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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

man this is so good

the cv's need to read this

loved it

thanx for the pm

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RJXX

@RJXX

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Great Job Vi!!

Nice way to leave the Arshi story untainted

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NainaAlex

@NainaAlex

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

oh wow loved it...would be great if it moved like this

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Lovely OS!👏

You brought out the truth the way you interpreted it and described it beautifully. Sheetal may never accept Dhruv for what he did to her, but she can at least let Aarav meet his father. Yet somewhere I side Sheetal's decision, though she never said here, with the way you described her apprehension, that she would never be letting Aarav meet him.

If she doesn't trust him, then Khushi shouldn't persuade her either. But what does Khushi know of Dhruv's real self!😳

Annie

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Jina

@Happy-go-lucky

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: abavi
Thanks so much for such a booster comment!😃

Oh, you're welcome! No, seriously, this was very good... *sigh* How I wish to see this kind of sensible stuff...

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panck

@panck

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Nicely done..
Very dignified and mature and clear..

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

nice one..!
Dnt knw how will d present track shape up but ur OS is totally logical...dnt mind if d CVs show sumthing lyk dis...

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Wow, hope that happens like this ...the only thing that worried me in this track is that even though she promised Arnav she still sees the DNA test ...and he might get annoyed with her for not trusting him...loved your justification here for that ...thanks for the pm!