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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Farwa_Ibrahim-

i love u Lin love u sooo much[>:D:<]... Loved the update❤️... It was epic... So romantic n cute... My smile grew wider and wider with each line... I m quoting some lines from the update and remaining will also be quoted when cant tell u... So here i go

Lord arnav stopped confused ''what'' and then he frowned at the bird '' is it a green female bird,this Green heart?
really lordy u thought fortune has found a crush lolz and of cource how can he understand to whom Fortune is meant by green heart... In intellegence he is not as good as khushi i guess...

When he saw some torn clothe of her gown in paw of Fortune he became worried for khushi... Hai such concern love it

hahahahah 😆[ROFL] he called her '' village monkey''... lordy has some sense of humor[:O].

He looked at her "something i will soon regret''
Lolz i dun think so lordy

Instead he leaned down at her feet and without touching her with his hands to keep her still,knowing that astonishment would keep her immobilized for him,he opened his mouth and bit the rich violet grape that was on creeper around her ankle.

i couldnt help but blush and my heartbeat going all DHAK DHAK and unlike khushi i was sure it has nothing to do with acidity...

And then the torture went on and so does my heartbeat and my smile grew wider... Till he ate the grape on her neck... Time stopped so does my heartbeat for a moment and then my cheeks grew red and my heartbeat as wild as khushi... Loved it... It was such a romantic update without much of physical touch as being physical is not necessary for being romantic and love doesnt need too much of physical touch a mere glance a smile little brushes of touches... I really love this kind of love... And i always love this kind of update lots of applause... I wont mind to say it a sizzling update...


Than u so much Lin sweetheart for the special pigeon I really m thankful to u. Really i cant thank u enough. There will very rare storytellers like u not only by the way u narrate but most because of the beauty of ur heart... We the comrades and readers r honored to have such a geniune person with us.



Fab detailing of ur emotions... n m in same state dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hoopoe

Thanks for sending the pigeon dear...

Once again, the chapter left me all mesmerised... my mind is still dazed and roaming somewhere in the alluring jungles of Arhasia... with no mood to come back to the real world. I feel nostalgic after reading their romantic adventures in the dark jungle...
His subtle way of expressing his emotions... her childish acts... their continuous bickering... their repeated struggles to control the conflicting emotions and desires of heart and mind... the gradual strengthening of the emotional bond they share even unknown to themselves... its always a pleasure to read about these two sweethearts.
I have never mentioned it before. But today i feel like saying it... Thanks for keeping these epic characters alive in the world of Arhasia through this unique FF. You have not only maintained the original essence of the characters, but also added more depth to the characters and the plot, doing perfect justice to this epic story. Thank you... 🤗



You all are such a master of good... no no g8, fab, mindblowing words and also in way of presenting & summarizing it... why i m not able to do it... i hv so much to learn 4 u all!!!!

do i need to say i LOVE it???
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Posted: 13 years ago
I love love love love this update!I have a list of my favorite scenes from the show and similarly I have one for this FF.

This update makes it to the list Lin! What writing! What display of emotions! Brilliant is the word linny, brilliant!!! 👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
it brings back memories from the show.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nainital...the unwinding of the lites all together in one beautiful update...loved it.That's one sexy way of eating grapes...not bad at all...their nok jhok always makes me smile...so apartyet so close...the journey is not over...can't wait for Monday.😊Lin I can;t stop praising ur narrating skill hun,,,,so much passion into writing...u will reach higher highs soon.Bless u.
Edited by music1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awe totally awesome update ...beautiful and very romantic...keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: khusiarnav

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Omg!! M i first ?? 😃 yaayyy... [:D/]

WOW👏👏
Congratulations for being the first one👍🏼👏
& wow you become a goldie👏👏
Double thumbs up for double success
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Posted: 13 years ago
One word.. MAGICAL !!
Dear lin,i loved loved loved these past two updates.. n lyk alws am speechless.. bt thn my hands r itching to write sumthg dat i wntd to write fr a long long time.. i knw all i'll earn aftr dis vl b frowns,scoldings n rotten eggs n tomatoes.. n u cn correct me as much as u wnt coz aftr all its ur story n no1 undrstnds it bettr thn u.. bt there's me..a reader who perceives it in a different context.. claiming all faults to b mine..i'm daring to challenge ur ''attraction'' theory dear linny.. ...n an advance apology fr dat..

With khushi it alws had been ...

VENI..VIDI...VICI...
[ i came...i saw... i conquered... ]


She's able to do dat coz of a beautiful heart,wch is not jst affectionate bt is purest.. i see it as a mirror,whr ppl cn see da ''real'' thm n thru their reflection she sees thm.. dnt knw hw much of it u'll really undrstnd bt lyk a mirror shows da truth hr heart shows da truth...


