CGM SS: Because...The Cocoanut Heart was Undefined - Page 65

Originally posted by: smiley4567

Sorry for the late reply, because my exams are round the corner.

Very nice one.😊

I do not understand Bengali, but tried my best to understand it.

Thanks for the English translation.

You r a very good writer.😃

it's ok friend🤗
u tried 2 understand bong😛...good😊
thank u sooo much😳


ok...I'll give u the eng version😊

Originally posted by: DeewaniRimi

Thanks Samrat for inspiring me...part 6.the fifth middle chapter is awesome...what can I say?? I say everything so many times no Sandro???

it's for ur encouragement my dear writer...so if u want to ask ask ques plzzz do it...regarding to this chap to clear ur doubt 😊

Originally posted by: ..Mishh007..

very nicely written..!!

thanksss 🤗

Ah the universe a truly complex and mystifying source very hard to understand it in its entirety :) i have always been curious abt how everything works nd always wanna know more abt galaxy and stuff
Good poem :)

Originally posted by: DeewaniRimi

I have one question about that chapter...
You have mentioned that Cornelia went to Samrat when he was in pain and he was in sleep...right?? But after hearing her didn't he awake?? Didn't he looked at her?? Then why didn't he recognize her???
Sona re eta bolle ami ja chai seta hoye jabe..tahoe ami toke asha karchi kal raat 2:00te kichu ekta dite parbo...

hmm...for this u hv to read part-7 once again😊
rest part satisfies ur ques😃

u must read but the most imp part is bellow-

koun ho koun tum...???
Helen got stunned.What'll be the perfect answer-she can't realize...
-bolo...kiya tum meri Dhara ho??Dhara mujhe skhama kar chuke hain...haan??kripaya uttar do.

Due to lack of light Helen's face was not shown clearly ...what should she do???It's an undeniable fact that she is his married wife...she has every & every right to be with him...isn't it a CHEATING??...he wanted Durdhara...not Cornelia.
...But ...but...how could she resist herself hiding in that vast chest...to feel the heavenly peace in those warm arms...how could she leave the opportunity??...the golden key of her dreamland is a simple lie...rosy & thornful...it's not a sin at all...!!?

Putting her head on his shoulder,she stated-
haan main Durdhara (in normal voice) ki porchhayeen(lowerer tone) hoon(again normal voice)

With a meaningful smile,the silver moon in the sky witnessed the companionless moon to be accompanied with an incomparable companion...

Originally posted by: TimenTIMEagain

Ah the universe a truly complex and mystifying source very hard to understand it in its entirety :) i have always been curious abt how everything works nd always wanna know more abt galaxy and stuff
Good poem :)

thanq brother🤗

Originally posted by: DeewaniRimi

Sona...Muaaah🤗btw tui ready thak...toke amio bado kore part by part critical comment dite hobe😉

😊

babu ami thik katota fact clear korte pari??😛