SS:Saans(The last breath) Chap9 Pg50 29th JAN

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shruti

@shrutisweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

shru finially u have updated,thanks yaar😛
kya arjun ne lunch ke time utta hai,
oh oh arjun diary ko chupna chahata hai ,
uff ab ue new cadet hai,
tum na bilkul SM ho re,
rathord,roshni and arjun's conversation liked it,
in diary arjun ne riya ko kuyn hurt karnata hai😭
poem to tum bohut achi likti ho👏
uff ho shru ab ye riya kaha hai re😆

Edited by shrutisweety - 12 years ago

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

Nice part... verses were too good...loved it... update soon...

Edited by Leki - 12 years ago

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.....pujan.....

@.....pujan.....

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#343

res
unres

quite long update...😃

liked it?? loved it...😃

the way u describe it's just indescribable...😊

riya is alive, yes yes yes riya is alive...

that girl is riya who miss arjun alot...

waiting for next chappy...😆

Edited by .....pujan..... - 12 years ago

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pravallika

@prava55663

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

It was so emotional update...

Specially the poem in the diary which you mentioned...Awesome yaar...

Arjun is feeling so much for Ria...

waiting for the further updates...

and one word for the update...

Magical

Edited by prava55663 - 12 years ago

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

omg dear...

it was so good. at last u updated ...

too good chapter..

mystery love, fun.. all in righ mix..

keep up the good work dear...

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#346

Hmmm...Shru another epic update is all I can say, I want to know what happened and how Riya got captured. When will the team know about her or do they already know and are there to rescue her.

Loved the glimpse in to the past and want to know more, please update soon.

Thanks for the PM.

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Thx 4 updating

Hmm, So Roshni loves Arjun...

Bt Arjun not love her , he ws not for any commitment to her..

Arjun feel bad 4 Riya.

And RR are cousins

love suspense , bt plz update soon

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#348

main to aur bhi confused hogayi

But loved Arjun's scenes when he was hiding the diary😆

N loved Arjun and Roshni's conversation😳, was simple but true...

and finally who's the one in the cell😕?

please update very soon dear😊

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cena-22

@cena-22

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#349

Nice part ,,,,,

good one 👏 dheeli

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#350

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Shru kitna wait karwaya meri behen,you know na i love this FF 😒 puppy face 😒 chal koi nehi 😛

it was a magical part yaar just wow 👏 👏 Arjun's flashback,her honest confession about their rer break up,his hard trial to hide the diary everything was written so perfectly 👏 👏

Roshni riya cousin?? Who is in the cell?? Riya right?? How did she got captured?? She is supposed to be dead to her team mates?? Who is betraying among the new cadets?? 🤔 so many question na?? 😃 you know me. 😛 wish to have a quick update dear 😛

teri poem as usualy out of the world kitna tareef karoon ab toh words bhi khatam ho chuke 😛 just love them love them love them a looot ❤️ but todays poem made my eye lead wet it had so much pain in it.

Carry on shru,love you mah sister 🤗

Edited by -sree13- - 12 years ago