Dr ASR and Dr KR

This is my not so good attempt at a ff. I would appreciate if ppl can read and put forward their comments, Thanks :)

Thread one, Chapter I.

'Dr Khushi what is the most essential point to be remembered as far as these sutures are concerned. Answer me now!!!!' impatiently Dr R questioned his most despicable intern. He was determined to prove that no matter how many hospitals the girl's family owns, she does not deserve a place in the Doons National Hospital (DNH). It was one of the best in the country and only the top merits makes their way into the premises.

But Khushi was in panic. She would feel bile coming through, the nausea was getting uncontrollable. She would feel the surrounding getting blurred. But she decided to concentrate on the table. However no matter how many times she tries to look at the wounds, flashes of that dreadful night was being refreshed in her mind. "No I can't do this" Khushi whispered to her ownself and left the operation room(OR).

Dr R was astounded. Never ever in last ten years has he seen an intern leave the OR without the permission of the consultant .Moreover she didn't even bother to apologize on not being able to answer the question. He was fuming but the operation needed his concentration. He decided to deal with the rich brat later. He resumed the suturing with full concentration.

Khushi rushed to the ladies washroom on the other side of the DNH, OR section. She threw up like crazy, the discomfort was going away gradually but she felt an immense pain at the back of her head. She could feel herself drowning in darkness. Before embracing complete darkness she could only think of one person, Abhi.

Dr Suraj was puzzled at Khushi's behavior. It been three months since she has joined DNH coming straightaway from Harvard Medical school and he has got to know her better the anybody else. Khushi was the next best thing that will happen to DNH after Dr Arnav Singh Raizada. She has a natural gift and that when combined with perseverance and dedication makes her a lethal competitor. Not that Suraj minds but he was trying to understand the reason behind her sudden uninformed disappearance from the OR.

Manisha was having one of the worst day of the week. Dr Raizada definitely seems to be in a foul mood. Moreover the research grant application she was working on with Raizada has failed. That grant was important for the next generation cancer genomics project that they were planning to build on. To top it all, that stupid Dr Khushi Raichand left the OR as if she was an invited guest in there. The girl has guts but then why won't she. She practically owns this place. The Raichand trust funds the wages/paycheques for all the employees. Deciding to grab a coffee and set back to work on another application in order to appease Dr R, Manisha walked on to the ladies washroom.

"Oh my god" exclaimed Manish, lying completely unconscious with pale bluish lips was Dr Khushi. Manisha immediately pressed the emergency number, paged Dr R and the Neurosurgery team. Khushi's hands were icecold, the forehead was burning and her lips were bluish indicating lack of oxygen. Manisha checked her pulse, it was indeed very feeble.

Abhi was not taking it well. Khushi didn't have such an attack since she was prescribed inhalers on a regular basis. He was trying to clear his head and make some sense out of the situation. Arnav came out of the ICU. He nodded toward Abhi. They both proceeded towards the caf.

"I didn't know she is asthmatic. She had a severe attack so the oxygen was very low and she fainted" chipped in Arnav

How was it guys?? any comments ??? WOuld love to know whats the feedback and then I can continue or else I will take it off 😊