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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: bubblz

Awesome
Brilliant
Fabulous
Marvelous
Excellent
Mindblowng...(etc etc)
Cnt express in wrdz...
I Am a die heart fan of ur writing...
2days update waz out of dis wrld...
Lvd ech n evry wrd...
Hope they wont fight again...
Well its near 2 impossible dat they
wont fight bt stl v cn pray ;)
Gud going yr...
Update sooon...
Waitng waitng n waitng...

Thanks dear ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First of all, I apologise, for keeping you uys waiting for so long. Trust me wouldnt have kept u guys on hold, had i been able to, i would have surely updated, but just was so disheartened by all the rucus that i cdnt bring myself to write anything.
well time is healing and guess...so am i
Next lemme say
For the brilliant brilliant comments on the last post and then all the comments and pms asking me and motivating me not to quit the FF. It humbled me big time and thanks for hanging on to me.
Here is a short update for you alldo lemme know, how is it...were i able to justify...

Arnav didn't want to break the moment. He was not sure on what to say further or how to put the point ahead, what to say to ensure that things didn't go out of hand which apparently always happened when these two tried to converse. But he also knew, that they had to see future together, they needed to clear the air.

"khushi?", whispered Arnav,.

He said, but if u loved me, why not say it when I laid my heart out to u khushi. why twist everything I said that day. why not tell me that day how u felt.?"

Arnav was stumped at what came next. She pushed him back with all her might hitting him hard on the chest. I shud have said something right Arnav? "

When exactly shud I have done that, when u were telling me that u could set my body on fire, or is it when u were accusing me of blowing hot with Astitva, or when u were palying havoc with my hormones in one breath and with other telling me to lose my past and trust u, when u were pitying me'.?

I never pitied u'

OH shut up Arnav singh Raizada. "Of course u pitied me. U were all like awww'.poor poor puppy kinds Khushi, pat her head'tch tch tch'come on baby'.I know u have a problem, come on khushi'awww baby'tell Mater Arnav' he will make everything all right?'ALL RIGHT MY FOOT!

Cuse me?

Yes curse u'..

Arnav u didn't give me time to collect myself. U simply barged into me like a tsunami Arnav. I have trust issue I know ASR, and did u understand that 'No. Ur Ego was unable to understand that how can a mere girl say no to ASR, imagine the blow ASR would have received when a silly lawyer did not melt down at his feet. Gave him as good as she got'..HOW DARE SHE'.isn't it..?

Cuse me?

Oh that parrot again

Cuse me?

Urgh'shut up Arnav'U really sounding like a Ekta kapoor's serials heroine, who only says ji maaji'.urgh?

Cuse me????

AAA

Arnav stepped back completely shocked by the shriek. "Stoooppp."

Will u just for once stop with that "cuse me"'u are freaking me out with that term

Oh o.k a y I ll try'

But khushi, u could have'.

"I am not yet finished with you Arnav Singh Raizada"

"Aint I Lucky? Whispered Arnav, to himself

"what , what did u say'.Can u for once just listen to someone.

I am here trying to put my fear, my feelings to you. Yes I agree I shud have expressed more clearly what I felt towards u, but I was scared. U were railroading me Arnav. U were behaving like an arrogant Ba***d that was not getting what he wanted, and he wanted it so bad that he would trample anything that came in his way. Arnav u were standing so true to my father's image. She again started sobbing and putting across her heart to him.

"I wanted to hold on to you Arnav, I wanted to run to you, coz u made me feel safe and unsafe, but I let the positive feeling outweigh. I am happy, no scratch that ..am ecstatic that u pursued me, but Arnav, '.

"Shhh, shhh, shhh khushi, stop crying u will make urself ill." Arnav, held on to Khushi's wrist and pulled her in a warm hug ," please khushi, stop, I don't want you to justify to me'I am sorry, really sorry babes, that I unknowingly put u to so much misery. Its enuf for me that u love me.

I don't wanna fight Khushi, not anymore. U have no clue what u put me thru babes. I just had a look at you, just one look, and u had me hooked to urself. U had me hooked with that sassy tongue too khushi'..Every day every moment I spent with you, I firmed my resolve to have u in my life and I started thinking , plotting how to get you into my life without losing my dignity. But khushi what I failed to understand then is my dignity stays intact if I go down on my knee and seek ur love, in fact, I would be more dignified with you by my side. I realized that u dignified me Khushi, that shedding my self-respect in front of you wouldn't lower my self-esteem and the very reason why I kept coming back khushi'coming back to the reason for my Khushi (Happiness). I never knew, that u would so take over my life. That I would love someone this much the way I love you

U cannot even imagine my frenzy, the day I realized you and the show stopper were one and the same. When I saw u as a model, I was like that's beauty, the paradise, the bliss where I would bask each day