  • Lordy's castle..world saw fearful n haunting structure...she saw a gloomy,desolate structure..
  • lady anjali...a woman of elegance n amiability...she saw,da pain n loneliness..
  • nani..a woman wth wisdom n affections..she saw hope lost..
  • Gen,jha..a good man who saved hr lyf..she hsnt been able to see thru yet bt she sees, he cnt b da one fr hr..
  • the rose bush..lonesome,beautiful thing... bt she saw sumthg of love there..
  • n Lordy!! our beloved lordy!! a man full of coldness n ruthlessness..yet she saw sumthg..the emptiness n despair perhaps n evn more.. bt b4 she cud reach it.. he stopped hr..coz he saw wht she saw..n he ddnt wnt dat..
frm da vry 1st meeting he's been able to read hr lyk an opn book.. a book dat speaks of colours,life n innocence..a book he lyks vry much..dat 1st meeting whr she refused to obey him..da instant he wntd to punish hr..da moment he doesnt wish to hurt hr..bt scares hr by ripping hr dress..to stopping hr frm leaving n THE TUG at his heart ! n thn countless nyts whr he's haunted by her memories n her face.. wondering ''why''.. it ws love at 1st sight fr him !! ...da only problem is dat he cannot understnd da feeling n best considers it a ''mere attraction''... an attraction dat is suddenly raising havoc in his life,thoughts n evn actions..challenging him evry time.. sumthg he doesnt lyk,dat angers him.. a man who had his beliefs fixed n lyf accepted da way it ws b4 she came in,suddenly finds hr challenging his control ovr evrythg.. n most of all reminding da frozen heart to beat agn..da Sea of Emotions stirred.. emotions he neither understnds nor cn control.. so he perceives it as attraction..n chooses to fight n deny it !! since thn he's chosen only to push hr around.. hurt hr..to keep hr away frm him in ne possbl way.. failing to undrstnd da consequences of his actions..
one may wonder why khushi shud suffer fr his ignorance of da affairs? i believe there's no othr way.. she's da healer in his lyf.. n fr dat she needs to knw all da darkness dat surrounds his world ! all flaws n wrong in his lyf.. only thn vl she find da strength n da way to to heal not only da BEAST in him.. bt also da MAN in him.. both need to b corrected. bt i wudnt worry abt hr coz she's dat single RAY OF LIGHT dat conquers n eradicates da darkness!!😉
ur last two updates r da day aftr da dungeon scenario, n he has realized hw important she's becum fr him n she sees da glimpses of care she gets.. evry word uttered by thm is AGAINST eachothr..n evry action of their's is FOR eachothr.. khushi n arnav... ...he loves hr.. she'll not undrstnd..she finds her security wth him..he vl choose to push hr.. he'll convince himslf dat he doesnt care.. she'll let expectations hurt n let hr ego lead da way... she'll find trouble..he'll find himslf concerned fr hr..he'll b relieved,challenged thn sets a goal to bring hr ego dwn n in da process he climbs his way up only to lose himslf.. she is hit by da realization of his affect on hr..he's too busy hiding himslf.. finally both give in..he's too concerned to let hr alone..n she knws there's no1 else she trusts more. I LOVE THM BOTH..IN ONE WORD..MAGICAL !!👍🏼

For me dis ws da song kpt playing at da bk of my mind.. dnt knw hw many vl b able to watch it..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=81m1uehEGWw

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=81m1uehEGWw[/YOUTUBE]

PS;
sorry fr da painful long length dear buddies.. its probably my last long post until a long time [months to cum]..thanks to cap.responsibility.. so its dedicated to all my buddies..luv u guys..🤗

PPS;
  • so wht if mobiles r not there in Arhasia.. Fortune's there to do da job..😕
  • so wht if lordy doesnt climb stairs.. he'll climb nethg frm khushi's ankle to neck..😃
  • so wht if he's a heartless honeybee.. it'll alws cum to;

'''The warmth in his hand assured her and he closed his fingers around her hand, securing her for the hoisting.'''

Let da key steadily keep unlocking da heart we love so much..❤️😉...the fun has just begun !!😛😉




Edited by shass - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG I am late as usual. Thanks for sending the Pigeon Miss A and looks like I just missed your posting, i could've been the first one to comment, no worries as my friend khusiarnav made it so I am happy for her.

Oh what a chapter, i just kept hearing Rabba Veh all the time they were together. It was certainly not a case of sour grapes here, the grapes were very sweet and full of Rabba Vehs😉

Thanks Miss A for giving us a great chapter after we had to say Alweedah to our beloved show.

@shass - I hate this Capt. Responsibility, always taking our loved ones away...anyways hope to hear from you soon...will miss you.

@farwa - so sorry for your frustrations, we are praying hard for conditions to get better where you are.

@aura7 - thanks for the visuals, they were wonderful.

@kushipugly - loved your cheerful posts.

All other Comrades - enjoyed your comments immensely, hopefully will see you all regularly here.
Edited by Leafs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shass

One word.. MAGICAL !!
Dear lin,i loved loved loved these past two updates.. n lyk alws am speechless.. bt thn my hands r itching to write sumthg dat i wntd to write fr a long long time.. i knw all i'll earn aftr dis vl b frowns,scoldings n rotten eggs n tomatoes.. n u cn correct me as much as u wnt coz aftr all its ur story n no1 undrstnds it bettr thn u.. bt there's me..a reader who perceives it in a different context.. claiming all faults to b mine..i'm daring to challenge ur ''attraction'' theory dear linny.. ...n an advance apology fr dat..

