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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DeewaniRimi

Oye eta ki??😡😡😡update kothai eto title...r tao tui link dis ni😡😡



pandit mashai...inbox check karun.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Skhama karben Samrat.AMi bhul karechi...Rajsakashe ta sweekar karchi😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DeewaniRimi

Skhama karben Samrat.AMi bhul karechi...Rajsakashe ta sweekar karchi😭



Rajsakashe??😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DeewaniRimi

Oye eta ki??😡😡😡update kothai eto title...r tao tui link dis ni😡😡



title gulo examer agei diyechhilum😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part-7

Somewhere Someone-Awaits With Colourful Butterfly Or Tearful Paradise?


Fear No More The Lightening Flash


Little Vishnu got adult...he became a famous acharya of Takhshila University.
That very time arrived when Alexander The Great was knocking at the bank of River Jhilum.The condition of India was as bad as its level best.Not a drop of unity was seen among the neighbour states,friendship was totally disappeared from Indian's mind.All were mad with the smell of self-demand.
Vishnugup was named as Acharya Chanakya.He felt in his inner heart that someone needed to start an effort,an aggressive step, a courageous movement.
Who was he?? How is he?? Where was he??
Maharaj Dhanand??But his attitude seemed fully different at all...even he was the 1st man of India in current time!
But his reaction was beyond thought.
-Maharaj,abhi bhi samay hey.jadi aap chahe toh bahot kuch ho sakta hey.ye virat hatyakarya aur ye dhansh lila ruk sakta hey...bach sakta hey Bharat wo videshioon ka crue dristi se...

Then all of our known events took place...
...disrespect of Chanakya...his oath to destroy his empire...meeting of Guru-Shishya...Dhanand's taunt to the villagers...at last burning of the village including Mura's hut...

Chadragupt escaped from the box Chanakya made him convict.He returned the village & got speechless to see the condition...he lost the power to think even to cry.He just couldn't believe his eyes.What's it?when?why?How? Where was his mother? For whom he escaped from the Brahmin Devta??

Suddenly some glittering material stole his gaze &...he cried out loudly hugging the thing.It's an armlet, the last memory of his mother.
With a loving touch on his shoulder Chandragupt raised his face.
...aap ehaan kyon aye hain?? dekhiye...dekh lijiye mere saral gaon vasioon ka kiya haal kiya Dhanad ne...ye sab...ye sab...shirf aapka karan hua hey...
-mere baat dhyan se suno Chandragupt...
-kiya shunayenge aap hume haan???aap hi ke karan mere maa ne mujhe chhorke sare zindegi k liye chali gayi.(he burst into tears)...ye raha unka antim smiti...


Witnessing the armlet Acharya got stunned!The same belonged to his elder brother Narayangupt!!

Relation Is such an entity...
That makes a man complete.
No matter if you're aware of it or not-
This glimmers to you cherished by frozen affection.


Speaking For All Who Pass By The Stars...

Nandini couldn't understand why her mind was going out of control at this crucial moment. Who is Mourya??Murderer of her father,nothing else.So??What's up if he kisses death??That was,is & will be her desire.Let him go to hell...true hell forever.
But...o does the mind get mad??Or she herself? When due to her attack on Mourya,he was senseless lack of blood-Acharya gave him life by his own drop of blood & declared an unique punishment for Nandini. She had to take care of Mourya providing him proper medicine!
For several times she grabbed suitable chances to kill him-her so-called hubby.But causing great astonishment...she didn't do so!! She didn't or she couldn't-she didn't know herself.

-Maa,main aapki anumati ka avikhshka karta hoon...
Nandini turned back to real life.
-aao Bindu. kis karya ka anumati??
With watery eyes he said-main pitaji ko antim baar k liye darshan korna chahta hoon...
-Bindu...tum...tum...!!
He knelled down with joined hands-main aapke samne haat zorta hoon...jo bhi kiya unhone,hey toh mere pitaji hi na...jane do mujhe...
Nandini remained silent for a while- thik hey...tum jadi itna hi kahe rahe ho...
Vindu: dhanyabad apko.


He was going to leave the room...
Nandini:Vindu...s..su..suno...
-Haan maa...bataiye...
-.main bhi...j...nehi...kuchh nehi...tum jao...

...A bunch of memories running through her eyes...
...Groom CGM...Vermillion-giving Mourya...handsome Mourya in royal attire...in war attire...his rear ray of smile...Mourya at 1st wedding night with marriage ring...hurt Mourya...his hurt eyesight full of tears...unconscious Mourya...kissing Mourya considering her as Durdhara...palace-leaving Mourya...DYING Mourya...

Rose has perfume & throne as well...
If you chose the 2nd,
It will appear to you as disguised love.

Cities & Thrones & Powers...

