Start of something beautiful#Dil Se#pt7&8pg100&113 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
Jst now read this ss. . .
And i must say,
it totaly awsome story. . . . . . . . . .
I jst lovd it. . . . .
Nxt time pls di mujhe bhi pm krna. . . .
Egarly waiting 4 it. . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome story.. hope rey realises kriya is the right gal 4 him soon..
i didn't get pm but.. 😭
awesome wrk gal.. keep writing.. 👍🏼
n pls update baatcutter soon naa 😳
Edited by arshafever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome awesome...!

sudden kiss !

kria stunned lol..!

loved it an update soon..aur mujhe pm nahi mila..!


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Posted: 13 years ago
ooosssooommm... 😃

lovd it... 😊

rey's dad is cool actually osoom whatevr he is doing 4 kriya is grt... 😃

yeh rey b na pagalho chuka h... 😡

smajta ni h she loves him... 😳

nd that kriya's scene is too funny... 😆

nd that kiss... 😳

fab.update... 👏

update soon... 😉

thanxxx 4 pm ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
unresed on pg 11
waise na hi padio to jyada acha hoga wo comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
chalo let me comment..
varna log gaaliyan denge...

i liked the part...

i mean the care concern of rey's dad... inni kaash rey dikha deta toh zindagi set ho jaati lekin then yeh work nhi milta...

haan so loved the concern...

and how she is very cautious...

and how rey is u know unaffected by the presence... and funny huya toh smile nhi toh kuch nhi...

par nah mereko chhapphhyy ki baat se thoda agree karti hun...

tht kiss looked out of place...

actually not the kiss but that rey continued it... that looked out of place...

uske alava mereko sab pasand aaya...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Res...unres...fabulus Update...:)👏

rey's dad so caring n trying his best for manaufying rey to behave properly wid kriya...:)

he is great...:)

bas aab rey ko bhi ye aab jaldi se samaj aa jaye...;)

dat kriya luvs him... :

DN Wadrobe scene was awesum...:

Dn dat hanky was really funny n sweet...:

pfor d frst tym rey laughing so close to her n too tlking normally...:)

kriya was so happy wid all dis...:)

...but lagta hai rey also luv her...:)

but had a reason datz y not telling...:(

but datz upto u...l

uv it...

thnx for d pm...:)

Edited by d3riya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it!!
Especially the unique kiss😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
why is rey so rude to her...but the kiss in the end..ahh...m dead ...update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: yogini64

Wow . . . New ss 😃 yup!!!!!
kriya is a middle class gal & wears saree wid pallu over head 😔 lolz wo bas starting mei tha u see shechanged ...
rey to aise hi behave karega na agar vo itni dhaki chupi rahegi toh . . . . . . . Shayad uski waist tak nhi dikhti hogi 🤣 rofl!!!!!! tu bhi na
hehehe . . . . . Grey frock . . . . Lagta hai rey ke parents ghar pe nhi hai 😆 arey lyk the ones she use in D3... koi baat nahi koi kuch nahi bolega
& the theme music 'dil se' is itself so sensuous . . . . . . Sorry, kriyaansh made it so ☺️ i loved it from day one as im fan of SRK... infact i love him ... and yeah agree kriyaansh make it sensuous when SRK made it hawt
& khadoos rey gets more wild n hot later . . . . . 😉 hehe...😆
the way u described the whole dance . . . . . . I could totally imagine it wid a glass as a barrier 😛
post next part soon

thank god u got the dance sequence ...

yup soon😳

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