Maaneet FF Mere Humsafar# 13 UPD pt 110 pg 27 - Page 6

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Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next update very soon a major twist will come up in this FF and once again I assure u that Maaneet will be together and no misunderstanding will take place between them😳 but before the twist enjoy some Maahi moments 😉

love-Piya

PART 109

He placed Geet like a delicate flower and covered her with his shadow thus forcing the moon and the stars to cry as they were not getting the view of the most gorgeous angel that nature had ever created

Maan removed his trousers and his boxer and without wasting a single moment he covered his lady love with the protective shield of his body

Geet slowly started losing herself to her Maan but this did not stop her from declaring her possession on him

She gave an angry glare to the moon as she found it admiring her charming husband

She immediately covered his body by pulling the satin white sheet on

The moon hid itself behind the clouds as the breeze too realized that this moment belonged only to Maaneet

They could not witness a single shot of their divine phase

The sheet of the bed started getting messed up with the heat of the couple as they continued to claim one another again and again with a passion and love that was never ending'

Next Day,

With a bright smile on her face Geet moved herself securely to cuddle herself in her charming husband's loving folds

But to her dismay her blissful desires could not turn into a reality as Maan was not there besides her

She opened her eyes immediately as she didn't like any morning without looking at her husband's face

She covered herself with the spread and scanned the entire room with a hope of locating Maan

Geet: Shayad washroom mein honge Maan [I guess Maan might be in the washroom]

She took few steps in that direction but soon realized that Maan was not there in the washroom as well

Geet: Ye Maan bina bataye kaha chale gaye? [Where did Maan go without informing me?]

She was just about to dial Maan's number when she found a note on a nearby desk

Maan's Note:

Maan: Good Morning Jaan isse pehle ke tum mujhpar sawalo ka bauchar kar doh main hi tumhe jawab de detha hoon. [Good Morning Love now before u shower me with a list of questions let me answer all of them right now]

Maan: Ek bahut hi important aur urgent kaam aa gaya tha jiski wajah se mujhe apni Maayari se kuch ganto k liye dur jaana padh raha hai. Kuch foreign clients aanewale hai aur iss meeting mein mera jaana zaruri tha [There was a very important and urgent meeting due to which I have to stay away from my Maayari for few hours. The meeting is with some foreign clients and my presence is very essential to make this project a success]

Geet parted her lips slightly to say something but before she could utter any word her eyes went ahead to read the next line of the note

Maan: Ab tum puchogi ke maine tumhe jagaya kyun nahi? [Now u must be eager to know why I didn't wake u up.]

Geet pouted her lips cutely and nodded her head in approval

Maan: Wo kya haina duniya mein ek lauti aisi jagah hai jahah par har subah ek bedaag chand ka deedar ho sakta hai aur wo chand mere soothe hue shehzadi ka roop hai jisse main sapne mein bhi dur karne ki juraat nahi kar saktha 'agar main apni Maayari ko jaga deta toh din mein chand ki chandni ka deedar kaise kar pata? [There is a reason behind my behavior. In this entire world there is a single place where I can see the serenity of the moon even in broad daylight as the angelic form of my princess during her sleep appears like a sacred picture of the moon and I can never dare to disturb this mesmerizing form of yours now tell me if I had disturbed your sleep how would it had been possible for me to admire your magical form?]

Geet blushed on reading that line

Maan: Maayari ab itna sharmayogi toh mujhe office mein kaam karne mein mushkil ho jaayegi [Maayari if u continue blushing I swear it would become difficult for me to work at the office]

Geet made a big O with her mouth and went ahead to read the next line

Maan: Guskati ki hai aur jaanta hoon main maafi ka haqdaar nahi hoon par phir ho sake toh apne Maan ko maaf kar dena Maan ki chand aapka ye asman shaam dalne se pehle ghar laut aayega aur haan wo violin stick ko taiyaar rakhna aaj baaki ke music lessons complete jo karne hai [I am sorry for my troubling u and I know that I am not capable of getting your forgiveness but if possible do forgive your miscievious husband. I promise Maan's moon that ur sky will be at your service before evening and yes don't forget to keep the violin stick ready as we will complete the remaining lessons of music today]

Geet covered her face with her palm and whispered slowly

Geet: I love u my Besharam Husband [I love u my Shameless Husband]

She kissed the note and went to the washroom to freshen up

After some time

Living room

As Geet descended down the stairs she saw Dadima, Meera and Annie totally engrossed in some animated discussion

Annie: Maan bhai ko manna padega kitne din baaki hai par bhai toh ab se hi taiyaariyon mein lag gaye hai [I salute Maan bhai still so many days are left for the special occasion but he has started the preparations so early]

Dadima: Iss ishq ka junoon kehte hai Annie jo sar chadkar bolta hai [This is called the passion of love Annie and this passion can make everything possible]

Meera: Geet aa rahi hai topic change karte hai [Geet is coming let's change the topic]

All of them seal their lips for few seconds and try to think some natural topic to discuss so that they would not spoil the surprise element for Geet that Maan had planned

Geet: Good Morning

Annie and Meera smile at Geet as Geet took the blessings from Dadima

Dadima: Jeete rahiye bete [God bless u child]

Geet: Aap logh kis bare mein baat kar rahe the? [What were you'll discussing?]

