arhi ff - title needed- update-PART 4 (pg 10)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello all

I m starting wid dis new ff'

Unlike our serial khushi here is educated n comes from a good family

I ve only got tid bit changes to certain characters'n some new ones ll b introduced later as d story progresses'

BUT'arnav remains d same'hez js too perfect..is nt he?? 😛

Njy 😊

Part 1

Arnav singh raizada landed in Mumbai for the launch of his new collection'

only if he could easily get it done back in delhi'bt no'di had to put him into this'di has to listen to her astrologer before his every launch for good luck for success n for wt not'n every time dt pandit gets him ripped off oh no..dis time he got way better'he suggested his di to launch dis collection in MUMBAI'yy???
oh he has a better reason for that as well'apparently dis ll mark a NEW BEGINNING!!
YA RIGHT!!

n so he is here'in mumbai'for 6 months..or more'may b even settle here if it goes according to dt stupid astrologer

he cud ve got a nice peaceful house for himself'bt as thngs were simply not working his way'he had 2 settle for an apartment'since dis ws d case..arnav thought it would b better to settle for a place dat is less fancy n away from media'dt ll b good for his personal n professional life'

Only if media got d news dt he shifted his base to Mumbai'he smirked'dt wud be some news'lets not get into dt...

N so he found himself in a nice friendly neighborhood of middleclass families'hmm..it is quite okay'he can live here'he can manage'

He reached his floor'looked arnd for his flat'took d key out of his pocket'js when he pushed d key inside d lock "hey you'wt do u thnk u r doing???"

ENTERS KHUSHI'

REWIND

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khushi kumari gupta's train stopped 'she got up took her luggage "coolie'coolie.."

no one seems to care..arrrgghh

hailing from a stinky rich family n wid " I ll make it on my own" attitude it ws nt realy helping her'all dis struggling ve never been a part of her life..it ws annoying..irritating'n 'n 'jst not helping !!

khushi's father Shashi Gupta a well known industrialist from lucknow respected his daughter's decisions'unlike d other members of d family'he knew khushi had d potential to do big...she ws diffirent from others..she ws weird but smart n intelligent bt emotinal too...but she ws a survivor...he knew dt..

she would never accept any help from him'he ws happy of course'bt still a lil help ll do no harm'cud it??

But khushi had simply refused'

Js for her sake..he simply accepted her request'not to help her..umm..well not directly 😛

He secretly arranged an apartment for her'where he can manage to keep an eye on her n also dint let her feeling get hurt'

Fathers I tell u'

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Fine!! I managed to get d house bt how on earth m I gona reach dere from dis godforsaken place wid so much lugguage???

She looked up at d sky'srsly??no help???she took a deep breath'ok fine I dint say U cant hlp me ..dt ws jst for my family..cmon now devi mayya'

"coolie chahiye madam?" asked a coolie

"nahi nahi'bhaiya'shukriya'ye sara samaan to hum hamara khaando par rakh kar jane wale hai " said khushi

"acha to phir theek hai.." n he walked away'


sarcasm is nt gona help u khushi


"arey bhaiya'" bt he ws already gona'"arrghhh"

somehow she managed to get a coolie whch ws nt dt difficult..oh yes I assure u dt'cuz it ws hell more difficult to find a taxi!!

dt coolie had dumped all her lugguage on d road n left..

after nearly hlf n hour she ws pushing her suitcases inside d taxi all by herslf'cuz d driver asked "extra" for lugguage..n she cant waste d money for such petty thngs'she had to learn to save d money'

just when she thought she ve had enough for d entire week'on reaching her building she ws told dt her apartment keys is missing 'she took all her lugguage to her floor...fuming panting n sulking...when she saw dt a guy..a man dressed up in a suit'it looked like he came straight out of a corporate magazine'opening her door' "hey you..wt do u thnk u r doing??"

THE END

how ws it??

u thnk i shud cont??

lemme knw if i shud...

love to read ur feedback

n also...hlp me finalise d title...thnx

😃


part2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3271854/arhi-ff-title-needed-update-part-4-pg-10?pn=4


PART 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3271854/arhi-ff-title-needed-update-part-4-pg-10?pn=7


PART 4

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3271854&TPN=10

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kvarsha thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start...
thnx 4 pm 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good intro!!! waiting for more!!!! you could call it- 'the girl next door', maybe... that is, if they're to be neighbors here... are they gonna be neighbors???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it seems really interesting!!!

if it is light hearted and funny you can name it "PADOSAN" a classic bolywood rom com!!!

plz do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fabulous start n tnx a lot 4 da pm..!! Feel so gd 2 read new ff 4m u buddy:-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh can't wait to read more plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yay y not plz contnue
it is very nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc start!!
thnx fr d PM :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great start
continue soon thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ahaaan pretty interesting...

would love to know what happens next...

are they sharing an apartment??

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