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MyAnastasia18

@MyAnastasia18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

U r absolutely right, these kinds of dirty things still happen...first I didn't want to read this story bcoz it was a really unbearble thought for me to read how someone can spend his night with his mother-in-law and how a mother can do this to her own child and that too for money, it was irking me that they r doing it after he's married and they r officially in a relationship where they should not look at eachother with theses thoughts but after ur note I remembered that these kind of things really happen and its really disguisting bcoz its just done for money out lust...I wouldn't have believed someone but is someone like ur parents tell u about these stories u have to believe that this kind of uglly things do exist...

I PERSONALLY WOULD LOVE TO READ THIS STORY

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45678

@45678

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

i really appreciate it. your witting skills are awesome. this is the reality of our surrounding

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Ayesha

@stunning.ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

WWhat a dark story man
Such a dirty game they are playing what will be our lovely khushi will face when she come to know all about it...my heart went out for her..nd I m also crying for those who actually in this real world face these kind of evil in there life

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tanurocks

@tanurocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#294

wel done appy...u spreading a grt msg through ur stories...

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awroneema

@awroneema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#295

this story is actually horrible...i m really hating asr!! in the other ff's somehow i could accept khushi to forgive asr after repentance..but in this one from my end its a big NO!!... as in those cases asr was lusting on a horizontal line...having gf or s**ts..but this tym he is violting the vertical relations..MIL.>WIFE> then watt own daughter!!.

yesterday i read the previous parts and the whole day i was thinking how is khushi gona react after knowing the bitter truth ever!!!...u already wrote khushi is pregnant...wat will she do...!! i mean its gonna be OK if the kid is boy...somehow he will manage to survive after his father and granny's did..though mental shock will be there...but wat if the kid is girl then wat!! i mean will khushi dare to give her birth...wont she afraid wat if asr wanna lust her daughter tooo!!! neither she cud abort the baby nor give birth.. pathetic...i m sooo damn pissed off...how worst the world can be!!

and hatts off to those women who are fighting against this in real life...if i say i can understand ur pain..thn i m lying definitely...just by reading a ff i cant stand by the fact and suffocating in every single moment considering myself in this case!! and u gyz are facing it...is equal to dying in every single moment...

yaa in such situation suicide seems to be the best option..but no..why shud the poor soul be punished for others deeds..!! tough time khushi gonna face...even though asr repent after some time..will she able to forget every thing...and share her future with this blustered...( sorry but for the first time i have no luv or sympathy for asr) and yaa if mothers are like to be gazal...then its better to be orphan...hate gazal and asr...just go to helll...

appy i really appreciate that u have taken this to spread a social msg...i will request..please portrait khushi as much as strong...and help her to fyt against all odds... u will have many scopes to portrait an arshi luv story in other ff's but according to this plot...does khushi really able to forgive and luv him any more!! in real i think no!...please stand beside khushi..as well as the real life victims and slap this torture through ur ff...

Edited by awroneema - 12 years ago