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Posted: 13 years ago

Again... 😡 there is no scene capturing Lord Arnav's thoughts on the events of previous night. Why do you always do this Aquiline? If im not wrong, this is the third time we are not getting to read Lord Arnav's thought after the crucial events of the previous nights. This is pure RAMANCHI dear... 😒

P.S. The lesser you show Lord Arnav's POV and let it remain a mystery, the greater we are motivated to decipher his thoughts and decode his mystery... 😈 😉
Edited by hoopoe - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
CHAPTER 117 ;

My favorite chp dear lin.. i dont understand how u write in such a complex manner.. justifying each n every action of ur characters.. conveying their actions with subtlety.. i bet this was one of those chps that consumed a li'l more energy than usual,from u.

i loved loved loved lordy n khushi's actions..

KHUSHI;

the way her feelings have started to surface gradually... the way she was all worried for him when she wakes up in the morning then searches for him through out the chpter..was conveyed beautifully.. her concern getting deeper for him when he doesnt show up n behaves in a peculiar manner.. she has now begun to understand him a li'l n sees that there's something bothering him.. worrying her even more for her so-called Enemy ! somewhere even she yearns for his presence n misses him..misses the security she feels when around him.. but this day he's not willing to give it to her.. atleast thats what she thinks.. loved how for his sake, just to see him she chooses to ride the last cart.. how she keeps quiet in his presence,reading his silence that something's definitely not good with him.. this is the first time,i think, that we cud see her feelings so openly..n i loved it..

LORD ARNAV ;

what to say about him.. a man of few words but his actions say it all.. can silences be that powerful?? i never knew that until i came to know him !
he has definitely not suspected the role of khushi in last night's events.. his so-called absence only indicates how horrible n painful his past has been for him.. it left him stunned to silence n staggering,thinking of whatever that connected the creature with the most precious relation of his life..his beloved ''Di''. there's too much going on in his mind..past haunting him.. pieces of puzzle that needs to b put in the right place to see things clearly..but there's too many gaps there n he cant connect the dots properly... for now he probably suspects that the creature entered the hut at night just by chance,coz he left the door open.. he definitely doesnt see why it wud come to khushi,otherwise.
Amidst all the troublesome thoughts..he does what he knows best.. he hides/shrinks into his old shell..! but he has not forgotten khushi at all.. he does come for her again n again ! trying to balance his need of solitude n his care for khushi. he watches her secretly, keeping a distance b/w them. noticing her worried expression when she waits for him n then tries to climb the cart.. he assures her tht he's around.. tho for her he was nowhere to b seen but he was watching her from behind the canopy of trees, away from her eyes.. i wonder how breathtaking n beautiful the sight of khushi,dancing childlike with other kids, must b for him? i bet it must be infectious observing her innocence thats a permanent charm of her character. then tho she has lost the track of time n route, he remembers it..comes back for her.. holds her n drags her to her destination.. if i know him even a li'l then his anger came from his fear,frustration n concern for her.. he's Lord Arnav Singh Raizada.. come what may, once he has taken a decision,it'll not b changed.. he cant back out from his words n his last verdict was to dismiss her from her duties in the castle.. n now that he sees something evil,hovering over her at night, he's worried for her.. tho he doesnot suspects the connection.. the problem is had she been there under his roof, he wudnt b as worried..but now that she's goin away, he has to b concerned n angry at the whole thing.. he cant do anything anymore.. but he can warn her about darkness n its danger.. i suspect it'll probably b this way from now on..may b he'll keep a watch for her silently but secretly..without her knowing about it. i loved how he held her hand firmly through out the crossing of the forest.. somewhere not wanting to let go of her.. knowing that she's scared of the forest..he knows day light is safe so he lets her go by herself,i bet if he knew it wasnt,he wud have accompanied her till her house.. but being lordy lord, in the end tries to maintain his previous image n with some frustration mingled in it, he tells her that he doesnt care for her.. but its not a goodbye !



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hoopoe

Again... 😡 there is no scene capturing Lord Arnav's thoughts on the events of previous night. Why do you always do this Aquiline? If im not wrong, this is the third time we are not getting to read Lord Arnav's thought after the crucial events of the previous nights. This is pure RAMANCHI dear... 😒

P.S. The lesser you show Lord Arnav's POV and let it remain a mystery, the greater we are motivated to decipher his thoughts and decode his mystery... 😈 😉


Lolz HP.. so true !! its like torture for us..i so want to know what he thinks.. am not sure how much i have understood his feelings n thoughts n actions.. but whatever i did i wrote it n will still b wondering if am right *sigh*..