Alas!! My dream is broken too early...Ahh...it's heart-breaking...really heart-breaking.
Yes,Acharya is standing by me,he's calling me too,but...but...o GOD...give me power...plz give me power to control myself-a true beggar of love...Acharys is asking me just for a signature!!!According to him-I made a great mistake by not declaring a particular one as my successor.So the royal paper is totally ready,but the name of future king & my signature is absent. Acharya ordered me to sign...he'll fill up successor's name.

Just a signature!!! It's more valuable to Acharya than my feelings!! GOD,hold me-just hold me.I'm going to sleep peacefully,why do you attract me again??Then hurt me again!Why??It's painful...so much painful Chanakya,but you can't ever realize my pain.You're nothing but a huge stone that's completely lifeless.
...Hence,I'm leaving the earth-My Bharat Mata,plz give me your lap for my last sleep.


Life is such a war of emotions & confused affairs that most of us get lost in its complications
& get to the end of the journey without having ever found a path & a sense of direction.

...that's my realization about life.Good bye my life-journey:you were pretending to be finished several times-but actually not.But this time...you hv no way...the ultimate conclusion is prevailed.

No.I don't cherish a ray of hope that after death Durdhara will love me her best,give me pleasure by her real love,because I know that's not to be.I'm a deprived person-deprived of love-parent's love,wife's love,Acharya's love & so more...

Last of all I hv a desire to request my future generation...plzz don't hate me.I was not good not so bad too.I was a simple one...I don't hope for your love,but don't consider me as an unscrupulous.
...It's my humble request...plzz try to feel me...your try will be my award...I shall think that at last I've made a mark in the heart of my future fellows...w..h..o...a...t...la...st...d..o..n't...h...a...t...e...m...m...e..
...a den of light...smooth & comfortable light...

Gentle Tale Of Love & Languishment

koun ho koun tum...???
Helen got stunned.What'll be the perfect answer-she can't realize...
-bolo...kiya tum meri Dhara ho??Dhara mujhe skhama kar chuke hain...haan??kripaya uttar do.

Due to lack of light Helen's face was not shown clearly...what should she do???It's an undeniable fact that she is his married wife...she has every & every right to be with him...isn't it a CHEATING??...he wanted Durdhara...not Cornelia.
...But ...but...how could she resist herself hiding in that vast chest...to feel the heavenly peace in those warm arms...how could she leave the opportunity??...the golden key of her dreamland is a simple lie...rosy & thornful...it's not a sin at all...!!?

Putting her head on his shoulder,she stated-
haan main Durdhara (in normal voice) ki porchhayeen(lowerer tone) hoon(again normal voice)

With a meaningful smile,the silver moon in the sky witnessed the companionless moon to be accompanied with an incomparable companion...

The rays of morning Sun lightened the petals of Greek Lotus...twinkle twinkle little moon...
-aapka piyas buja ya nehi yavan nari??ya aur asatya kaheneki avashakta haan???
-Samrat!! aap mujhe kaise sambodhit kar rahe hain??main aapka raani hoon...
-chup raho...saare sima lung chuke ho tum...itna bada mithya!!chhee!!! itna piyas mujhe pane ki??!!...pati-patni ke samvandh kiya shirf sharir main hi simit hain??...ahh...main bhi kisko samjha raha hoon!!ye yavan kiya jaane koi bhi samvandh ka prakit mulya...piyas mit chuke hain ya aur girne ki ichha hain??
-Samrat,aap ek nari ka uski pati k prati prem ko kyon piyas jaise shabd se kalankit kar rahe hain??...main toh...
-prem?!prem sadev satya ke adhar par prasphutit hota hey...ek vyathatur Raja ko uske paheli Raani ki naam se pratarana korke sharirik samvandh bana lene se prem toh bahut dur ki baat hain,shirf aur shirf ghrina ka hi sanchar hota hey Seluecus kanya...
-meri baat toh shuniye...maine bataya tha ki Durdhara ki parchhayeen hoon...
-ho sakta hain...par tum jitna chalak ho,shayed wo pratha vyavar kiyi thi jaise Judhisthira kehe the..."Ashwathama hata...iti gajah"...

Helen remained silent.Samrat was right!Actually she can't guess such type of reaction.Samrat proved himself just like a sent!!...a night...together...king-queen...the most normal thing of a wedding...Samrat behaves as a blooming fire!!
What will happen if she choose Antigonus?? Was daddy right in his decision??

The royal bell that was used to air any type of inconvenience of people started to ring out & it got louder & louder.Giving a ferocious look on Helen,Samrat set off for royal-court.
An extremely annoyed & rough voice roared-
Chandragupt Mourya...tum Samrat ya rakshas ho???...shihghra bahaar aao...

Helen's deep thought broke up with a female voice-
-Maharaani!
Helen hiddenly wiped her brines & turned to her.
-bolo Mihika...
-ye hay aapke liye Samrat ka shesh uphaar...

