MG-Innocent Love #6 link Thread# 7-pg 165

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ritzy09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#571

wow...that was such a complex update but you wrote it wonderfully...

he is busy and she is gettign used to it. She is getting mature and just want to make him happy whatever time he is there with her...

on the other side, he knows he is not giving her enough time and is pained by the fact that she is holding back her own wishes and desires for his happiness...

Physically they have gone ahead and consummated the rleationship but it is probably not meeting of souls...or at leats in Maan's view it is more his passion...

very interesting and loads of emotions...

waiting now for trip...hope they understand each other better...

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dhamigeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#572

geet has almost lost her life

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--ANGEL--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#573

awesome part...but feeling sad that geet is not the same old geet...she is maturing...plz update soon

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-memorable-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#574

apni iss guilt trip me maan kuch ulta seedha na kar de bas🤪

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janvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#575

hey

gr8 part..

cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 12 years ago

#576

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story
thanks for the pm

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#577

brilliant part...

maan feeling guilty for not giving much time to geet and geet slowly adjusting with him... both r right in there on parts... maan is trying to give all his free time to her where as geet being a good and caring wife doesnt complain ... so what is the solution for this now???

waiting for the next

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#578

Originally posted by -lakshmi-

no words other than THANK YOU... thank u for remembering me

todays update was just fab... yeh maan tho hamesha busy rehtha hai... but geet is such a cutie pie... she is exactly what we should say of adjusting nature... when maan is not there with her she though misses him but never complains and when she s with him shes so happy and thanx to maan for making those lil moments so special for her...

geet is learning about his passion step by step... and now am able to clearly understand y maan is holding himself...

gulity trip??? well just like we feel sad for geet, maan is also feeling the same and knowing he is reason for that his guilt is only increasing... and then one day ... am too waiting... what happened????

Awesome analysis as ususal... you always deserved this thanks dear... if was my mistake i kept missing you every time...

you know what... i type in such hurry and then post in such hurry that things always miss from my mind... if hurry nahi karrongee na then update he nahi mil payega...

plsss dont be sorry for not replying dear... we all understand how much pains and time is taken to write a part and post it... and ur updating regularly is itself a treat for us... so plz continue that and when ever u get time ur replies are heartily welcome... 🤗

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CrazyMaaneetFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#579

Lovd reading it.

Bt to b honest according to me d whole concept here in dis update ws done in a rush.
Kuch zyad fast ho gya

I mean geet's adjustmnt cud hav been shown bt on d othr hand only maan's pov is thr regarding their physical closeness. I mean hw geet felt? Whethr she wntd to consummate in actual sense.i knw she lovs maan like crazy bt wen she knws maan feels guilt n tries to control so is it only maan who is leading to decide abt their relation. In dis aspect atleast maaneet shud hav propr talk.

Dont knw if m able to put my query correctly or nt...

Geet's physicl maturity is shown abruptly i gues.it shud hav been slow.

2ndly,Geet is getting matured no doubt bt its wrong on part of maan to feel himself reason fr dis.
Earleir she ws jus in her world of lov n dreamy lov stories of M & B bt nw she's in college dat too in London whr students r much more advanced than those in small city like Hp. Wid exposure to ouer world alongwid gaining age n also sense of responsibility is making her change n not Maan's work schedule only...

She is hesistant while talking to maan jus to ensure he is relaxd...

Anyways nxt part me jhatka lgne wala hai lgta hai...

Bt maan ka J hona toh beech me hi reh gya...

Conti soon.