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kushipugly



now its my turn for----

WHAT THE!!!!!

🤣🤣🤣🤣... it was a joke i cracked long time back.. i bet hp remembers it. !!


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maverickmartin

Comment updated on page 134


Remark ' I'm not analysing. Just going through.

if it was NOT analysis n this good then i wonder how gud the actual thing wud be?? *scratches head*

Chapter 116.. I really like the Shashi's instinct and his intuition, very spot on.. I found Payal-Aakash's interaction very adorable.. The Second Lord surely knows how to woo his lady! ;) And to defy his mother, politely.

AGREED !!👏

"Babuji, there is something-" and then she paused, unable to word it, and her father walked towards her and took the letter from her extended hand.

This is really nice.. That the girls and their father have such faith and trust on each other...

AGREED !!👏

"Hai Re Nandakishore! Stop all this racket will you!" said Buaji suddenly, coming up to stand beside them, "This wailing and discerning will only make time worse."

"Of course I care for her!" said Buaji, appalled, "I care for her enough to tell my brother," and here she shot her brother a look, "to go find her this very instant."

Go Buaji!! Stoic as ever, it's really Buaji who holds the family together. Level-headed brother and sister, thank god for them!

AGREED !! SHE KNOWS HOW TO HANDLE A SITUATION ..I REALLY LOVE HER..SHE'S ADORABLE !!😊

Babuji looked at her, amazed that the girl who rarely ventured out was willing to come to search for her lost sister.

Good for you, Payaliya. She knows when to come out of her shell. I just hope that if and when you write anything symbolic to Khushi's family ignoring her in the aftermath of her wedding, Payal does not lose her sisterly devotion and sense of protection!!

No sooner had Master Shashi caught a glimpse of the Lady Anjali who was always confined within the Castle, than he was shocked to recognize her as a fleeting similarity to the painting he had seen on General Jha's worktable though he had only seen it in a flash of a second.

His steps staggered backwards in disbelief as to what he had seen, and he hadn't seen that the butler was still standing beside him with the tray of filled glasses in his hold.

Yay!! Babuji is going the right way..

"Babuji, are you alright-" Payal asked anxiously and stepped forward when Lord Akash's "Careful!" and the crushing sound of a glass piece slicing through her feet and her yell made the scene more horrific to be real.

I really thought Manorama was going to shout a medieval English version of "khoon bhari taang" at this, after Aakash picks her up. Then I thought about it, what she could say and nothing came to mind. But it was a LOL moment for me!

🤣..I THOUGHT THE SAME !! HIGH FIVE !!😆

"Bruises are too common in this Castle but they must always be attended to instantly," she said as she watched the servants come to clear the mess on the floor.

An intriguing sentence. Bruises could refer to years of hurt in their past, but that there was always someone or something to help them alleviate the pain. Or it could be something her past taught her, and it was imprinted on her mid and would apply to the future too... It also brings out a strong streak in Anjali's character... helping others in trouble, being worried about them, sharing their pain as her own

A VERY GOOD POINT..👏..N U R RIGHT ABOUT HER BASIC CHARACTER..👏

He did so and then he crouched at her feet, wanting to inspect it when his mother said, "And what are you doing there, boy? Are you the new herbalist in this Castle?"

LOL!! Manorama Mami, I miss you too!!

😆LOLZ..



"Then I give it you," said Master Shashi, meaningfully, "And I wish you find the strength to ride the storms of your future."

Lady Anjali frowned slightly at the words he chose but her smile returned and she nodded, "It is for one's strength that one needs most blessings. I am certain your words will be a shield if storms must knock at my quiet door."

Shashi's words are self-explanatory. He knows the future would take her by storm, because he intends for the truth about Shyam to be out, even if he has only an inkling of what the matter actually is.. And I admire Anjali's presence of mind. She seems to be a Lady fit to be the First Lord's Sister.

FABULOUS POINT.. I DIDNT SEE IT THIS WAY..👏⭐️


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kushipugly

My lordy is coming back today!!!! I AM SO EXCITED I CANT EVEN HIDE IT!!!!!!!!!!!


AWW KP.. ITS TOO CUTE YAR.. HOW DO U FIND SUCH NICE PICS..PERFECTLY FITTING THE OCCASION??👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Aquiline

Rabba ve, my Comrades, Readers and fellow Visitors of the Inn!!