Mihika's voice was broken enough but with her best effort she's successful to hide it.But Helen was not a child at all-she understood everything.Now she gazed at the white lotuses...a drop of tear touched them...

-Mihika,Samrat ne ye kaise...!??
-woh...voh jab Parinirvan mein gaye...bahut chintit the aapke swasth ko lekar...aap achet ho gaye the isliye.unhone mujhe ye phooloon ki kaliyaan diya aur bataya-
unknowingly Mihika's tear rolled down her cheek...

-ye padma ka kaliyaan Helen k liye hey Mihika.
She was surprised to see Samrat's affectionate & loving facial expression while uttering Helen's name!!

Red bears 2 opposite meaning-
Affection-love & war...
Time & tide wait for none-
Dad's cry of blood is away


-jadi tum mujhse zara sa bhi prem korti ho...jo koi bhi dristi se,ye kaliyaan bina koi haani pahachake prasphutit karoge aur Hirat jaane ki purv use mere taraf se samarpit karoge...aur...ho sake toh Shashank ke baare main thoda gambhirta se sochna...viday...
-suniye Samrat..
.Mihika was about to call back Mourya but got able to stop herself in the last moment.

Mihika handed over the lotuses to Helen.She touched them with so much love...o...what was written inside the petals??


Grey flower & white leaf
Simplifies rigid care & hidden warmth...






Vishan SUndar...Heart touching.btw etai ki last update???
Your Heart is remained undefined..
Your large heart..
The heart of an emperor.
No one ever try to feel it.
Your Pain, your sorrow your anger and your plight...
You have seen alot and fought lots of fights.
Now really the time has arrived...
You need to get rewarded.
But none has that kind of assets.
Which may suit to give as reward to an Emperor.
So may the Almighty give you...
Whatever you wish, whatever you deserve...Veer.

Life is nothing but to walk along with the stream.
A stream which has two side.
One side holds darkness from where a soul emerges.
And the other side holds darkness to where a soul merges.
And in between of that stream...
One has to keep his/her pace with the flow of that stream.
Joy-Sorrow, Happiness-Sadness and Love-Hate are two sides of one coin.
Just like a blooming rose which has thrones and fragance as well.
Everything will come and go...
And will leave a mark on one's life..
How he/she proceeds to the next step that is the test...



Still my heart is aching and weeping..
But none can witness this as this happens silently.

My love is pure and chaste that only knows the Almighty.

Good bye my love...

Your hidden warmth and rigid care will be with me forever.



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Posted: 12 years ago
Rimi:
se ki re??? kono suspense rakhte parini?? last upd mone hochhe??
no bhai...tahole to likhei ditam😭

Coconut heart means Acharya nt Mourya😊
so this is the beginning nt the end😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
are...shesh 2 lines petal e lekha nei...anno kichhu achhe😉
ota moral of the upd😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kalabati:

tumi ki samparker bansh gachh punte phuler apekhha korte chao??😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Well Samrat sab samparkoi Bansh...😆kichu karar nei..
Smaparker Bansh gache je phul ase ta bodhoi sokoleri kamya ei Prithivite Samrat...
Rumpu...Chanakya Cocoanut heart?? hmm...tahole ebar bujhte parchi onar kashto ta koto ta...satyi khub kashtokar jakhan nijer cheye chhoto kauke tao abar nijer priya shishya and bhratushputra ke parinirbane jete dekhte hoi...na pranam kore tar ashirbaad nite parbe take samman r bhalobasa shradha die parbe, na take thamar janyo jod korte parbe...ashirvaad karte hobe tar safalyer...khub kashtokar karan ekhane safalya to...dhusar theke kalo. Ahsha kari Veer khuje pabe tar Alo.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DeewaniRimi

Well Samrat sab samparkoi Bansh...😆kichu karar nei..
Smaparker Bansh gache je phul ase ta bodhoi sokoleri kamya ei Prithivite Samrat...
Rumpu...Chanakya Cocoanut heart?? hmm...tahole ebar bujhte parchi onar kashto ta koto ta...satyi khub kashtokar jakhan nijer cheye chhoto kauke tao abar nijer priya shishya and bhratushputra ke parinirbane jete dekhte hoi...na pranam kore tar ashirbaad nite parbe take samman r bhalobasa shradha die parbe, na take thamar janyo jod korte parbe...ashirvaad karte hobe tar safalyer...khub kashtokar karan ekhane safalya to...dhusar theke kalo. Ahsha kari Veer khuje pabe tar Alo.



ore...tui khanoi claim korte paris na samparko bansh😕
asole bansh gachhe phul ase 100 yr par
tai samporker bansh gachher phool bolte bojhte cheyechhi dirghostayi samporko😳

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