OS- Her new Chapter

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Parisa

@XSilentPrayersX

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

YOU ARE BACK?/

wow thats a good news

continue soon

dont leave us hanging

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Hiruni

@CDlove

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

thanks guys for all your lovely comments. I will try to upload the next part tonight :)

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Good one. Waiting for the update.

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sakthi25

@sakthi25

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

All her turmoil was well scripted in words ...
Will be waiting to red more.

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laddoo598

@laddoo598

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Hiru, so good to see a new piece of writing from you! You captured Khushi's feelings so well, wish the makers could do half as good a job as you did. Do continue soon!

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

great start... please update quickly... Been missing your writing.

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

really fab statrt loved her train of thoughts. Hope you continue sooon

xxx

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Please add me in your PM list too.
I think it is very much natural what Khushi is going through and I just hope Arnav helps her in coming through with his love.
Waiting to read the next chapter! 😃

Edited by nikki.171 - 13 years ago

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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Hiru...I liked it

the OS took the story to an angle that I thought the CV's would address...but sadly looks like the vamp route is in...

It was very well done her finally hitting on what had always been screeming at her /us...

it was not the woman the child or her husband it was her...

I often say I am not what I think I am I am not what you think I am I am but what I think you think I am...

I hope Kushi faces her insecurity and realizes her importance and the importance of her relationship with Arnav a self realisation born out her own ...and Arnav only reiterates it ...

I think this is an emotion we all have to deal with within...not without...

look forward to how you take this one...