This question was a googly for the 3 ladies as none of them were able to come up with a valid topic of discussion

Geet: Bataiyena? [Pls tell me also]

Dadima decided to take charge of the situation

Dadima: Wo Geet hum toh [Geet we were talking about']

But before Dadima could complete the sentence Adi entered the Mansion as a savior

Adi: Mubarakho Dadima, Geet ek khush khabri hai [Congratulations Dadima, Geet there is happy news]

Dadima: Khush khabri ke bare mein aapko kaise pata? [How do u know about the good news?]

Adi: Mujhe kya Dadima pure office ko pata hai [The whole office staff knows about it]

Meera: Geet tune khush khabri ke bare mein pure office staff ko bata diya aur hume kuch khabar nahi di this is not done [Geet u shared the happy news with the whole staff of KC and u didn't tell us this is not done]

Geet was confused

Annie: Adi bhaiya aapko good news ke bare mein kya khud Maan bhai ne bataya hai? [Adi did Maan himself shared this good news with u?]

Adi: Haan Annie Maan Sir ne confirm kiya hai iss baat ko [Yes Annie Maan Sir confirmed this news]

Dadima: Geet hum aapse naaraz hai Maan ke baad iss khushi ki baat ko jaanne ka haq humara tha aakir hum pardadi bannewale hai [Geet I am angry with u as after Maan it was only my right to know about this happy news afterall I am the one who is going to be a great Grandmom]

Geet: Haan Dadi wo toh thik'[Yes Dadi I agree']

She cut her statement short as she realized that the whole family was thinking she is pregnant

Geet: Ye Maan ki kaunsi nayi shararat hai abhi batati hoon unhe [What type of new mishchief is this from Maan's side let me ask him]

Adi: Geet ek minute Dadima mujhe lagta hai aap logo ko kuch galat faimi hui hai happy news se mera matlab ye nahi tha ke aap dadi aur main mama bannewala hoon. Main toh ye keh raha tha ke iss saal ka best Buisnessman award humare Maan Sir ko mila hai [Geet just a sec, Dadima I guess there is some misunderstanding I didn't mean to say that u will become a grandmom with the mention of happy news. Maan Sir is getting the best businessman award this year this was what I wanted to share]

The 3 ladies burst out laughing as they saw Geet's expressions

It was a mixture of happiness, confusion and anger

Happiness as Maan got the award, confusion because of the pregnancy misunderstanding and anger as she felt this was once again a plan of Maan of teasing her

Dadima: Gussa mat hoiye Geet hum Maan ko bol denge ke humari Geet maa banne ke liye excited ho rahi hai aur agar aapne jaldi se unki dil ki baat puri nahi kitoh wo aapse naaraz ho jaayengi phir dekhna kaise aapke Maan aapko sach much mein wo khushi dethe hai [Don't be angry Geet I will tell Maan that his Geet is excited to become a mother and if u don't fulfill her wish she will be angry I am sure Maan will do the needful so that your wish turns into a reality soon]

Geet: Dadima aap bhi na [Dadima pls]

She hugged her and tried to hide her blush in her motherly embrace

Adi: Waise Geet Maan Sir ne packing karne k liye kaha hai aap dono aaj Mumbai jaa rahe ho award ceremony wahi haina [Geet Maan Sir has told u to do the packing as both of u have to leave for Mumbai today since the award ceremony is going to be conducted over there]

Dadima: Jaaiye bete jaakar packing kar lijiye [Go and do the packing Geet]

Geet nods her head and goes to their room to do the needful

After Geet's departure

Annie: Par Adi bhaiya Dev bhai ne bataya tha phone par ke award ceremony 2 hafte baad hai toh abhi se kyun? [But Adi Dev had informed me on the phone that the award ceremony is after 2 weeks then why are they leaving so early?]

Adi: Annie bhool gayi Maan Sir ka SLOW SURPRISE [Annie don't u remember Maan Sir's SLOW SURPRISE?]

Dadima: Ye 2 hafte Geet ki liye sabse khoobsurat yaadon ki saugat lekar aayenge [These 2 weeks will bring the most cherishable memories of Geet's life with it]

Adi and the 2 ladies nod in approval as the countdown of Maan's slow surprise had started

PRECAP: TRIP BEGINS BUT WHERE R MAANEET HEADING TO MUMBAI OR KASHMIR?😉 😳

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PART 110: Page 27

Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb update sweetu ...love it...thxs fpr the pm ...precap is interesting...plzz update soon...love u rab rakha 🤗
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interesting precap
nice update
u r a marvolous writer
keep the good work dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update i think they are going to kashmir them mumbai



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