeon Linny Lin.

and as usual a gr8 update. I can understand a story of this length cannot be built with two characters alone. The other characters are a must for the progress of the tale. so a very apt and important conversation between father and daughter. I liked the guidance given to Payal by the father.

the entire Gupta family is so closely bonded to each other. One can see it through their concern, frank conversation with each other and esp. The husband - wife understanding, father-daughter relationship very well narrated.