When I met u as a lawyer, I was like, damn that tongue'..cuts u down to pieces, life can never be dull'another paradise, and then I thought of the earlier heaven and got saddened, as I knew I could have only one, but then I realized that god was being kind to me'no not kind, he was being princely on me showering me with both the ecstasies blending them in one super package and that's u khushi. I don't know how will I ever be able to make u believe how much I love u'but I do khushi

I love you'

Khushi burst into tears, "I love you too Arnav, I really do"

He held her face into her palm, and looked into her eyes, for how long they had no clue'.and slowly he inched his face closer, bring the two pink petals to himself, kissing softly, tasting her. both of them trying to find the love in the touch, confirming that it wasn't a dream, but a reality. Shock crashed through them. Khushi's knee went week, started shaking at the first breath taking instance of physical contact. She had never been less prepared for anything and impressions hit her in a flood of overwhelming sensuality: the exotic tang of his designer cologne, the uncompromising strength and power of that lean, muscular body crushing her softer curves, the hard, demanding pressure of his erotic mouth on hers. And while at the back of her mind a voice was shrieking no and urging her to pull back her body was singing entirely another song. Khushi wanted to drown in the heady feeling, wanted to give that ultimate surrender to her love, her ultimate faith, but there was a nagging sound asking her to hold back. Khushi was tired of fighting and fighting she was.

There was a wildly addictive fire to the taste of him. She wanted more, she wanted so much more she trembled with the astonishing force of that wanting. His raw passion sliced through her every defense and roused a surge of naked hunger within her. The plunge of his tongue into the sensitive interior of her mouth made her body tremble, while heat surged her entire being giving a very tangible evidence of her arousal, her clothes felt too tight for comfort.

Arnav, kissed her naked neck, and came down on her, giving a fleeting kiss. He went down on his knees.. He Placed a kiss on her stomach and then noticed that khushi was shivering, her lips slightly open and wet with just being kissed, her breathing hard. .she was lost, and then he glanced at her eyes, her eyes were closed pupils fluttering behind the closed lids. Apparently khushi was having a tussle, she was nervous and that's when he checked himself, he wrapped his arms around her stomach, laid his head on her bosom and hugged her while kneeling down.

'You're not supposed to taste that good, sweetheart,' Arnav breathed in a roughened undertone, drawing back, his brilliant dark eyes cloaked and cool, his face taut. It took all his effort to call a halt to the surging passion that was ready to inflame and consume them.

Planning some more passionate romance, do u guys think i shud pen that down...Please comment and like the work done and yes do not copy anywhere...cant stop you from doing it but just request.
whether my next chapter shud be steamy will be totally dependent on your feedback...as i am generally not into writing hots...so lemme know...move ahead...or give u romance
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Edited by mtina0207 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
done sweets
do comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: -Sadi-

Congrats on the new thread


thanks dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: hira2050

I knw each nd every person on dis forum is goin through same situation...iam crying like crazy...i lost my appetite;(dear take as much time as u want...v ll wait

thanks a ton dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Awesome update. Thanks for updating it was worth the wait...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: megha_arnav

Hola Tina Babyy.. *Waving my hands* .. Hwz yu CA Gurrl.?
Well, guess wht i finally read yur 2 pending chaps of TMF..Nd I mst say, dt both were fabulous.. !)
Khushi venting out all her feelings on arnav wz surely a sight to watch.. !)
Bt y do they fight so mch.? huh :/ Cn't they b in peace fr atleast a short period of tym.. duh:/
Eagerly waiting fr the nxt chap as wtz the nxt fyt iz bout !) Post It SoOn PlzZ.!
As fr yur notes, babe i cn undstnd yur situation.. BS leaving the show, iz surely the biggest disaster to IPK !! :( Nd him leaving, all the more frustrates me upp :/
Bt tina, i hv a hearty req. to yu.. dn't leave yur FF midway.. it only add to the woes of us readers..
Wanna knw wt yur CA mind has kept in store fr us in ths FF !)
Love Ya Jaani,
Megha.! :*

hey Megha, thanks a ton love...wow...I can totally relate to ur request and thanks for this...i can understand how it feels if the FF that we follow is left midway or not updated for a lengthy [period
i am a reader myself of some of the FFs here
further.,...on the FF
yes they fight and dont we love it
that is what makes their relationship so beautiful...we really do not enjoy the rabba veys as much as we enjoy their fights the unexpectedness...isnt it?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: mouramen

tina, congrats...

waiting for update...
btw if the forum closes where will i find you? will you be sending the links? pls...

hi dear, kindly om me ur id, incase i leave this forum i will mail the FF thru the link or send u the blog link. dont think am quitting so soon though
love
tina
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Loved, would not mind if you gave steamy and hot romantic scenes...need that after what all is going on, thanks for the brilliant update and pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: ArViAshaRocks

Congrats Tina on your third thread !

Love this story loads ❤️ and really love your creative mind 👍🏼
Do continue soon 😃
xoxoAlicia 😊

thanks dear

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