With khushi it alws had been ...

VENI..VIDI...VICI...
[ i came...i saw... i conquered... ]


She's able to do dat coz of a beautiful heart,wch is not jst affectionate bt is purest.. i see it as a mirror,whr ppl cn see da ''real'' thm n thru their reflection she sees thm.. dnt knw hw much of it u'll really undrstnd bt lyk a mirror shows da truth hr heart shows da truth...

Lordy's castle..world saw fearful n haunting structure...she saw a gloomy,desolate structure..

lady anjali...a woman of elegance n amiability...she saw,da pain n loneliness..

nani..a woman wth wisdom n affections..she saw hope lost..

Gen,jha..a good man who saved hr lyf..she hsnt been able to see thru yet bt she sees, he cnt b da one fr hr..

the rose bush..lonesome,beautiful thing... bt she saw sumthg of love there..

n Lordy!! our beloved lordy!! a man full of coldness n ruthlessness..yet she saw sumthg..the emptiness n despair perhaps n evn more.. bt b4 she cud reach it.. he stopped hr..coz he saw wht she saw..n he ddnt wnt dat..

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
frm da vry 1st meeting he's been able to read hr lyk an opn book.. a book dat speaks of colours,life n innocence..a book he lyks vry much..dat 1st meeting whr she refused to obey him..da instant he wntd to punish hr..da moment he doesnt wish to hurt hr..bt scares hr by ripping hr dress..to stopping hr frm leaving n THE TUG at his heart ! n thn countless nyts whr he's haunted by her memories n her face.. wondering ''why''.. it ws love at 1st sight fr him !! ...da only problem is dat he cannot understnd da feeling n best considers it a ''mere attraction''... an attraction dat is suddenly raising havoc in his life,thoughts n evn actions..challenging him evry time.. sumthg he doesnt lyk,dat angers him.. a man who had his beliefs fixed n lyf accepted da way it ws b4 she came in,suddenly finds hr challenging his control ovr evrythg.. n most of all reminding da frozen heart to beat agn..da Sea of Emotions stirred.. emotions he neither understnds nor cn control.. so he perceives it as attraction..n chooses to fight n deny it !! since thn he's chosen only to push hr around.. hurt hr..to keep hr away frm him in ne possbl way.. failing to undrstnd da consequences of his actions..
one may wonder why khushi shud suffer fr his ignorance of da affairs? i believe there's no othr way.. she's da healer in his lyf.. n fr dat she needs to knw all da darkness dat surrounds his world ! all flaws n wrong in his lyf.. only thn vl she find da strength n da way to to heal not only da BEAST in him.. bt also da MAN in him.. both need to b corrected. bt i wudnt worry abt hr coz she's dat single RAY OF LIGHT dat conquers n eradicates da darkness!!

Agree on this totally' She gradually knows all darkness of his life and that to Unknowingly, as she herself doesn't know that she is the cure of him, and even he has a beasty wound!!


ur last two updates r da day aftr da dungeon scenario, n he has realized hw important she's becum fr him n she sees da glimpses of care she gets.. evry word uttered by thm is AGAINST eachothr..n evry action of their's is FOR eachothr..

GOLDEN WORLDS' DEAREST!!!!⭐️👏⭐️👏

khushi n arnav... ...he loves hr..

I differ here.. he yet not loves her' still there is time in it'!! Right Lin..?

she'll not undrstnd..she finds her security wth him..he vl choose to push hr.. he'll convince himslf dat he doesnt care.. she'll let expectations hurt n let hr ego lead da way... she'll find trouble..he'll find himslf concerned fr hr..he'll b relieved,challenged thn sets a goal to bring hr ego dwn n in da process he climbs his way up only to lose himslf.. she is hit by da realization of his affect on hr..he's too busy hiding himslf.. finally both give in..he's too concerned to let hr alone..n she knws there's no1 else she trusts more. I LOVE THM BOTH..IN ONE WORD..MAGICAL !!

For me dis ws da song kpt playing at da bk of my mind.. dnt knw hw many vl b able to watch it..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=81m1uehEGWw

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=81m1uehEGWw[/YOUTUBE]

Appt words... loved it!!
PS;
sorry fr da painful long length dear buddies.. its probably my last long post until a long time [months to cum]..thanks to cap.responsibility.. so its dedicated to all my buddies..luv u guys..

Why?? Didn't get you?? Are you going anywhere??


PPS;

so wht if mobiles r not there in Arhasia.. Fortune's there to do da job..

so wht if lordy doesnt climb stairs.. he'll climb nethg frm khushi's ankle to neck..

Blush blush...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

so wht if he's a heartless honeybee.. it'll alws cum to;

'''The warmth in his hand assured her and he closed his fingers around her hand, securing her for the hoisting.'''

Let da key steadily keep unlocking da heart we love so much.....the fun has just begun !!


Will give you tomatoes and eggs to you... but only to make Omlate... 4 us!!😉

Enjoyed comment only after.. coping it in Word doc and change the font size to 14...😆

Edited by A_Soul - 13 years ago

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