SS: Of Lemons & Limes #2 (Chapter 7-12)

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Ruki.F

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Tooo good ... Sure this night they gone make it ... And ur prcap seems next update gone be hottest one ... Will be waiting for it dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

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God that was brilliant! I'm going to better holding my breath until the next chapter for his answer.

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Thanushiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hayee ! I should get my ambulance ready after reading this "Jadu Hain Nasha Hain " I am panting after reading this update ! I just loved the update ! Completely adored it !

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Dreamcatcher

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Absolutely delightful chapter... enjoyed reading it... thanks!

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Ovi_Tanni

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Omoraboti

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<font color="#cc0000">Hae ami Bangali. 😊Samiya r Ami dujoni Bangladeshi.We met in IF .. where are you from?</font>

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<font color="#cc0000">Good question! I too wonder sometimes howI juggle so much .. lol .. baby ke ador diye debo and really nice to have you here.</font>

<em><font color="#cc0000">On the story .. dont be sad .. I think you will no longer be sad after the next update. 😊</font>

tume and samiya dujonei Bangladeshi???? omaaa ameoto😃 i live in Dhaka at Bashabo...i m so happpyyy to meet u here🤗 btw tomar baby kemn ache??

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Sona257

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I'm super excited about the precap.. can't wait!!

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tsultana

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Omggg wat an wicked update!!! The build up was super!! Cannot wait for thenext update!!!

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Kamala

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Kushi is worried about the attire for the party in AR .. Loved the way Payal teases her.

Kushi avoids her breakfast to reach the spot at time. Kushi sacrificing food is a big thing. Come on Kushi ASR will wait for u.

Initially the lift offer was for morning only. ie , from home to office, now he offers her lift in the evening too. And still he is confused about his feelings to her !!!
"Scars take time. Pain goes away but scars can be stubborn" I liked this sentence

One thing I noticed in this chapter is Kushi was so silent in front of Arnav. I Mean her usual blabbering wasn't there.

Arnav become crazy. He chuckled in front of Akash without any reason.😆

This is the only SS in Fanfiction which deals with smell. It reminds me about the film "Perfume". I know that, film and this SS is not comparable, but there are only few works which deals with sense smell as a main element of the story.

Precap :OMG Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai. Please Devi Maiyya don't let this magic stop soon, after all Kushi had spend lot of time to select the sari to impress ASR .

Eagerly waiting for next part.

Edited by ramyarn - 12 years ago