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Originally posted by: K.R_ackraal

NYCC awesome KR bestiesss...

loved KR PARt

update soon...

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007

Great Update!😃

Originally posted by: aishu3003

awesome update😊

Originally posted by: -shenz-

sweetie pie.. what was that Gateway of India wala scene.. that zoomed off my head... thriller u say...

anyways baaki was gud.. it was? i doubt it..

abhi m in hurry so will bade comments next time... hope u understand.. i really do...

thanks mein bolne se rahi..😛 oh i know dat...

but I didnt like the crediting part... huh.. faltu.. main itna nahi kar sakti.. for u... it was required...

anyways mujhe yeh VIYANKA plan jaana hai.. but only whne u can u[date next 😉 oh surre!

Originally posted by: Roxxy47

Pehle toh itna confusing art dikhaya aur phir keh rahi ho 'Forget about this and read'🤔... ab aur kya keh saktii huh tu hi bta..?
The banner was amazing , it shows the meaning of ur SS , ek taraf 'Friends' and ek taraf 'Enemies' , great work 😃... all thnks 2 kinjal..
Starting was nice Rey Tan ka B'day bhool gaya and se had pie all over her face , acha hai 😆... i doubt it...!
Oopsie Rey ki toh double band baj gai... sachhi...!
Party mein Superman and phir Kria ki mom pe chillaing 🤣... hahahaha...!
'Viyanka's plan' suspense ... hmm...
Waise Shenz Di ka idea aur tera dimaag mil ke acha kaam kar lete ho 😉.. haha thanx!
Superb work... itna b accha nhi tha..
Loved it ❤️... aww..
Will be waiting for the next part 😊.

Chapter 2: A Stranger

Banner Credit- kINjAl...!!
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kriya: FISH!
kriya saw rey, taani, Vicky n Mr Stranger stepping out of car..

priya: kya hua re?

kriya: no way rey... such a big liar

rey: kriya actually i..i wasn't going 2 but..
dey came to her..

kriya: u promised me...

rey: but kriya she..

kri:i can't believe u can fall till dis level rey...

rey: kriya suno toh.. he says..

rey to tan: i'll b back...

mr stranger: no rey i'll b back...

rey: par tu...

mr stranger: please let me handle...

rey: k fine go ahead.. *frowns*

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Kriya was sitting at d bank weeping... wen "He" enters...
mr stranger: kriya?

kr: u think im dumb? idiot? no, u must b thinking im a bimbo ryt?

mr stranger: sorry?

kr: can u please just go away..

mr stranger: u need som1  to console you?

kr: i dnt even know you...

"He" sits down..

mr stranger: kriya?

kriya: what? (irritated)

mr stranger: wats wrong? what did rey do?

kriya: he promised me dat he wont bring dat taani along... ugh! n he brought her..

mr stranger: well she's his grl frnd... he will bring her along...

kriya: nahi i mean agar gf mil gyi toh frnds ko bhul jaega?

Mr stranger: esa nahi ha... ur lot more special to him compared 2 taani.. n y dont u call ur bf?

kriya: i don't hv one okay? :/

Mr stranger: u seem lyk a girl who boys usually hv crushes on..

a smile crossed kriya's face..

kriya: what're you trying to say?

mr stranger: me? alley im toh a sidha sadha baccha...

kriya laughs..

kriya: kese kiya tumne?

mr stranger: kya?

kriya: jaadu...rote-2 hansane ka?
she luked into his eyes..

mr stranger: well... jaadu toh nhi pta par tumhe hansa diya na...?
he said looking else where... she had a guilt of looking at him lyk dat..

kriya: kon ho tum?

mr stranger: rey ka bhai...

kriya: me uske pure khandan ko janti huh.. par tum kon ho?

mr stranger: Mr Stranger...

kriya: dats not your name..

mr stranger: i won't tell u so easily madam..

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"YOU???" vicky n priya said together oops yelled together...
p: what d hell r u doing here?

v: what d hell r YOU doing here??

p: u... mebhi kisse bat kar rahi huh.. rey whats he doing here?

re: well... guys group trip ha yar adjust..

v: adjust iske sath?

p: rey dekho isse..

v: han-2 dekho me kitna sundar hu...

p: you're SICK!

v: humph!

n priya leaves...

re: i wonder where kriya is?

tan: c'mon she's wid him must b having a gala time...

re: m afraid kahin kriya ko kuch hua toh nahi..

tan: oh c'mon stop being a baby... she can luk after herself...

re: i dnt know why... i don't lyk her wid any oder guy?!

tan: fish! such a whiny baby...!? :/ :/

re: SHUT UP TAN...

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k:well, chalo chalein dey must b waiting..

m.s: let'em wait...

k: oh you flirt creature... c'mon lets go...

finally dey out...

rey: where were you?

kr: chill rey i ws just out wid "Him"

rey: okay...

tan: yeah protective rey was worried..!

rey: TAN_____________

Precap: big break-up or fight..!

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sorry fr d update i know it wasn't gud..

loved it...

lovedd itt...

Thats amazing part

agai chipku yaha bhi
huh

mr.stranger seems great

par yeh rey ka bhai hai kaun..?

Reveal soon..

Thanx for the pm