Back after my exams but my brother is coming to celebrate Christmas with me and we will be going to our grandmother's so no connection and no computers and no Forum for one week. I've updated the Indexes of all the three Threads (thanks for the suggestion Hoopoe dear) and if you need to know anything about when I'll update next, always refer to the Index of the current Thread.

When God does not reside in our hearts, we tend to let the savage beast in our Id to go rampant and instigate shootings in schools and immoral shocking deeds upon helpless girls. Hence as the whole world celebrates Christmas, my prayer is that all of you may prepare your hearts to let the Almighty God of Love be Born in your Hearts! Remember to always keep your head cool and your heart warm'..'.this is something my mother taught me when I was a child.

Oh, and the Christmas Father in my DP wishes you a Merry Christmas too! *wink*

The Inn is lit and ready for Christmas Celebrations. May the songs and music lift your spirits as you happily greet each other and then over drinks and cakes, as you listen to the narration''.

Christmas decorations at the inn are just fab
Thankyou for all the wihes & gifts.
My dear Aquiline best wishes & duas are always with you too.
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V_S0Rd48hfU[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by kushipugly - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Farwa_Ibrahim-

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YAYYY M 1ST its like dream come true i couldnt believe my self... Yupiii *dancing*

chapter 115

Superb chapter finaly the guptas got the news tht khushi had left the castle yesterday and she was accompanied by the Lordy... Superb show of emotions. Lady Manorama was just looking at his precious son and noticing how he was behaving with payal... Loved the way u recreated the scene where payal had hurt her feet. Master Sashi had a very sharp vision that he saw only the glimpse and still he was able to make out the features and he recognised Lady Anjali really loved it.. Ok now the line which caught my eyes
''Bruises are too common in this castle''
n then the way Master Shashi blessed her saying
'' And i wish u find the strength to ride the storms of ur future.''
very wise indeed


Chapter 117

again an awesome chapter... He wanted to be left alone as he was disturbed for his di... I loved the way Khushi was more disturbed because of his silence than she always was coz of his harsh words n actions... It shows she cares... Loved where witout being asked to Lordy helped her to ride the cart... Then the part came where he told her that from this place she need to leave them for her home was near... And he dragged her with him I really thought he is angry at her but no he was WORRIED for her and thats why he left his way to take Khushi out of the jungle safely... And wht did he said
'' And though u r of no concern to me(ahhh forget it Lordy u cant make urself believe it by SAYING it u know so just cut it)
I just want u to be careful of the dark''

and then

'' the nights are unsafe. Just be carefull''

ahh here u go Lordy u R worried for her coz u CARE...
For ur after note yes u need not to be briliant to see the hidden things which r not that much hidden yet they r anyways in my case I have to have Awesome threesome to help me out see things out PROPERLY so A.S.H halaa boll... Waiting for the comments by other comrades all of them with their special vision to see something hidden...



@RED-- superb UNDERSTANDING...⭐️
@GREEN---U DONT NEED MY COMMENT ATLEAST, COZ U N I ARE ON THE SAME WAVELENGTH HERE.. EVEN I CAN RELAX A LI'L AS THERE'S ONE MORE PERSON WHO THINKS THE WAY I DO.. BUT HOW RIGHT WE HAVE BEEN ACTUALLY,IS WHAT ONLY TIME WILL TELL..OR MAY B HOOPOE N SOUL WILL.. EVEN AM LOOKING FORWARD TO THEIR POSTS !!


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shass

i too remember that machar discussion😆 who can forget any discussion related to arnav & jha!

ok, i m going to read the update now😃
really tired after handling 7 kids at home, biggest kid being hubby😆, so today it will just be a short quick one😒

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zonera1

Thank Goodness U updated today as tomorrw I am going for eye surgery to remove my glasses and i did not want to miss your update.But I will read your next one after 7 to 10 days.So if u dont find me dont think I am not reading your FF but i would b resting my eyes
Thank U for mentioning me my dear Lin.
So the day passed and Payal's frequent correspondent made her realize that Kushi has not reached yet.Glad father daughter duo are trying to find her with whom they have no blood ties but love ties.
Beautiful re enactment of Payash scene.
For every re enactment of IPK scence past and future,U deserve a Thanx from me.
What is cooking in Arnav's mind that his behaviour change?I prefer to wait and watch.Coz i have never been able to predict him.



ALL THE BEST FOR UR EYE SURGERY DEAR ZONERA..MAY GOD GRANT U HEALTH N LIFE... N I LOVED UR THOUGHTS IN RED...👍🏼
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