SS: Of Lemons & Limes #2 (Chapter 7-12)

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#361

wow awesome update

Arnav is just too into Khushi and he doesn't want lol poor guy

She walks in and he forget everything

uh oh Khushi's marriage, I wonder how he'll handle that

Khushi's upset! Not Cool!

Oh well can't wait to read the next chapter of how they go home together (hopefully)

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Turkiye

@Turkiye

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#362

Love your story.

Write as it comes to you, I don't think any of your readers want you to finish it as fast as possible.
Just let your creativity flow 😃

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melanie

@Black_kittykat

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#363

Beautiful update, Arnav got so addicted and attached to Khushi in these few days that he felt it was not as per his nature to let a girl affect him so much and wanted find a way to stay away from her and LOL when she told him abt her marriage prospects he's finding ways to keep her near him 😆 😆 These two are such dumbos in love that they never are able to read eachothers signals.

I love this SS and the longer it goes the better so pls dont be in a rush to end it 🤗

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Prasanna_dhanu

@Prasanna_dhanu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#364

I ma glad you decided to take ARSHI beyond your planned number of chapter.. fabulous update and great job of describing Arnav's mind

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arnshi

@arnshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#365

awesome...loved it...dear you pen it the way you like...more chapters more arhi😃

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#366

interesting chapter

but your note needs attention. i would say take your time with the story but not with the updates.

you kill me by making us wait so long for the updates. like the pace of the story but not your update frequency

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#367

oh god arnie arnie arnie what do we do with ya
and boy did he confuse simran or what with his behaviour
and he confused himself more with his weird behaviour
boy boy this was so much fun right what are they doing
goood move though DM there is hope after all for the two
please let there be hope for these two
wow the silence that streched between them after she told him of her future plans of getting married was just awkward and confusing too
wow that sure gave him a shock right when she told him about impending marriage
wow that sure had him confliceted right
not wanting to let her go but even then not wanting her with him after all she is a major distraction for him
but he cant do without the distraction either
well you can give us even more chapters if you want as this way we will see more of them

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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#368

OM BOTI JI KI JAI HO...THIS IS A SAD SITUATION WHEN NONE CAN

OPEN THEIR HEART AND MOUTH

SHE IS ACTING NAIVE AND HE IS ACTING ALMIGHTY

SITUATION GAMBHEER HAI AAPKE NIMBOO MAUSAMI KI

PM KIYA KIJIYE ACHHA LAGTA HAI

THANKS FOR THE UPDATE THOUGH AFTER LONG YET WELCOME

KKKA

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9424976

@9424976

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#369

I do not want this story to end so please continue it for however long you can! I loved this update. They are slowly starting to realize their needs and wants and this wedding idea will be a great push.