*Completed* Th#2 SS:A Jalebi-fied Tale

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gowri1712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

WOOW
THAT WAS GREAT
WELL BE BACK SOON

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aamshula87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Superb.so all wer playin drama.poor kushi all wer pullin her leg even arnav.so asr made plan 2 show kushi a problem full marriage.dhruv n la so cute.plz giv an epilogue.r u on vacation.hav a safe journey.thanx 4 pm n plz epilogue after u come back.

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john-angad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#303

god all the drama scared me!

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Sindhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#304

sry for not commenting daily...

bcz i"m in hostel...

sry i cant access IF...but my friend is hlpng for tis...

so nly lat rply...

so sad u r gng to updt for 10 days...

all ur os ff ss r so swt...

i lov thm all...

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ipkknd_hazel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#305

o god, the jaa simran cracked me up! 🤣

aww poor khushi! 😆

end? so faast? dayyum.

neways, enjoyy ur journey, k? :))

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Sparkling-eyes5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Oh my my...buhut filmy tah yar
loved it :D

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gowri1712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#307

that was a superb ending dear
well I had been off for two days n u ended this???
so sad
come back soon n write the next

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mssj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#308

Aww. It was all planned. But they were so harsh. Loved the ending.

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coolflora

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Posted: 12 years ago

#309

love it

so much drama

pm me next time you start writing another story

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#310

a nice though a very melodramatic conclusion... at least arnav made khushi's wish come true even though it was quite OTT!

hope you have a pleasant time in Iran... bon voyage!

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